| "Shes only a student" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: April 13, 2009 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great story update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: inuchild On: November 16, 2008 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i looooooove this story i can't wait to read more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: XxRuler_of_the_DarknessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 18:55 CDT
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...I am gonna HUNT YOU DOWN and MAKE you UPDATE!!!!!....LoL..kidding..but seriously please update...or else....T_T
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Reviewed By: innocent_not On: August 30, 2006 04:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg o.O!!! i cant believe that you would just leave us hanging like that T.T Please write more soon ^^
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Title: CONTINUATION PLEASE
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 02:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please say that you're writers block is over and you're going to continue this story. I need to know what's going to happen, come back to the light.
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Title: eien_ni_kawaii
Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
great fic! please continue! can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: eien_ni_kawaii
Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 19:15 CST
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great fic! please continue! can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Shes Only A Student
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha87 On: September 25, 2005 15:12 CDT
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Oh my yes this is the funest thing ever your a fun writer your truley great at what you do! update soon!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 02:45 CDT
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really like this fic. please continue!
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Reviewed By: tiaQ On: September 09, 2005 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NIce fic update soon
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Title: Shes Only A Student
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first I would like to defend CattyKit. Just because someone gives you constructive criticism instead of the one-liners like "Wow this is awesome!" doesn't mean they're flaming you. They're telling you whats wrong with your story so you can make your fic better. CattyKit just didn't sugar coat it. Now, I do agree with CattyKit on several things. Your story does remind me of EmeraldDragon's story, it even has situations in common with it, like Kagome staying behind in his class to get help, and Inuyasha's subject involving math. I'm not saying that you stole the plot from EmDrag, but if you have read that story then you should keep yours as far away from smilarities with it as possible or you could get in trouble. Because this plot has been done before that does make this story unoriginal, there's no way anyone can say different because someone else already came up with this idea plain and simple. The grammar is not as bad as it could have been because I've seen worse, much worse. Spell-checker in Micorsoft Word will get rid of most of the mistakes though, or a beta reader/editor could help you out. In truth you should not be getting "10s" for grammar, but you will get better as you go. This plot is always interesting though and this story could be very good, so long as you keep everyone In character! It will be much easier on you to keep the characters the way they were "born" instead of trying to turn them into people they're not by giving them new personalities.
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Reviewed By: Tweetylover On: June 07, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!Really loved it!Update soon please!(not to be demanding though)!
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Title: i know
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 18:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
i know who she should wake up to. inu yasha!
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