| "My First, My Last, My Only" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 21:47 CST
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 21:46 CST
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It looks like you need more reviews on this website than on fanfiction.net. This chapter was awsome. But I did kinda expected Kikyo to walk in on Kagome and Inuyasha though. But still you did great on this chapter. Can't wait till the next chapter is out. ANi
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Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 19:01 CST
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So I know that the writing must be good because I'm spending all of my time going, "Oh god, why is Kagome so surprised to see used condoms and feminine bathroom supplies when she knew Kikyo was with Inuyasha", "Yes, but it's different to know it's happening and to actually see the evidence", "Oh, yeah, but what's she going to do now?". Keep it up!! (and your grammar and spelling are good, too, which is nice for me because I notice mistakes and they throw me out of the story. also, no one's doing anything anatomically impossible. yay!)
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Reviewed By: thetaisho'sbrothersmate On: January 30, 2005 03:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bottom jaw touching floor* TWO USED CON...CO....#you knew it was gonna happen# *eyes drop* I KNOW # then why are you so shocked?#*stares shocked at other half of self in disbelief* BECAUSE SHE WENT WITH ONLY ONE DUDEAND HE WENT WITH COUNTLESS CHICKS THE DIRTY FISHTERD.#True but still she was in for heartbreak from the beginning# *looks defeated*I KNOW, BUT I STILL JUST CAN'T BELIEVE HIM.HOW COULD HE?!?! AND AFTER HE TOLD HER KIKYO MEANT NOTHING TO HIM OR THAT SHE SUCKS OR WHATEVER.#he is just so ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!#*looks shocked and stares in disgust* HOW DARE YOU PUT DOWN PUPPY #well he DID deserve it# TRUE BUT SO DID SHE #true# ANYWHO LOVE THE STORY AND CANNOT WAIT TO SEE #you mean read# *glares* LIKE I SAID SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. ITS SO EXCITING #it certainly is# SHUT UP!!ANYWAYS UPDATE NOW!!!!!#yes now# *sends death glare*SHUT UP!!!!
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Title: Eyyy!!
Reviewed By: rocefire On: January 11, 2005 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eyyyy update please!!!!!!!! Italics
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Title: Whew...
Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 07:50 CST
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Oh My God. I'm in love with your story. *Swoons* Well, this whole 'review' thing is finally working, and I can't think of a single thing to say. I can't imagine how awkard it's going to be! And Kikyo! *cries* How sad, he's trying to replace her with a look-alike! Noooooooo! Alrighty then. I hope to see a new chapter really soon! *pauses* Happy Writing! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:40 CST
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You compel me to keep reading with each chapter even though I hate Kagome's and Inuyasha's situation. I admire your talent. Please update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww *wipes a tear* That was so sweet, it's amazing how real this fic seems I got so caught up in it! I love it please up-date soon!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chappie I'm so happy Inu is back and umm...in action lol quite literally *snickers* anyway I'm off to read the next chapter. Bye bye By The Way, LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE the way you through that together also sorry for not reading this week I've been sick and stuff Tired of being sick, and sick of being tired anyway I'm gonna read the next chappie now, amazing work! Love the story!!!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 16:19 CST
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Thank you for updating, though I see heartache ahead for Kagome. I really like your story and I hope to read another chapter soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: _inu_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 20:56 CST
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great chappie! i loved it! inuyashas back, what will koga do?
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 19:53 CST
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Whoa! Inuyasha wants his cake and to eat it too, just like Sango. I don't think that Kagome is really emotionally equipped to do that. She feels things too deeply. She's not going to handle it well when he's having sex with someone else and wants her too. Something tells me that she is going to regret that pinky promise and it will only end up causing her pain. Stupid Inuyasha... Please update again soon! I apprecitate it! Thanks!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 17:11 CST
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I'm so happy they are back together!
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Reviewed By: _inu_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 19:01 CST
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i finished the story in 2 hr to find out what happens!!
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