| "Diamonds Are A Girl's Best Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: alice__grayson On: July 12, 2008 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stick to the story line you had going b4 these last two chaps, it was way better. OC's are just annoying, and so is the whole Grudge thing. When do we see Hanyou Kag, or atleast get back to the good story? call me when that happens.
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just skipped through an entire chapter... i wonder why... oh thats right! you plagiarized from the movie "the Grudge". there was no use in reading it, i have seen the movie. Wow stories would be so much more interesting if EVERYONE plagiarized!! yay!!! you suck. and your story was really good too... but you didn't write that either did you?
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Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzz I GOTTA READ MORE that story is so cooooollllll!!!!!!!! PPPPLLLLEEEEEAAAAZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING MEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 13:50 CST
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hey i just want to say dont listen to the nasty flames. sure theres probaly a few grammer errors, but i dont think that their worth hurtful flames. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 13:38 CST
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i like
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 04:29 CDT
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Is it just me or do the last two chapters seem pretty much exactly like the grudge? But you changed some things with the story line, anyways I think your story is very good so far, please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 17:19 CDT
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ummmmmmm well to tell u the truth the new chap was just plain confuzing...Cheers
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Title: Calm Down
Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, First of all, you started out really well. You seemed to have a major plot down and seemed to be following it and everything. Now, Koga, on the otherhand,he seems a little OC. Did you mean to do that? He wouldn't get tears in his eyes if InuYasha got in the way. Second of all, did you run out of staryline ideas because this whole The Grudge chapter just didn't sit right with me. I think if maybe you re-read your chapters maybe something will spark and you could continue with the original storyline you had. It just kind of got lost. You have a lot of potential, just try not to lose your sight by writing something quick and easy just to get your chapters up faster. Think quality. I know you can do it.
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!!! Please update as soon as possible ! you are an amazing writer! keep doing your thang and PLEASE UPDATE!
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: dk1022 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 00:00 CDT
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I¡¦m really enjoying this fic. I like the writing style and content. The dream sequence was a little shocking. ƒº (not what I was expecting but it defiantly has appeal). I love surprises. Hehehe. The last chapter with the ¡§haunted house¡¨ definitely creped me out a little about my closet¡K.which is right next to my bed. The only thing I would like to suggest is that you tie it in with the other chapters a little more. I almost felt like I was reading a completely new fic. You could do this by adding in a short segment on Kagome¡¦s reaction to the dream or another little part of what is happening with Koga. Keep up the wonderful work. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 19:11 CDT
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wow wow wow wow wow wow i looooooooove the story... it has great suspense, so u gotta hurry up and write more cause the suspense is killing me...Cheers
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Reviewed By: toolazytologin On: May 05, 2006 22:14 CDT
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This is going to seem a little harsh, but it's not meant to be a flame. First, just a little nitpick. The United States doesn't exist in Inuyasha's time. Kagome's time is 1997 (according to the manga), so even if she's going back EXACTLY 500 years, it's only been 5 years since Columbus landed at South America, (the United States didn't even become the United States until 200 years after Inuyasha takes place) and considering how isolated Japan was from foreigners, it's unlikely that any Western couple would live there. And when you take into account that the Western family lived there 100 years before Kagome and everyone gets there the whole thing makes even less sense. And yes, Ju-on was a cool movie, but why try to rip it off in the middle of a story that's about Kouga essentially trying to date rape Kagome with a mystical diamond? It makes no sense. It doesn't advance the plot in anyway, it won't develop the characters. Before this was a pretty decent story, but now it's like you just rented The Grudge and decided it might be cool to put in your story because you had writer's block.
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 14:34 CST
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Besides some of the bad grammar, the story is okay. I hope you keep updating.
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Title: no you didn't
Reviewed By: mama of reviews On: February 10, 2006 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
first you drew me in with a fake summary about i think kagome turning demon....um excuse me where the fuck the demon at i don't see it maybe i should wait or read another fic. you lost me in the begging then it got a little better only at her dream other than that this story sucks. maybe you would have had something with the dream then all this other crap. p.s. you deserve this flaming review for what you did to a would be good fanfiction. sorry :(
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Title: hey ho hey ho
Reviewed By: sesshomarugrl aka sesshywife On: February 10, 2006 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the story so far but you would be better off sticking with the inu/kag side then giving koga any kind of moral in the story i mean he shouldn't even have a story in the series. he's just a mangy mutt who is in love with kagome when she told his dumb ass she don't love him. oh well take my advice i love the story update soon my fellow now fav author
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