| "My First, My Last, My Only" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, I started crying, poor Kags, oh well we all go through it though. See so you have a lot of reality in there. Awesome. Well bye I gotta jet please update soon. I LOVE IT!
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Title: Very Good
Reviewed By: Nekessla [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories I've ever read! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: ooh! ^_^
Reviewed By: Hopes_fall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh! I love it! ^_^ this is a really good story. I like it so much it's in my favorites! ^_~ Keep GOING! ~Hopes_fall
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 01:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*takes a picture of her self and sends it to you* Look! Tears! That last chapter gave me tears. You haven't changed a bit. Great story-- glad to see that you're still writing. I'm sure that this one will be just as good as last, hehe. Where do I even start? I just love how you have everything set up, love the plot, love the characters, loved the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha. It was just so true to life like. The last chapter was just heart breaking. hehe- made me cry, lol. ouuu-- I wish they were back together already, haha. I wonder what you have in store for us, will they cross paths in New York? And what was with the black velvet box in the first chapter, which I am assuming was an engagement ring of some sorts.. I'm also guessing that it's not from Inuyasha so can it be and ugly pear-shaped diamond on a gold band? hehehe-- yep, I'm still a dork =P Well, once again, I'm so happy that I found another of your stories and can't wait to read more of it! Great job and good luck with the future chapters. Take care!!! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 20:38 CST
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Oh wow, that was so sad. I think Kagome jumped to conclusions. What if Inuyasha wanted her to come with him? She'll never know because she didn't talk to him.... Please update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 04:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
k, now I need a nice cold shower :) man, that was totally "real-life" like stuff. Awesome job!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww is that the end? Damn it was awesome but I was hoping for some more, I hope you wrote some more stories then because I'll definantly be reading them. You're awesome!
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not logged on) On: December 10, 2004 06:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lover's spats... gotta love 'em... good chapter, and hot too! Please update soon again!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 01:38 CST
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Good! Another chapter and I liked it too. Thanks and please update again soon. :-)
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Reviewed By: Kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I love it! I LOVE IT! Well I hope you update soon because it's just awesome! PLEASE update soon! I've read Chapter 2 as well in fact I read it about 3 times! pPlease udate soon I really love it bye!
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Reviewed By: madelein On: December 08, 2004 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i love the story its good plot andeverything dont get me wrong grammer needs a tune up though the fanfic is good but you left us hanging so keep going the rating might go up
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Reviewed By: madelein On: December 08, 2004 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i love the story its good plot andeverything dont get me wrong grammer needs a tune up though the fanfic is good but you left us hanging so keep going the rating might go up
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Reviewed By: Sunshynesurfer On: December 07, 2004 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I loved the way you portrayed the characters. It is sooooo believable! I could actually feel their connection! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, you so totally rock! You rule! Well if you write a fic this cool, u GOTTA be cool!
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Title: Awww....
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 10:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Such a great story so far. I can't wait for an update.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 05:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it so far! Please update again soon. Thanks!
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