| "A Cross of Blades" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Di On: April 22, 2005 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story! I can't wait till you update the next chapter. I'm also following the same story at Single Spark. sometimes authors update on other sites firsh. But, you are a great writer, I love this story, very original especially since I am a big fan of the Fantasy Series and Inuyahsa.
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Reviewed By: hai hai! (wing_hai) On: April 21, 2005 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! that was fun... write more man! that rocks! that stori is the GREATEST!!! NeWay... This is just sooooo(etc) Cool!!!!!! u write heaps good! i cant wait for u 2 b fin w/ this fanfic!! it majorly rulz! only 1 thing though... there's something up w/ the layout of chappies or summat... the first couple of words r missing from sentences in a few chapteroonies! love Sess and Kag together! love it love it love it!!!!!!! Hope they do 2! hope u do 2! love 2 see an update... CANT WAIT!!!!!! ill be watching for it Striker! wing_hai!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 14:20 CDT
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Ooh i like this story, can't wait for more now that i'm caught up, :D update asap, please. Zirra
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Reviewed By: sesshomaruiyrcutie88 On: April 13, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! please hurry up with the next chapter I really want to know what happens to sesshoumaru and kagome.
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 22:11 CDT
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Hehehe. I love all the different things you pull into your story. Okay, yha we know life goes on without them...back to Sess and Kag! Romance! Fluff! Fighting! ;)
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Reviewed By: Inu_Girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow this is a great fic but when are you going to update second chance and the breaking point?Update soon!!!!!=^.^=
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Reviewed By: ice_apparition17 On: April 09, 2005 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh! Shippo and Sotan that is gonna be CUTE! Anyway it was a good chapter, I'm glad that everyone now knows that Sesshoumaru and Kagome are still alive. I hope they find them soon, or Kagome and Sess find a way out, but I can wait if it takes awhile that way it wont seem rushed. You're awsome! Update Soon! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Farren F. On: April 03, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been a fan of your fics for a while now, just never left a review (I don't think), but now I have time on my hands, so yay! Anywho, I love the way you write, and believe me, I read alot of books, and I would hope my taste in writing style is as refined as an expert critic by now. I really like this story too, just hoping for more fluff *sob*. There's hardly any! I understand there's the story, and relationship factors to put in but I'm dying here! Ok, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: March 23, 2005 17:07 CST
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Ouuuu! Muy muy Bueno! Me Encanta! Sorry, it's this nasty little habbit that I cannot seem to rid my self of since getting back into the USA, haha. Speaking Spanish, that is. But what better reason to be back is there besides getting to read a new chapter of your story? I don't know.. I honestly don't know, haha. Wow. Loved this!!! Everything down to the most minute little detail was fasinatingly interesting. I loved the scenes between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. hehe. I loved that there was a panties dispenser, haha. I especially loved the hospitality program. It was getting a little friendly with Kagomem at first? huh? hehehe. And ah, I loved Sesshoumaru's reactions while protecting over his little Kagome. And ah, I loved this part too: The tricking of Kagome and Sesshoumaru and the pill and the needle. Too bad Kagome didn't let more sli, lol. Something along the lines of how hot she thought he was and maybe something about jumping into bed with him, haha. Ah the possibilities of mortification that one little pill may have brought. Maybe they should give one to Sesshoumaru to unlock the many secrets that he keeps locked so tightly within. Oh the possibilities! I looked at the outfits that you had linked at the bottom and my oh my, they were lovely. I liked having a visual to go off of. Its fun to see what it is supposed to be compared to how I pictured it. Great job! This story is a smash hit and I cannot wait to read more. (Hopefully soon?) Thanks for a great story!!! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: ice_apparition17 On: March 23, 2005 08:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so glad you updated! this story is truely one of my all time favorites. Its good to see Sesshoumaru being so protective over Kagome, I wonder what she is going to say about that, lol, anywho, I can't wait for the next chapter. Update Soon! ^_~
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Reviewed By: luciferangel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello! overall, i really like ur story! very creative. couldn't have thought better myself. i like the way u paired ur characters also. can't wait until the next chapter comes out. will be waiting.
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Reviewed By: Lady_Banshee_999 On: February 13, 2005 12:04 CST
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Er, you know... I just figured out the AP class... LOL. Guess next time I shouldn't try to read the story at 2am. I forgot that a few months had gone by and her rank from her starting 17th level gunblade specialist. *sigh* I am still trying to figure out the rest of it though. Oh, btw, I forgot to ask the other question in my last review. Did she ever figure out that she now has Alexander? Since she was knocked out when she got him? :) Thanks!
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Reviewed By: ady anhee 999 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 23:13 CST
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Oooohh. Sesshy has a wicked sense of humor. LOL! Aw, Shippou and Kagome have a blood bond. But one thing has me puzzled. Acually two things. You have this listed: *** Private First Class Kagome Aurora Higurashi: G. Class A\\ Spe. Rnk 19\\ Neg/CR-MIA *** Captain Sesshoumaru Kenshii Endo: G. Class D\\ Spe. Rnk 29\\ AP Rnk 13\\ En Tec 5-MIA *** Ok, so like what is Neg/CR, AP Rnk 13, and En Tec? I reread the darn thing and couldn't find any mention of it. I thought maybe there was some connection to Kagome's new gunner rank, but it couldn't seem to fit. Just wondering. :) Yeah, I am sort of funny that way. :P Hope this review goes through. MM has been sort of funny lately. *sigh*
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 10:50 CST
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I'm so glad you finally updated!! I hope the next chapter is out soon, so we can know what is happening to Kagome and Sesshoumaru now. And poor Shippo and the others, thinking their dead *sniffs* it's so sad! Update soon... please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: February 11, 2005 23:19 CST
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oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow. I've been waiting and hoping that everytime I open an update e-mail that it would be this story... and this time it was!!! *jumps around for joy!* What a very interesting prediciment Sesshoumaru and Kagome seem to be in. I feel like Kagome will be saying "You have some esssssss'plaining to do" to naughty Sesshoumaru for letting her fall like that, te he he. But maybe they will consider themselves lucky to be alive and will kiss and make up like the good little people that they are, or could be? hehehe. But yea, absolutly adored every single word that you have written, I cannot wait for more and hope to see more very very soon. Keep up the amazing work!! --Aitu
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