| "My Savior" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blink* *blink* 0.0 I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY!!!!! It's really good! The only thing is I think Hiei moved a bit too fast I mean... It's Hiei. But I don't care your story is great anyways! Wow let me think...*thinks about first chapter...thinks about other chapters...You know thats a big diference in lenth...I'm happy! At first I could only read the first chapter and it was so short T_T I am really happy that you made the chapters longer!
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Title: Funny fic
Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 00:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a cute, cute fic. You had me giggling throughout the story. Even though Hiei and Kagome are OOC, they are funny and interesting. I do hope you put in a lemon.
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Reviewed By: insane anime On: November 27, 2004 23:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is getting good. and you could always just not add in everyone else.
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Reviewed By: Baradsa On: November 27, 2004 18:55 EST
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i love this story please give me another chapter i'm begging here on knees even i'll be your slave for life just please give me a chapter!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 19:16 EST
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honestly you don't need them..this story is GREAT jsut as it is...LOL...oh man cant wait to see what she will try to surprise him w/hehehe...w/that whole mind reading thing and everything...that was GREAT THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 19:01 EST
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the battle scene was ok w/me...that was AWESOME...but I thought that Kag should be able to better protect her mind
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 18:44 EST
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he slept?? COOL...what did Inu-Yasha do this time???
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 18:39 EST
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oh WHO"s name did she cal;???that was interesting...can't wait to read the next part:D
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Reviewed By: Icey Queen10 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 17:03 EST
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Update soon plz! I love the couple!
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Reviewed By: MaGeoFsOuLs [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 16:30 EST
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i think for ur first time u did fantastic.... u definitly have the whole hiei personality down.... 2 thumbs up from me :-p
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Reviewed By: MUV On: November 26, 2004 01:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a wee bit weird that is the good kind of weird though I think you should add the others however are Miroku and Sango a offical pair? Just would like to know. Anyways update soon. Bye!
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Reviewed By: Michi-Chan6 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 01:29 EST
Comment/Review:
Great fic update soon!!!
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Title: Good.
Reviewed By: w00tness On: November 25, 2004 16:55 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. Keep on updating and make the chapters a little longer! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kasia Faai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 14:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY THIS IS GREAT!!!!!! YEAHHHHHH k so please update this is SO COOL k later. OH and please make the chappies longer PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Title: Evil
Reviewed By: VampLuvah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 10:38 EST
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Gah! That was so evil! You evil evil person! you shouldn't have left it there! That was mean! Well, I hope you update really soon!
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