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| "Burning Candles" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 00:40 CST
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"Then please be the one to be kidnaped next time," Lol, well said, Heero :) This poor boy really got kicked around by a lot of revelations since Duo disappeared. Mind you, I feel just as sorry for Duo, if not more >< Lol, it's fun to see Trowa's analyses of what Heero had always thought of as a cold, distant routine. Yeah, right, pull the other one, soldier boy. I like Heero's feelings at the end. No doves, no fireworks, no Halleluias in Heero's version of the future, just a calm, quiet routine binding them together. It's a muted but very apt view of love, and IC for this version of Heero. Ooh, the finale soon! Can't wait!
| Reviewed By: priscel 'meeps' On: January 11, 2005 22:53 CST
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heero's feelings gave been given voice, a name he couldn't place himself... love, wow that little word is a signifier for so much more than is definition alone entails... you convey this with many of your stories. I worry for jake but Duo is so much closer to finishing his objective and getting out hopefully with jake in one piece, that boy has a lot of potential and reminds me a lot of Duo *smirks* or solo if i knew more of the kind of person he was.
| Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 00:19 CST
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"Even a Gundam Pilot can't survive long in these seas." That's what's known as Famous Last Words. Sooo, Duo IS working for Une? Man, he really doesn't take on the easy jobs, does he. I wonder what Heero will think of that. He's already pretty mixed up about his reaction to Duo's plight (cue 'aww' mingled with 'ick'). That's going to do his head in. I feel almost as sorry for Heero as for Duo (though granted, it rather sucks to be Duo in this fic :)) I hope Revenant gets his ass kicked next chapter!
| Title: Patty 40
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry it took me so long to review this chapter.. You see my dad is in the hospital so I'm finally getting around to it ..But it is Christmas eve so I have to make it short..I have read your story and loved it and can't wait to read your next update and if you have updated again. rest assured I will read that chapter to..I am trying to read everything in my mail box right now so you might get this same review on your next chapter to .And I'm sorry for that but I am in a hurry to get back to the hospital ...But I need to clear out my mail box first so I hope you all will under stand ...So...Thank you all for your very fine stories and have a Merry Christmas...
| Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 15:42 CST
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'I must inform you that I'm about to pass out' Hahahah! That is so a Wufei thing to say! Great end to the mission. Tough lil' bastards :) Those sixth rate terrorists won't know what hit them (and no, the hostage will never live it down...he must have been drunk or something ;) ) And the ending was funny, tender and hot. Everything you might wish for. Thanks for the read!
| Title: Burning Candles
Reviewed By: Silver_Winged_Saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic Buring Candles (It is the only one I have read yet) but there was something that I found a little confusing. After Honor (chapter 4) was there supposed to be another chapter before Reboot (chapter 5)? It sort of left me hanging. I wasn't sure if you meant for it to be something that we figure out later or on our own. In the end of Honor you have Jake calling up Heero and telling him to get to McKinny's, then Reboot starts out with some e-mail that Heero is tracking with new pictures of Duo. Sorry if I'm bothering you- I just want to make sure I understand all of the story.
| Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 00:41 CST
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Hey i really love this story...i really can't wait to read more seeing as i'm not done reading all the chaps.. and just thought that i would tell u what a good fic u have here so far..well i can't wait to see what u did with the story next and back to reading...lol...ja ne
| Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 19:58 CST
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No, Heero, not the right conclusion at all! Crap, I hope he doesn't decide to return home and wait, now >< It's nice to see Duo's view of their partnership. No Great Lurve, no eternal sentiments, just dependency, a sort of quiet, understated need and friendship...just the kind of realistic, war-scarred relationship I like XD Just screaming to become more, natch, but that'll probably have to wait until Heero can make the decision to check out this so-called operation more closely. Very much looking forward to next chapter! Have a nice holiday in the meantime!
| Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 16:53 CST
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cha... i wouldn't have thunk it, that Duo would agree to this amount of torture for the sake of a bust... a mission. hmm he's becoming alittle more like Yuy ne? I wish could have just told heero though... it's not that hard. Poor Duo will have a few emotional scars after this mission is over and he should give up hope in Jake, i don't think Revanent could get near those kids unless he sent a whole team after them and that would attrack too much attention. Happy holidays Merry KwanzaHanukkah!!! update when you can.
| Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 02:26 CST
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Oi one more thing!! I love your Duo! Despite the crap of them calling him second rate and everytime they think they got his weakness he shows him/them that he not just a pretty face with hair and a butt to match but a damn formidable, intelligent and ardent man. Go Duo! The butts, keep being stupid and thinking that they can break ShiniDuo, pfft! shows them how little they know about the g-boys. And this guy in the shadows... always waiting just outside the door, he's wisen to the g-boys. I had entertain the possibility that he had some connection with Une, heck i was thinking he was Une *i know that's kinda unreasonable* but based on the information Heero found out, Une KNEW exactly where Duo was, had a files profiling his personality damn it i think she knew a head of time that Duo would be targeted. Damn her... I had hoped in the beginning that it was a set up to get Heero to acknowledge his feelings for Duo, haha *sheepishly* I have no idea where that thought came from honest! ok ok i'l stop talking now... need sleep. nite
| Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 02:09 CST
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Thank you doctor! i'm glad that not everyone is an ass munch there but what if that doctor is an allie to the man Reverent reports to? Gave Duo the stuff before the operation to screw with his confidence a bit? Well I hope the doc wa just a good doc and the only way to be sure that the doc lives is if the guy is near duo or Duo knows his whereabouts... *sigh* it's about freakin time Yuy hauled ass to get over to Duo but ya know I have a feeling that by the time they get there that whole place will be in chaos and flames. With Duo screwing the bastards over royally with their own machinations! *wide smile* Maybe Duo might need help getting out after he kills everyone 'cuz i don't think that Duo planned that far in advanced. And man he has tiny holes in his head *shivers* damn them! Update again soon!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Li On: December 13, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY~! I hope to read more... again... real soon! I love this story. I think I've said that before *sweat drop* oh well. Can't wait to read more! ~♥~ Li
| Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 12, 2004 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm going to be sick!!1It's the foot thing way to grose..I think Heero should have taken Jake with him.Well maby he will show up? Please update soon.
| Reviewed By: black beauty On: December 12, 2004 18:22 CST
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Will this story have a happy ending? So far I think that Duo is holding out great! I also like the fact that he is not easily broken and I love your creativity. Keep up the wonderful job and update soon!
| Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 17:18 CST
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Ack, tough scene :P Still, kudos once more for making your bad guys real; giving little details like having Revenant being squeamish (yeah, only a select few weirdos can watch someone get their toes cut off without wincing internally) and the doc having enough conscience to give DUo an anaesthetic, all that makes them real, and that makes the situation, and Duo's trials, much more involving and interesting for the reader than a couple of Bwhahahahah! type Evil Dudes (Tm), who would suspend our disbelief. I love your Duo - sugar in the fuel lines! Lol! He's got very few cards but he's dealing them all masterfully. I like the way he trusted his kids to be okay, even as he's dead with worry. That's true to the Gundam Pilot who would shoot himself or a friend for a crucial, world-saving mission. Yes, Revenant is still dancing to Duo's tune. Duo's manipulation of the situation and the guard was great. And now Heero's coming to get him out (eventually). At this rate, Heero will show up only to see Duo walk out of the burning base and running off to make sure 'his kids' are okay :) (Completely non-relevant detail, but it's 'cleaver', not 'clever', and besides, a pair of shears would probably work better, easier to control and get the cut right - er, never mind).
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