| "Burning Candles" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 14:49 CST
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AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! I really enjoyed the kids in this story. (Even though they were barely there ^.^ Hee Hee)Heero and Duo were great as always. *Shivers* That was some nasty torture you came up with! It makes one wonder . . . ^_____^ Nah!! J/K!! Another great story, loved the ending. ~Wanders off to see if Cadence has been updated~
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Reviewed By: Mononoke (nsi) On: February 06, 2005 08:01 CST
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Woot. I love this fic. So wonderful, and the ending was great. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 09:46 CST
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Now that was an unexpected ending, but I really liked it. It was offbeat, with a tone of serenity rather than huge declarations of undying love. I thought we were going to have the end in the hospital with The Talk between them. But that would have been a long and awkward scene, as they're not very good communicators >< I much prefer seeing the results. So they're chasing after stolen cars and stray cats, huh? That's good, that you kept the notion of the regularity of Heero's life, as this was obviously very important to his character. They fell back into old patterns, but that's because Duo understands Heero's need to have this, as much as Heero understands Duo's need to help others, and accommodates that. I bet they don't have much free time, but then again, I bet they wouldn't know what to do with more than '50 minutes' here and there ;) They're still not 'normal people'. They just found a balance that satisfies them both and let them live at their own rhythm. Just not having bullets flying around their ears must be as good as a holiday for them. Heh, me like :) Thanks for the great story!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 29, 2005 18:58 CST
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Nice fluffy ending! Loved the story. Keep up the good job!
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Title: Pyrzm
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a perfect ending. Very warm. Hugs!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 05:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have here one hell great story and you edet it. It would be great to read siqual how Duo/Heero are living and watching over the kids.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad this had a happy ending! Loved every minute of it, though! Keep writing awesome stuff like this!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 17:40 CST
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'"Well, it's nice that one crazy Shinigami and a completely repressed super soldier can find each other... right before they die.' "And you even managed to have a son," Jake snarled, "Now shut the fuck up and do something!" ' LOL You tell'em jakie! i'm speechless i just want more!! and very soon please!!! *glomps kracken* i dunno what i'd do with an author like you, thank you so much for sharing!! man i can't THANK YOU enough!!!
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Reviewed By: Stardancer On: January 25, 2005 17:29 CST
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LOVE YOU...LOVE YOU...LOVE YOU You write so good!!! Please post the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Mononoke (not logged it) On: January 24, 2005 04:53 CST
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Wow. How do you sleep at night? You just lovt to torture those two little love birds more than anything dontcha? I love to read it too! So good job, and I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: January 24, 2005 00:54 CST
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Well alright, I can review again. ^_^ Have I told you lately that I love this story? That I love you for writing it? Well I do, on both counts. I think this is the shortest chapter you've ever written, but still, it's got me on the edge of my seat rooting for both Heero and Duo. Keep those chapters coming.
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Title: Short but wonderful
Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: January 23, 2005 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the angst "I probably won't come out alive, so--I love you!" *sob* You better let Heero save him! And no more body parts being cut off! I mean it!!! ;-)
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Reviewed By: Patty 40 On: January 12, 2005 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I have over 30 stories in my mail box @-@.And now I have to review them all..Wow, well you see I haven't been home to read stories.So I am way behind.So now what to do ?There are to many stories to review so I'm doing a mass review .Yah again I know I've done this a few times before and I'm sure you all don't like it but I rather take the time to read the stories ,than take the extra time to write all those reviews .Because you see I have to leave again and I don't know when I'll be on line again..So ok to all of you wonderful writers I have read your stories and your updated stories because some of you have updated 2 or 3 times since I last reviewed you. And I really have enjoyed or are enjoying your stories..Wow that was a mouth full .I'm taking a breath now..~_~I really wanted to let every one know I'm reading every chapter and If this review shows up on multiple chapters or different stories by the same author I'm sorry but I'm doing the best I can ..I'm running from hospital to home and it is whereon me out..So all of you please keep up the good work and so long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading...Patty ..Sorry this is not a very good review..(*_~)
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Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: January 12, 2005 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this one is really taking it out of me. Very squicky, but wonderful stuff! Duo's toughness is amazing. Heero's fall from grace agonizing and deliciously angsty! Can't wait for more! (And finally, MM.org seems to have fixed the review problem!)
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Reviewed By: DestinyLot On: January 12, 2005 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far, I've been reading this fic on FFnet but couldn't review. Anyway really enjoying it. Ja ne
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