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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 23:25 CST Comment/Review: very interesting chapter. this just keeps getting better. i loved every part of this chapter. the 1st part w/ Kurama & Hiei, then Kokuei(?) & Kira, & Kokuei & Kurama. all of those convos were great. then the thing w/ the Sage Yokai and Kira needing to go talk to the girl is all very interesting. this was a great chapter. keep up the good work & update soon
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 22:51 CST Comment/Review: I know how that feels... I'm writing a story... @_@ or trying to... T_T It's confusing, and as soon as you think you have it figured out, something else sounds better... It makes me want to pull my hair out and generally go insane in public. But that's to exhausting... Wait... shouldn't I be working on it? ....nah. Heh, sorry 'bout that, internal conversations happen at the oddest times, great chapter, I think though, you enjoy killing off your OC's. THough I'm glad Rakura died! ^.^ I just want to tell you, I was day-dreaming(a minute or so ago) and I was like, what if one of Kira's old friends happen to be one of the Sage Youkai? And they were looking for her... I kinda get the impression she doesn't spend too much time with her family right now... or at school for that matter. Heh, I'll cut my rambling, now piece yourself together and type! ^.^
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 21:25 CST Comment/Review: Wait... what happens if Kira forgets the names of the six youkai whose power is in the stone-thingy 'round her neck? During battle? O.O I'd do that... but that was just a random thought that crossed my mind...
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 21:23 CST Comment/Review: *cheers* Yeah! Finally, someone admits that I'm amusing! Hah, take that all you people who can;t get my humor... though I meant that seriously, so I'm not really sure if that was an insult or not... heh. Ano means 'well' right? at least... that's what I mean whenver I mutter to myself. Imadoki's awesome! I want the second volume! T_T Thanks again for calling me amusing, that makes me feel so happy! A great chapter, though I sort of pity Kurama... I have the sudden urge to call him fox-chan... for having to carry Kira home. I just typed a whole paragraph practically... but I forgot to click this again... Ah well, it was just meaningless compliments anyways, stuff you can live without. I think. For all I know your an attention seeking freak, no offense meant(I'm one myself), though I kind've doubt that, you write far to well. Please update soon! I need to see what happens next...
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:42 CST Comment/Review: good chapter. do they even realize that they're acting like boyfriend & girlfriend? i wonder... oh, you know that line in the beginning about Kira 'unplugging herself' from the CD player. yea, the way you said that was weird. she 'unplugged herself'! lol! okay, sorry. but the chapter was a good one. keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_girlfriend120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:19 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: coooooolio! she is alive....... and.... being...........er..... ALIVE!!!!!!!!! ...... UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Title: cool!! Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 21:47 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOVE AND PEACE!!! HA!!! vash is so stupid and yet he\'s the most dangerous man around!!! anywho nice chappie!! love and peace....hmmm...ha..ha...i used to go crazy with that when i got into trouble or wished to cause havoc on the population!! geez, about romeo...you have to kiss a girl?!!!! and u r a girl...right? something is sickly wrong here!!! my new saying is \'god bless a-mer-i-ca!!\' or where ever the heck i am!!! read me fics please!!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 23:45 CST Comment/Review: Kira's third good deed? On her way to Kurama's she accidentaly knocked over a trashcan that an old man tripped over just as two cars crashed nearby and debris went flying where the old man's head would have been, had he not tripped on the trashcan Kira had accidentily knocked over. Actually, I think it's something to do with Kurama, but I'm not really sure. So that was my guess! Your Romeo? Is your Drama teacher insane or are there a lack of guys or something? I pity you. You really have no choice 'bout that... aznd it will make your schedule this much more hectic! Which means this many less chapters! So anyways, you forgot to mention 'feh' 'meh' 'keh' Nn' and 'Nn Hm...' Just thought I'd mention that!
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Title: Ha Reviewed By: Saddness4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 23:05 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is extremely well typed!! i congradulate you in this fic!!! This truely is great. oh..like Yusuke does she need human energy? who will she get it from? Kurama *coughhint wink hintcough* i really can't wait!!!! BRILLIANT!!! please hurry and update and thanks for the review. will you fet some more reviews for me please? JA NE!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 18:19 CST Comment/Review: Well, I say she's taking out all her stress about the finals on you guys! I don't think you learn your score for a while, and these are important tests. So she has a good excuse to torture you guys! Anyways, the chapter... Hm, I feel sorry for the little girl that Kira possessed, and the little girl's mother. I'm wondering who this will play out...It promises to be interesting though!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 23:36 CST Comment/Review: funny chapter. she possessed a little kid? now that's funny! can't wait for the next chapter to find out what 3 deeds she does.
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Title: wow ... good! *chappies 1-13* Reviewed By: DG32173 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 17:45 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i think you can work on your spelling, but your grammer is pretty good. i enjoy the fic! well, keep up the good work and update soon! i enjoy it a lot and hope you continue! Ja ne and i'll keep an eye on you!
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Title: Pyro Reviewed By: raha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 06:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Om my, she's dead? Thats deffinitly new. But in a good way, good luck in your studies. Update soon!
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Title: note Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 21:51 CST Comment/Review: I haven't been able to update this week so far due to finals, but I promise at least two new chapters this weekend...as long as I don't get sidetracked. ~Ja ne
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:01 CST Comment/Review: Now, now, don't agravate the spirit fox too much... he may just somehow botch up your hopes for studying... which would be horrible. Hm, Kira's dead... that's a new twist... not many people kill off their OC's in such a lovely manner... I'm joking 'bout that, so don't take me seriously, on the lovely manner part... not the twist.I think this is actually rather interesting! So, Kira managed to make herself look like Amidamaru? Awesome... I feel sorry for the Ferry Girl escorting her though... ^.^
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