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Reviewed By: Hiroto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 16:59 CDT
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Hm...I'm not sure if I've ever left a review...o_o If I haven't, I'm very sorry. I really should have. I love this story and you for writing it but why have you stopped updating? Please update...T-T
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Reviewed By: RS Sykel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 17:31 CDT
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please reveiw!
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Reviewed By: ensatsukokuryuha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omoshiroi. It seems you know quite a bit of Japanese. Mine would be better had my school's Japanese teacher not been such a baka. Anyway, gomen. I haven't reviewed your story once since I started reading it about a week back or so. You see, I happen to be an incredibly lazy person, well, when I want to be anyway. Anyway, I must say that your story has been very interesting. Though, you do have some grammer/spelling errors. There not too bad in my opinion, though you should try to fix them if you get the chance. Furthermore, I find it intriging how you portray the YYH gang. In my opinion, Yusuke is a little too much of a stick in the mud, Kuwabara sounds a little too smart, Hiei is fine though sometimes sounds meaner than he really should, and Kurama, while kinda sounds a little more up tight and not as kind. But then again, you don't have to take my word for it. That's just merely the feeling I get from reading your story. As for Kira, well, she seems to have more personality than the rest of the characters, not that I'm complaining, it makes sense in a way considering that she is the main character. Mind you, I'm not trying to be mean and this wasn't meant to be a flame so please don't be mad at me. I do enjoy your story, that I do. Well, in either case, please continue writing your story. I shall try to review from now on. Or not... if you do not wish me to.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 22:10 CST
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K, um...I don\\\'t have much time before the invader leprachans come for me, so. Update again soon. Please. K, bye.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 20:13 CST
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nice. loved the falling into the memories thing. her hair cut sounds cute too. Kokuei's memory seemed very interesting. something Kira should find more about for sure. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 19:16 CST
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never give up!!! update again soon! ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: hinageshichankyoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPADATE!!!!!! YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 19:21 CST
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*screams* I love this fic! You need to move the romance along, though... And I think Hiei needs another go in the elf suit! *smiles* LOVE AND PEACE!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 16:40 CST
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i loved this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am so glad you brought Youko out. & that fight was awesome!!! you know, once Youko entered it, and all. Kira's & Youko's reactions to each other were great, too. and then, how she teased Kurama (though she always does) about Youko being hotter than him, now that was funny! this was an overall wonderful chapter. maybe even my favorite so far. keep it up! & update soon!!!
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Title: woohoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 12:28 CST
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this is very good!!!!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelTears [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic very much...You're one of my favorites. It kind of remind me of someone I know on quizilla.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 16:15 CST
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i haven't reviewed this story in ages! great chapters though. i really liked the little moments of fluff between Kurama & Kira. this last chapter was pretty cool too. not to mention you left it at a cliffhanger. though i usually hate those, i'll forgive you if you update soon. please!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 16:15 CST
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i haven't reviewed this story in ages! great chapters though. i really liked the little moments of fluff between Kurama & Kira. this last chapter was pretty cool too. not to mention you left it at a cliffhanger. though i usually hate those, i'll forgive you if you update soon. please!!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 22:32 CST
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Nya! You got me saying it now! Urg... that was dramatic... though making Toshiro-san a pervert was an unexpected move... or maybe not. So, just curious, who was Yusuke telling to get a room? Kurama and Kira? Or someone else? Hmmm... we shall probably never know, though I bet Yusuke's pissed that his soul was stolen... and is going to be digested or something. Kokuei is on his way there, right? So no one can read his diary... *looks over review* I wonder how random I can get at times... Anyways, yes, the chapter title gives away a lot... but the question is, who does the transforming? Kurama? Or another character? Hm... Please! Update soon! I'll be patiently waiting.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 15:25 CST
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Hey, me again. that chapter was a little short, but it's still interesting, so it's all good. Remember to update again soon. I'd say more, but I've got a major (non alcohol related) hangover from my sweet sixteen bash last night. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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