| "My First, My Last, My Only" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 15:42 CST
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For a lemon-free chapter, this was great. Take that Inuyasha! I would be freaking out if someone I care about was with someone I hated. I hope that you do update in the near future, because I can't get enough of this story.
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Title: lovin it
Reviewed By: Hopes_fall (not logged in) On: February 22, 2005 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it as always! please update SOON! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 22:42 CST
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This just keeps getting better and better. Will Kagome and Inuyasha ever be together or will Kouga ruinin everything? Come on, you have to update real soon because I really want to know what happens next. Can't wait till you do. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: February 17, 2005 18:52 CST
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ouuuu. How I do love this chapter! And oh how I know love to hate Kouga with all that I am! I think that Kagome should kick Kouga in the face and go live in Inuyasha's room, te he he. Yea, even though it is an open relationship, that still has to hurt--- your "guy" calling some other girl by the nickname that was exclusively yours. Hmm. Maybe Kagome can move to Inuyasha's house? hehe. But ah, to leave new york... But, they ARE saying that Japan is the new fashion hotspot of the world because of all the designers comeing from there. Hmm. Well, loves the chapter to death. Needs more. I am very addicted.. Need to feed the habbit! te hehe. Happy writings! Take care! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: WaterGoddess9 (not signed in) On: February 17, 2005 18:00 CST
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Yet another excellent chapter! Awesome...sweet....delicious! ^^ No angels...no no no. Lol, well take care, and great job! -:-Natalie-:-
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Title: Oh!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess not signed in On: February 17, 2005 17:00 CST
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I really love your story I really do. I want Inu and Kag to end up together already. It's breaking my heart! But you are such a good writer and I won't dare try to tell you how to write your story.
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Reviewed By: watergoddess9(not signed in) On: February 15, 2005 18:21 CST
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Great chapter, although a bit tense. Good job though, keep up the good work! ^^
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 00:05 CST
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Wow.I want more. Need more. Please can I have some more? haha. My, oh my, and what an interuption that was! Im not really sure how much more I can take, lol. I just want them to be together so badly. Is that wrong of me? So if I could have a guestimate tha would be FABULOUS! te he he. You know me, always asking questions that usually can't/wont be answered. I have to wonder-- how will Kouga take all this when/if he finds out. And damnit--- that black box from chapter one still plauges my mind like you cannot even imagine! There's a good chance that I might resort to begging in a few minutes, hahaha. I also wonder how Sango will react. Hell, how does every one react, how, when, and why. Oh, and maybe where-- can't forget that little guy! So yea--- this will most definitly be added to the favorites list.. I will triple check to make sure that it ends there this time so I can get the updates as soon as they come out. Don't worry--- I won't be pulling anymore disappearing acts anytime soon-- except when I'm visiting the Mexican Rivera-- but even then- I'll come back, unless the plane crashes (yes, it tried to do that ones) Or maybe the boat will try to find the biggest waves and crash into some rocks again, haha. And yet I go back, time after time. Okay-- so yes, loves it, and the more I read the more I am convinced that you have picked up a Carry Bradshawesque style of writing. Couldn't love it more. Keep up the fabulous work! I'll be waiting!!!!
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 23:23 CST
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Heart breaking. Finding "them." It's like you know what's going on but you don't want to know because then everything is all right in your perfect little mind. Aw. My heart goes out to her. To them actually. Why can't they just be together right now! hehehehe. Can't wait any longer-- need more story!!!!! (PS--I am sooo having de ja vu right now.. like I've dreamed of this or something... yes. I am weird)
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 23:23 CST
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Heart breaking. Finding "them." It's like you know what's going on but you don't want to know because then everything is all right in your perfect little mind. Aw. My heart goes out to her. To them actually. Why can't they just be together right now! hehehehe. Can't wait any longer-- need more story!!!!! (PS--I am sooo having de ja vu right now.. like I've dreamed of this or something... yes. I am weird)
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Title: Chapter Nine *kicks the "Chapter Eight" title below to the other review
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 23:15 CST
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Yes-- I still have that desire to kick Kikyo in the face. And she hasn't even really spoken yet, hahaha. Oh well. Poor kids, so confused-- why can't they just kiss and make up forever? Ah, probably because then there wouldn't be enough angst to work through for the story, hahaha. AMAZING!! next chapter time.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 23:05 CST
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Oh good god! The drama! I can barely contain myself!!! hehehehehhe. Holy shit girl-- this has gotten sooo far past good! I'm not really sure what to do with myself, haha. Part of me wanted to go Kikyo in the face... oh wait--I still want to do that. And part of me wants to kick Kouga between the legs and send him packing. And ahhh-- Who doesn't love a good fashion week? Chicago's this year was amazing. te he he. Okay, I can't hold my self back any longer-- MUST read what's going on next!!!
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Title: Chapter Seven
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 22:51 CST
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*Gasps for air* Come back Inuyasha!!!! haha. Not only are you a fantabulous writer-- but you have some fierce style! hehehe. So, Kagome want's to be a writer? (or a teacher too, I guess I have to add that in there for the sake of fairness) But I am just really invisioning her as the next Carry Bradshaw (Please tell me you watch[ed] Sex and the City, hahahaha) With the whole sex article that she wrote for a paper in NYC. And oh, how I loathe that Kouga now, haha. I'm sorry, but you've spoiled me and now I only want her to be with Inuyasha. I accidently read in someone's review about Kikyou walking in on Kagome and Inuyasha and I really wanted to be surprised, hahaha. DAMNIT ME!!! And ah, the Crystal Waters' "100% Pure Love." Where do I even start with that-- I sooo had that CD when I was little. I can remember having a boom box (yes, remember those too? haha) And would skate around in my first pair of roller blades with hot pink wheels to that cd for hours-- especially that song. I wanted to be a figure skate roller blader at the time. PS-- Not so easy to do ice skate moves on roller blades, hahaha. Okay, next chapter!!! PSS-- LOVES IT!!!
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Title: Chapter Six
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 22:38 CST
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EEEEEEEEEEEE!! Do you have any idea how excited I was over Inuyasha's return?!?!??! hahahahahaha. Okay, getting ahead of myself-- Love the new friends, even slightly liked Koga although I was just waiting for him to do something bad so I could kick him perminantly to the curb in my head-- and yey! It happened-- And Inuyasha, and Kagome, and them being together-- just seems so right. Onwards to chapter 7!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 22:20 CST
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Awww! Somehow this didn't get put onto my favorites list when I added it, grrr--- So I'm browsing stories and I'm like-- I KNOW HER!!! hahaha, So I just re-read it up to the point that I had before-- and once again, that chapter at the graduation broke my heart and made me cry, haha. Well, on with the reading--sorry for taking so damn long to get caught up!!! hehehhe. YEY! MORE STORY! ---Aitu
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