| "Lonely No More" Reviews/Comments [ 174 ] |
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Title: leah
Reviewed By: BrokenMortality [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grumbles very bad words* Kuso... it ended. That sucks. Could you work on this fic a little more. I like strength of bond it's awsome but this is more orinal and it just as good. Best of both wordls. I'm truly getttin sick of smilar or the same fic over and over again. This is very refreshing. I love it. Please do update soon.
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Title: continuing
Reviewed By: Kitsu_Kurasei(not logged on) On: January 25, 2005 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On a calmer note, I AM happy that there are still original works out there, but the "ending" (of that chappy) just BURNED. Plus the fact I've already been pissed off to near-tears earlier today, I'm a little sensitive, but reading the earlier reviews, (like, five reviews ago) has given me a sense of calm, so, yes, you are a good and original author and the way this story turns is completely in your hands but that's what bugs me. That feeling of eternal helplessness when your reading a story, knowing you can do ABSOLUTELY nothing to see a happy ending and avoid these pains is the most painful part of all.-Kitsu
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Title: COREECTING
Reviewed By: Kitsu_Kurasei(not logged on) On: January 25, 2005 14:18 CST
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I said enter a second ago, but still, my anger at that chapter is beyond any words I could type. This is my more than anger, so HOW THE FUCK ARE YOU GOING TO FIX THIS!? You kill and eteranlly sadden people I was becoming attached to, and kill off the main pairing so dramatically and agrivatingly, I WILL wait for the next part, but if the wound of this story is not healed soon I WILL react in a way MUCH less calm than I am now.-Kitsu
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Title: Snarl was my own reaction earlier on, but this is far beyond the worth of that.
Reviewed By: Kitsu_Kurasei(not logged on) On: January 25, 2005 14:14 CST
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Reviewed By: Rakuen-o-Sagasu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 02:21 CST
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arggg another cliff..... well heres a review to add up to those 7 reviews you asked for~~~ i gotta figure out what happens!!!!
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Reviewed By: _inujade On: January 24, 2005 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooo, another cliffy..need more *eye twitches* more i say!....Please and thank u with sugar on top:)
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Reviewed By: sesshyluva123 On: January 24, 2005 07:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writting impresses me. It enspires me to learn by reading on in your fanfiction. Your spelling and grammar has definetly improved since chapter one, and I think that you are getting better yet. The originality of your story is infactr... well original. It is very creattive and entirly your own and hands down if I may say so myself. I enjoy reading your fanfiction and it keeps me busy during the day. I am very impressed with how well thought out it seems to be. I gave your overall rating a ten because your story is one of a kind. It isn't every fanfiction that you get that can keep you reading day in and day out. Well I appreciate all the time that you have spent writting this wonderful fan fiction for the publics reveiw. Thankyou and hope to be able to continue your story writting.
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Reviewed By: Rakuen-o-Sagasu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!! pooper! i dunn like Cliffs!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON i gotta figure out what happens~~~~ :D
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Reviewed By: Echoside [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good Fic. Can't wait for the next update to see how they take care of the evil. -Echo
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Reviewed By: Sesshyluva123 On: January 23, 2005 07:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading your fan fiction, and I was wondering if perhaps you and Jinxs may have a few feelings for eachother. Well maybe by the end you can answer that. I like the fact that you have sort of an original story, and that you kind of only used the names of the characters, and InuYasha's apperence. Your stle of writing is not that important, but it is still very interesting to see different writers writting styles. I myself am a writer maybe you can read my fanfiction if I post it. The story itself is a great plot and original which makes it enjoyable to me. A few of your words were spelled wrong but that is okay I used context clues for some, but most were close enough or just an extra a in the word and. So your overal rating out of ten is a fifteen. Well hope to read your other stories if there are any. Thank you for taking the time to read my reveiw.LUVS {LUVS-my trademark he he he}
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Reviewed By: sesshyluva123 On: January 23, 2005 07:53 CST
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I enjoyed reading your fan fiction, and I was wondering if perhaps you and Jinxs may have a few feelings for eachother. Well maybe by the end you can answer that. I like the fact that you have sort of an original story, and that you kind of only used the names of the characters, and InuYasha's apperence. Your stle of writing is not that important, but it is still very interesting to see different writers writting styles. I myself am a writer maybe you can read my fanfiction if I post it. The story itself is a great plot and original which makes it enjoyable to me. A few of your words were spelled wrong but that is okay I used context clues for some, but most were close enough or just an extra a in the word and. So your overal rating out of ten is a fifteen. Well hope to read your other stories if there are any. Thank you for taking the time to read my reveiw.LUVS {LUVS-my trademark he he he}
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Title: Lonly no more
Reviewed By: sesshyluva123 On: January 23, 2005 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading your fan fiction, and I was wondering if perhaps you and Jinxs may have a few feelings for eachother. Well maybe by the end you can answer that. I like the fact that you have sort of an original story, and that you kind of only used the names of the characters, and InuYasha's apperence. Your stle of writing is not that important, but it is still very interesting to see different writers writting styles. I myself am a writer maybe you can read my fanfiction if I post it. The story itself is a great plot and original which makes it enjoyable to me. A few of your words were spelled wrong but that is okay I used context clues for some, but most were close enough or just an extra a in the word and. So your overal rating out of ten is a fifteen. Well hope to read your other stories if there are any. Thank you for taking the time to read my reveiw.LUVS {LUVS-my trademark he he he}
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Reviewed By: Leah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color I'm completly rapt to your story... but I'm missing the laughable comments from the editors... oh well. I also thing that you repeat yourself a little to much during you story. Gets sort of redundant but it still one of the better ones that I've read O.o
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Reviewed By: MiakaRyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry that I haven't reviewed in a while.My college classes started back up. Anyway I love all your chapters but my favorite is 17 with its beautiful and creative love scene. Please update soon and I can not wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: ViciousVamp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! Sorry for not reviewing the other chapters. I had a lot to do. but i think that this chapter was awsome!! can wait to read the lemon. hehehe. write soon! ViciousVamp
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