| "Rock My World" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Title: ^^'
Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 18:29 CST
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your brother is going to kill me? well, that just put a damper on my holiday spirit...glad you liked it though.
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Reviewed By: skyfire_katana [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Ha! Loved the song, Hiei's was my favorite part. Hn, (evil grin) my brother's going to hunt you down and kill you for writing it. I'll be singing it all through the holidays, he'll be so annoyed. Don't worry, he'll kill me first.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 21:06 CST
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*hugs plushie* YEA! 'ank you! Amusing chapter... though it isn't common knowledge about Yukina and Hiei being realated... I was typing Kira and Hiei O.o... anyways, Hiei usually threatens to kill someone if they even 'think' about telling Yukina. At least... He threatened to rip out Kurama's voice-box... unless that was a fanfiction and I have finally lost it... But I was laughing throughout most of this chapter, 'especially when it came to Genkai! Merry Christmas! My present to you? E-Pocky. Pocky that your computer eats away!
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Reviewed By: Mistress Of Dragons [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got a few spelling and grammer mistakes here and there but it's nothing that a beta reader wouldn't be able to pick up on and if you need one I'll be happy to help. I love this story so far, but I have one question which I'm sure a few other readers have and one of the reviewers had: Why can't she paired with Kurama? It'd be so cute! Just wondering...
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Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i am confuessed why cant she be with kurma?? *starts crying* hosaki his lover now i am jelous
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 21:08 CST
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'nother good chapter. the 'dream', i guess, is very weird & creepy. but i loved the story of Genkai's past. it was great! i was probably just like Kira during it. update soon!
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Title: !!!!
Reviewed By: YYH_RRK_INY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!!!! it's finally letting me review, it was all messed up before. anyway, awesome job! this is really getting interesting, can't wait to see what's gonna happen next! keep up the awesome job!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaniki Niwa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 23:36 CST
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-shutters- the dream is so freaky ugg.. ANYWAYS i love the fic so far. but..Who is she gonna be paired with?!?! -on hands and knees begging- plz tell! I hope its yusuke ^___________^ heh -pokes you- update soon oh and.. -Gives you Kurama Plushie- ^____^
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Title: HI!!!!!
Reviewed By: DivineSpirit00 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 14:16 CST
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MOSH PITS ARE SOOOO MUCH FUN!!!!! except if you pushed to the ground and trampled on it kinda hurts...but that's besides the point! Keep up the awesome job!!!! ~!@#$^*DivineSpirit*^$#@!~
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Title: HI!!!!
Reviewed By: DivineSpirit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is very original and creative. I love Kira's attitude and how you never know what she's gonna do next! It is very fun to read! I LOVE the plot so far, it's starting to get good, no boring parts at all!!! Overall, this story is awesome! Keep up the AWESOME job and please update soon!!!!! ~!@#$^*DivineSpirit*^$#@!~
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Reviewed By: Hieis_girlfriend120 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 12:51 CST
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i like it! ^____^ this was a pretty good chapter! The soft side of her was scary...MAN!!!! I SHOULD GO TO A CLUB!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE RUNNING INTO TO PEOPLE... MOSH PITS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Hieis_girlfriend120 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 17:35 CST
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i liked this chapter, it was kinda funny!!!! ^_____^ Kurama seems more in character then he is in other stories. Thats really good!! ^____^ Keep up the good work!!!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV IT! U GOTTA UPDATE SOON OR I'LL....DIE OF BORDOM! UpDaTe SoOn
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Reviewed By: Dragon Charm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 00:34 CST
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yea i know it was kinda ooc, but the story line needed to progress and it was that or she got kidnapped by a demon dude, but i don't want her to suffer...yet.
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty interesting story. i like Kira's attitude, to an extent. so far she's pretty cool. & her harrassing Kurama when he was younger is funny to picture. can't wait for the next chapter. i can already picture how hilariuos it'll be. all of them? clubbin? lmao!! oh & it was weird how you had them all talking about the mission & everything while Kira was still there. seems like they would have left or either made her leave beforehand. just pointing that out. seemed kinda OOC to me.
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