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| "Sesshoumaru, sit!" Reviews/Comments [ 158 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Reviewed By: Delu (not logged in) On: January 23, 2005 11:43 CST
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YAY! There's a new chappy AND I can post again!!!! No cliffies?! *cough* would like to remind we have NO idea what Amaya is to Naraku, how she's going to get away, what the deal with her "identity" is, etc etc! You are doing SUCH a good job with the relationship between Miroku and Sango, such a new approach to it and so well written. To bad they'll have a PDA-phobic hanyou with them ^_~ And don't fret about the wait. I'm just glad you came back, I was worried perhaps something bad had happened to you, I'm a worrier like that, so I'm just glad none of my fears were correct ^_^
| Reviewed By: icyjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 02:40 CST
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Wow, I really love this story! Thanks for writing it! Also, I think you're doing very well at keeping Sesshoumaru in character (even if that means he has to be a stubborn idiot sometimes, grrr). The fairy was a very nice touch as well. This story also makes me laugh out loud, which is awesome. Thanks again!
| Reviewed By: Chrissy14 On: January 22, 2005 21:50 CST
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YAY! New chap! I'm jumping for joy here...but poor Amaya!! Yes Sessy is being a bit of a jerk, but that makes it all the more sexy when he's sweet again! (at least I hope he's sweet again) Anyway, I just adore your fanfic, it's awesome! I can't WAIT for another chapter! *dreams about Sessy again..*
| Reviewed By: Kangabee On: January 21, 2005 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is wonderful wonderful!! I am soooo absorbed into this fanfic, I LOVE it!! I am really looking forward to your next chapter...*hoping for another love seen*....heehee...they make such a great couple! I LOVE IT!
| Title: Yes Sit boy Sit!
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story Please add more chapters soon thank you.
| Title: WOW.......
Reviewed By: Melfire63 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I'm not really a good critic, but this is one of the BEST ficsa I have ever read! Plz keep the chaps comin, and keep in touch with the updates! I'm not sure u'd want 2, but I'd be cull if u read my inu fic: Captivated. I also have a Ranma fic, but it sucks. Any way I hope u email me or somethin when u update. Domo! luv, Mel
| Title: *snicker
Reviewed By: Fox_Inu_Koorime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*holding sides desprately* *fails* HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! WHOHEHEHEH!! My God, I don't know where you come up with this stuff. Fat faeries, I mean really, it just makes it soo much fun. Oh, I just love your fic so far, it makes me go: YEAH!! *bounces off walls* Sessho: Baka onna... Me: *sticks out tongue* Sessho: Put that back in or I will remove it. Me: *ignores* *walks over to computer* *types* Sessho: W-What are you doing...?! Me: *cackles* (POOF) Sessho: NOO!!! AH!! *appears in a bright purple kitty costume w/ whisker* Hehe... Gomen, got off track. Newayz... Keep writing this super duper ficcy. Bye for now!! Ja!! Sessho: CHANGE ME BACK!!!
| Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 04:44 CST
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EEK! I hate naraku, that evil bastard! He had better not steal rin...or Amaya for that matter! I must now go torture naraku and Kouga some more in my comedy fic on animespiral, I'm putting naraku in a pink dress! and then he can have a tea party with all his stupid minions, except Kagura cause I like her. I have a wierd imagionation.......it loves to embarass inuyasha characters in the stupidest ways...
| Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 23:09 CST
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It'd be funny if Amaya was allergic to Naraku....or pure evil :) And of course I'd read the next chapter! There's no way you can stop me now! Besides that, cliffies are good for the soul. Never feel ashamed to have your readers jump off them. Heheh. Parsnip
| Title: whoa!
Reviewed By: all_inuyasha_male_character_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 04:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this story, PLEASE keep on writing it! your making me suffer...:-D anyways, if you cant tell, i truely LOVE the story so far and i have it bookmared so i can check it daily for those new chapters *eyes* believe me, your an affective writer lol
| Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 17:53 CST
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Heheh, I love how you made him ALMOST thank Ayama for sitting him in the castle :) Well done! (must finish reading the rest now....)
| Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 10:12 CST
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Yeah I can finally review again(My computer was being evil and not letting me!) Keep up the good work! Dog demon and hell cat? hehe that was funny!Though I'm asuming the "arn't we just perfect for each other" was meant for sarcasm purposes right? Poor sesshy didn't catch that...oh well, GREAT JOB!
| Reviewed By: Delu(not signed in) On: December 27, 2004 10:25 CST
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Aaiieee! Like it? I love it!!!!!!! Wow, what didn't you cover in this chappy? There was humor (Inuyasha hiding from Amaya in the tree, too funny!), awww cuteness factor with Rin, angst with a very well written, I must say, Kagome bringing up the issue of Kikyo to Inu, action with Sesshy and the furry demon, and a fluffy love scene (litereally, with the Fluff! LOL) side note, I found out in a different fan fic that Rumiko actually gave a name to the fluff and it's Mokomoko-sama!! Isn't that a riot?! The fluff has a title of honor! Anyway, I loved how she compared ruining the Lord to her ruining Ah-Un ^_^ One question though, had Sesshy already forgotten getting sat by the time she was in the library to have let her get away without 'comment' on the issue? YAY! I reviewed this chapter!! Oh, and I've been slacking....REVIEW PEOPLE!!!! Kudos to Kyonaria, the yummy peanut butter and chocolate kind ^_~
| Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 22:26 CST
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great chapter once again, I really hope inuyasha sees Sesshomaru being sat though! that would be so damn funny! I can JUST imagion the look on sesshy's face when inuyasha busts out laughing....
| Reviewed By: Delu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 11:56 CST
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Well, my rating now is one review per two chappies it seems...I burst out laughing during the part where Amaya kindly tells Kag and Inu to SIT down and make themselves comfortable. Too funny! The relatives thought I was nuts, but oh well, nothing new. The chappies were good. To be honest, for finding things wrong, I think the only thing I've ever found was a mixed up you're for what should have been a your once So I must say that your grammer has been brilliant in your writings. As for my christmas, I got a scanner printer along with my new laptop, so I might scan some of my (very) beginner drawings in for review and suggestion here at mediaminer (since I had to get an account to review, lol) Hope your christmas was wonderful as well, and keep up the good work! ^_^
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