| "My Savior" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: Phalon22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 22:14 EST
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Miroku and Botan is something different. I like all the couples, maybe Hojo could be Naraku's reincarnation, cuz then Naraku could get his butt kicked YET AGAIN. So no Inuyasha Reincarnation?
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 07:23 EST
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I like the story (after all, Hiei is my favorite pairing for Kagome, after Inuyasha). I did think Kagome moved onto heavy petting pretty quickly from her first kiss but I guess there are extenuating circumstances -- I imagine she still has the feeling that any day could be her last, especially since she is still the guardian.(Here is where I would put in a new paragraph if I knew how) You peaked my curiousity by having Hojo recognize Hiei's youki. Bash Hojo all you like or make him misguided but don't make Kuwabara an idiot because he's not. Remember that when he's making these pronouncements (and sometime failing) he's 14. Also, it take a lot of bravery to confront the same demons as one's much stronger comrades. But you knew that, I'm sure. (another paragraph)One thing I didn't get, is how old the human and demi-human members of the tantei are supposed to be in this fic.
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Reviewed By: Annaku On: February 27, 2005 23:20 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like yuor fic. and your updatig time is ok if a little slow. but the dog collar come on. it seams a little more sutied twards inu-yasha. but inu vistiting him in his dreams really cool. and the bracelets sheer brilliens. please keep updating. (P.S. sorry about the spelling mistakes.)
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 22:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!! PLease update again soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: February 27, 2005 19:02 EST
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OMG I love this chapter you have got to update it really soon. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: ~HIEI LOVERS~ On: February 27, 2005 09:45 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I would gladly help you with your story if you accept. I hope you do. I also liked this chappie.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 11:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I can't believe it!!! You used my idea!!! Wow!!! I'm so glad you liked it. Anyway another great chapter. Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 09:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update SOON!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 23:15 EST
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OoOoOoh!!! I really like this so far! It's sooooo good! Please update soon! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
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Reviewed By: black tigeress On: January 13, 2005 21:45 EST
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I think you did a pretty good job, although it was a little short for my taste. I also felt as if you were cutting things to short, not putting in enough detail or explantions. The other thing that is bugging me is why wasn't Hiei their when Kagome ran into Hojo the first time. All in all I think you did a pretty good job, and I can't wait until you come out with the next chapter. I can't wait to see what Kag is going to do to Hiei with his necklace.
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Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 ** ehh its me again... sorry!** On: January 09, 2005 20:30 EST
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srry bout the spelling in the last ehhh message its IDEAS and ENJOY! Yup and i must say that i re read your story, 1. cuz im bored and ur storys good, 2. I wanted to see if I missed anywathing, and 3. just cuz ya rock!
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Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 **not signed in cuz im lazy** On: January 09, 2005 20:24 EST
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I really like this story and i do hope you continue it! I've got no ideads for ya though, poo! I wanna be posted! LOL. Oh well, I enoyyyy it anyway....
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 17:15 EST
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oh yeah, forgot to say, update soon^^;
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 17:14 EST
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you've got great idears. most of the YYH Inu xovers i've read it was a Kag/Kur pairing. it's nice to see a different possibility pairting! I don't care about your oocness, it adds fun and interest to the story, just don't go too far ooc. then i'll have a few complaints, and not the happy kind, the kind where daggers come flying at your head. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hiei_Jagan_Jaganshi On: January 09, 2005 11:12 EST
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That was really cute at the ending. Nice pairings. Update soon.
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