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Title: Can't read this! D:
Reviewed By: drkvampress161 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am unable to read he first chapter properly because the first word of each return is cut off somehow. :( But other than that, I really enjoyed it. In fact, I enjoy many of your works so keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Soleil Chev [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 23:07 CDT
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Very nice. a true work of literature! (art just doesnt work for stories;)nice plot, even though i am a little fuzzy on it. but then again, all good stories stray from the main goal to another one of deeper value...or something like that...you know, reading 'How To Read Literature Like A Professional' is really interesting, you should read it. anyways! good job, hope it continues smoothly.
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Title: Well Then...
Reviewed By: RannaXD [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 07:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* Awww it's over! I wanted more! *sighs* Well then since you've seemed to finish A Cross of Blades I don't suppose you plan on continuing 'The Breaking Point' or 'A Kiss for a Prince'... *hint hint, nudge nudge* I'll have your children! I swear I will!! *shifty eyes*
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Reviewed By: baka_juju2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got through reading this fic and let me tell you! IT'S AWESOME! That's all I have to say becuause I'm at a loss for words...... OH! And if you see Inu, tell him that he needs to get back here because I am not cleaning up his mess! That and it's his turn to make dinner tonight. *big grin* Ramen is not an option this time. Bwahahahahaha!
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so sad to see this end. This is probably my favorite story of yours. I can't believe it's over. I loved this story so much. I can't wait to continue reading your other works as well. ^_~
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 17:35 CDT
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*picks jaw off floor* Daaaaammmn. That's some messed up stuff! I sit in awe of your mad skills in coming up with all this and tying it together with such a neat little bow. Now if you can just get Auron into this somehow I could die a happy reader. ;)
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Each chapter of this fic I read is even better than the last. I actually understood when you were explaining about what Kagome really is. I guess that's from me playing the Final Fantasy series, and watching Full Metal Alchemist. It's truly amazing how you've combined all of this together. I would have never thought of bringing elements from Full Metal Alchemist and Final Fantasy together to make a fic with Inuyasha characters. You are amazing! I love this fic so much. I'll be sad when it ends. Update soon! ^_~
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Title: Best AU story ever!
Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 00:31 CDT
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This is one of the most interesting original stories I've ever read. It is so well thought- out and you've writen it so well that I can actually imagine the different weapons, places, and awesome monsters that you've created. I love the idea of the gunblade and the picture that accompanies the story is really beautiful too. Even though it's taken you a long time to write this story - which I don't blame you - since your chapters are so long and incredibly detailed oriented, not to mention very interesting that as person that started reading this story in the fall of 2005 I am not upset by the long periods between updates. You have a wonderful gift for writing.
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The end of this chapter really made me cry. And there aren't that many out there that have been able to do tha. The chapter was amazing, I can't believe it ended the way it did. Anyway, please update soon. OH! but before I forget, I was wondering are you planning on continuing "The Breaking Point" That is one of my favorites as well and I hope you continue working on that one as well.
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Reviewed By: raven of the dark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 07:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such a good story!!! you must continue and upate more often!!! awesome!!! i still cannot believe you made a inu/kik pairing... personally, i hate inu/kik pairing(unless they are miserable). but hey, i am a inu/kag fan, so my oppion doesn't really matter. update, i really love your story!!!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 17:33 CDT
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While it's great that you've updated this story it is really good, I am deeply saddened that this i"s the only one you have any inspiration for. "Second Chances" has a steady steam of reviewers who are dying for you to update it. I do hope you update that one soon.
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Title: A cross of blades
Reviewed By: Easley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooooooooooooooooo cooooooooooooool please write more soon
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Reviewed By: Tanzanite Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 01:07 CST
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can you please update quickly?
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Title: cross of blades
Reviewed By: phish_bon3s On: September 07, 2005 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG girl, where did you go???? All your fans missed you!!! *starts to sob* WAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *sniffle* *blows nose on hankie* ..... I like the new chapter of TCOB, but ART has throughly confused me with his actions. I read the newest story you posted on FF.net. The matchmaker one, very interesting. *strokes imaginary goatee, all thoughtful-like, then realizes that phishbon3s doesn't have a goatee, and phishbon3s is a girl.....confusing* Well, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! *big thumbs up* and hang in there, your fans still love ya!!!! ~phishbon3s (formally momiji-chan77)
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Title: I'm not sure if I already reviewed...
