| "My Savior" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 15:18 EST
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Kagome collared Hiei?! O.o Wow. I thought Hiei would have been a lot more pissed than he was. Hehe. I can't wait to see what the other sd's say when they see that. This is going to be interesting. Hey, i don't suppose she put a subduing spell on it by any chance? That would be beyond hilarious! Hiei: Come here wench! Kagome: Hiei no 'BAKA'! Hiei: plummets out of tree directly onto Kuwabaka Kuwabaka: Kitty? I was really happy with this chapter. Update again soon, onegai? ^_^
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 14:35 EST
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That's just great! What kagome did! I loved it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 18:14 EST
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hehe, cool.
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness*formerlly known as ScentOfLavander* On: December 06, 2004 15:54 EST
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AWWWWWWW!!! how sweet!! More Hiei/Kagome fluffyness!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: firedazzle16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 09:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 10:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love Hiei/Kagome stories!!!!!! Please keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 23:29 EST
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Please update soon! I love this story! I want to know what happends next! And I want Hiei and Kagome to get together!
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Reviewed By: moga wachutu On: December 04, 2004 11:51 EST
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i love your story i can't wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: Aleigh On: December 04, 2004 10:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 06:20 EST
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another XCELLENT chapter...I"m surprised that Sango was so easily convinced...can't wait to see Miroku's reaction to Boton...that would be a fun pairing...hehehe:D
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Reviewed By: Drew Garza On: December 01, 2004 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is really good i couldnt stop reading it, so i was heartbroken when i had to leave to go to my guitar lesson. Keep it up and i'll keep reading... k? ~Drew rockguitar1989@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander*changing pen name to DragonOfDarkness* On: November 29, 2004 16:12 EST
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I dont mind Hiei being OOC so much. Just dont make him cry or something like that. A lot of authors i've read make Hiei cry and thats *thinks of a polite phrase* NOT natural.If something bad happens, he's more liable to get angry than to go off and cry. A sweet Hiei is better than a sappy one. And yes, I think that if you can manage it, a Sango/Kurama, Miroku/Botan pairing would be good! Update soon! ur bud~~aliya
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 15:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappy!! Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 03:46 EST
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I don't give a rats @ss who he sounds like...that was so AWESOME!!! I LOVED this chapter...IT WAS FANTASTIC...can't wait for the next one:D
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Reviewed By: tessie On: November 29, 2004 01:34 EST
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occ? i dont' think so. i really like it. who cares anyway, lol. it's your story, write it as it comes. it's best not to force a story or change it. i love the way you've written them.
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