| "Shes only a student" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cattykit (not signed in) On: January 18, 2005 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unoriginal and the grammar made me cringe, but it is still interesting. It reminds me of EmeraldDragon's "Student Teacher Relations (or was it Relationships? whatever)" and although her writing is superb, she is a slow slow updater. I see some promise for this story though I suggest a beta reader. Obviously all your reviewers who rated you as 10 for the Spelling and Grammar category have no grasp on the English language. This story needs a lot of work but it is intriguing. Hope you update soon. ~cattykit~
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Title: Update Soon!!
Reviewed By: Darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I think this story is a great idea!
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Reviewed By: LaDDee_WaRRioR [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 01:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Really well written story you should continue and here's someone else who writes about student teacher thing. It's pretty cool. You should try reading it. These kind of story intrigues me. Any ways I'll see you later
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: December 06, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS HUMANLY POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY SOUNDS SOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! WHAT AM I SAYING? IT IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK (Not logged in, I think) On: December 06, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kewl. I like it. Please update soon. ^_^ Please and Thank You
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Title: please continue the story
Reviewed By: carelove203 On: December 06, 2004 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh your story is really good. i love the whole teacher relationship idea. please update soon. i can't wait to see what happens next.
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