Reviewed By: Takane - not logged in On: September 05, 2005 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story...I never expected to enjoy a Sess/Kag, but I am! I like your writing style and I hope you update soon. I am now sacrificing this person, who I have never seen before and is NOT my enemy, in hopes that you will update faster. *enemy looks terrified, tied to a pole with firewood at his feet as I approach with a lit match*
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 13:40 CDT
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*happy dance happy dance happy dance* Can't believe ART turned out to be so viscious! Didn't see that one coming really. Yay for some Kag/Sess fluff, need more though! *must...feed..fluff...addiction!* ;-) Hopefully everything won't go back to the previous status quo between our favourite couple once they return to the real world. Hope everything in your life has straightened out and you haven't lost anything from the moves. (I swear there is still a box of my stuff missing from when I moved 8 years ago) Can't wait for your next updates!
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Reviewed By: Phoenix31 On: August 15, 2005 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely chapter, as always. I would like to see more Sess/Kag fluff though! Poor Sesshoumaru and Kagome, they need to go back to the outside world. Sucks for them. I wonder how Inuyasha's going to react when he sees how close Kagome and Sesshoumaru are. And Miroku...nothing decent will come from his ponderings as to just what Kagome and Sesshoumaru have been up to those last few months. I'm thinking that he'll be getting smacked a bunch. Anyways, I just decided to pop over to mediaminer and review here. Love the story! ~Phoenix+
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Reviewed By: mk On: July 15, 2005 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the way how you encorporate (sp?) final fantasy series and its elements along with the characters and the complex story line. only a genius could come up with this, update soon man, i gotta read more! p.s. i love your work!!!!
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Reviewed By: silver_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur story, ur the first person I know that can make a Sesshomaru/ Kagome fic and make it sound like it could really happen and still have the charters no too OOC! The way u put the words together makes it really easy to picture what happening to the characters. I hope u update as soon as u can. I'm looking forward to reading Ur other stories. talk to u later!
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 22:33 CDT
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Everytime I get an email saying you're updated I wonder what things you will pull into a chapter this time, and as usual you don't leave me hanging. I love Gippal. ^_^ Yay for progression on Kag/Sess relationship. Can't wait for the next update and see where else you're taking this story, and how the ultimate weapons will figure in and these experiments.
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Reviewed By: SilverShadowKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 20:34 CDT
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Interesting. I got an email notification that you had updated, but I hadn't read this story. So I decided to check it out. Even though I don't know half the things going on here, I'm liking this!! Update as soon as you can, especially on Second Chance!!
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Reviewed By: that was AWESOME! On: June 02, 2005 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude i was soooooooo rooting for kagome to kick ART's ass but sesshoumaru did, even better ^_^ oh yeah and the links are the same heh took me a while to realize it ^-^ great chapter continue!! (only 8 more chapters? HOLY CRAP!!! is there gunna be a sequel? hmmm....)
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Reviewed By: Keyotte [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction is wonderful. I really enjoy the plot behind the story and the characters are true to their creators. I am egarly awaiting your next chapter.
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Title: Zirra Nova
Reviewed By: me was lazy On: June 01, 2005 22:14 CDT
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hmmm *is thinkin* *smoke starts rising out of my ears*.....AH!!!! *pats at head franticly. bad fire bad...note to self, don't think with out a warm up, or your brain will overheat....maybe i could just get some brain coolent...maybe not....anyways, great chapter, interesting what ART did to kagome, food for thought anyone??..hope that god thingy(sorry i have a very bad memory and i feel too lazy to go back and see wat its called) doesn't get out, though that would be interesting. *big stupid silly grin* gtg, till next chapter, and i just love the scene with kags and sessy, sweet and succulant, just perfect. well buh bye, Zirra
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Reviewed By: puritygoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, I still can't get over how good this story is so much detail was put into it! Oh this is my account on mediaminer but on ff.net I'm known as animemoonlightgoddess. I'm glad you finally updated again!!!! Update soon
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Title: haley
Reviewed By: Dragon Rider Menoly [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was such a good chapter(squeaks in delight)this is the best sory that i have ever read in all of the years of fanficion reading i really cant put into words how good i think this story is it doesent rush with the relationships as in other fanfics
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Title: Write more please!!!
Reviewed By: Inu_Girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy this fic so much!!!!It should 1000 reviews!!!People just don't know when something great is in front of it!Your a wonderful writer!=^.^=
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 19:42 CDT
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ooh great chapter, and i'll gladly overlook sessy's OOCness, he wasn't that OOC anyways only a little at the end, :D can't wait for more, update asap please, love the story, sorry about not having any reviews before now, but i've been reading it on A Single Spark till now, oh well, Zirra
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Reviewed By: ice_apparition17 On: April 24, 2005 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay this chapter was excellent!! They're starting to get somewhere, but will the air ship work so they can get out! OMG you must update soon this story is so good! ^_^
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Reviewed By: cutie06 On: April 23, 2005 18:47 CDT
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i love your way of writting you make me feal like i was in the story your awsome so please update i really want to know what happens to sessy and kagome P.S. isnt sesshomaru hot
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