| "Burning Candles" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this, I want more, more to you here me. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 19:39 CST
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Oooh, nice start. I like the way Heero is almost (but not quite) coping with Duo's 'death'. It's like watching a PC function with the fan broken. It's working but it's starting to lose functionality and you know sooner or later it's going to crash and burn. I loved the way you're showing us bits and pieces of Duo's life through the intervention of his friends - and that his life had problems, and good points too. I wonder...if it had been Heero who had disappeared, apart from Duo, would anyone have come asking? The Quatre/Heero interaction was interesting. I really like Quatre here; he's clear-headed and lucid in his pain, with still a good view on Heero's feelings. I like the way he mentions that Duo had photos of Heero...and then he glances around heero's apartment and shuts up. Noticing that Heero didn't have any photos of Duo...? And what's Une up to? I can't wait to find out more!
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Reviewed By: yanagi(not loged in) On: November 23, 2004 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as usual your writing is so good that it's turned me into a drooling fangirl. Poor Duo, poor Heero. However, if Une was a man I'd cut off something important and fry it.
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: November 23, 2004 15:31 CST
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*o*, how can you do that to Duo, to us? Leaving us hanging until you post another chapter? If they want Heero, why oh why are they torturing Duo? Ahh!!! At least Quatre is on top of things and maybe he can get Heero thinking less about pleasing Une, get off his kester and go find Duo as well as obliterate the bad guys. Une's definitely got some explaining to do. Time to call the other guys in, I think. Great job!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 12:11 CST
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Ok, now I hate Une a *lot*, even if she is trying to stop Heero from charging in and getting himself killed, too. This is an evil, evil cliff hanger and I'd like to request more chapters and eventual revenge, perhaps with a little crow eating from Her Ladyship. Loved Quatre and the money management. And it seems so Duo to have a passel of kids.
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