| "Shes only a student" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Title: eien_ni_kawaii
Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 19:23 CST
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great fic! please continue! can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: eien_ni_kawaii
Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 19:15 CST
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great fic! please continue! can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Shes Only A Student
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha87 On: September 25, 2005 15:12 CDT
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Oh my yes this is the funest thing ever your a fun writer your truley great at what you do! update soon!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 02:45 CDT
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really like this fic. please continue!
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Reviewed By: tiaQ On: September 09, 2005 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NIce fic update soon
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Title: Shes Only A Student
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 19:01 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first I would like to defend CattyKit. Just because someone gives you constructive criticism instead of the one-liners like "Wow this is awesome!" doesn't mean they're flaming you. They're telling you whats wrong with your story so you can make your fic better. CattyKit just didn't sugar coat it. Now, I do agree with CattyKit on several things. Your story does remind me of EmeraldDragon's story, it even has situations in common with it, like Kagome staying behind in his class to get help, and Inuyasha's subject involving math. I'm not saying that you stole the plot from EmDrag, but if you have read that story then you should keep yours as far away from smilarities with it as possible or you could get in trouble. Because this plot has been done before that does make this story unoriginal, there's no way anyone can say different because someone else already came up with this idea plain and simple. The grammar is not as bad as it could have been because I've seen worse, much worse. Spell-checker in Micorsoft Word will get rid of most of the mistakes though, or a beta reader/editor could help you out. In truth you should not be getting "10s" for grammar, but you will get better as you go. This plot is always interesting though and this story could be very good, so long as you keep everyone In character! It will be much easier on you to keep the characters the way they were "born" instead of trying to turn them into people they're not by giving them new personalities.
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Reviewed By: Tweetylover On: June 07, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!Really loved it!Update soon please!(not to be demanding though)!
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Title: i know
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 18:40 CDT
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i know who she should wake up to. inu yasha!
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Reviewed By: JuJu aka whoobonhooaglo On: April 16, 2005 13:41 CDT
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Woo! My bet is on Inuyasha!*crosses her fingers* Let it be that sexy, sexy man! I mean, who else could it be? Anyone else and, in my opinion, Kagome could be considered a whore who does not know how to hold her liquor. But, maybe I am just looking way too into this. Afterall, it is only a story that you seem to be pulling "out of your ass," and quite nicely if I might add. The best ones always come that way. Please carry on with the story! I know writers block can be a bitch, but if you think about it, there are still a lot of things you can do with this story, if you so choose to do so.Wow, I only have about 850 characters left.Amazing. Now, as for ideas on what you could do next, try putting in some more class time and some attraction going on between Inuyasha and Kagome. For example, Inuyasha could be explaining something and little movements that Kagome does could turn him on, or vise-versa. Also, it would work just THAT much better if Kagome woke up to find Inuyasha there. Or, if you do not want Kagome to have had a night of passion with the man she likes so much so soon, you can have the person be Sango! And no, I do not mean some lesbian action went on. I am simply saying that maybe she went home with her friend; the friend who didn't want her best friend going home with some stranger. So there, you have a couple of options there already. Need more? Ask me! I can help. haha That's my way of helping people & grammar. Now, I have to end this because my limit is done
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg omfg omfg please tell me she ended up in bed with InuYasha!!! please? he said he was going out clubbing!!! well i can't wate to find out what's gonna happen you very evil for leaving cliffys!!!! GRERRRR..... well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: Shes Only A Student
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 18:28 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: DarkAngel1992 On: March 10, 2005 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grate story plz up-date soon! And yes i love the twist! I hope it's Inu!
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Reviewed By: tiger girl On: February 11, 2005 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
It ain't all that bad but it's not good. I seen this storyline a bunch of times and trust me it's getting old. The pace is a bit too fast and you have a lot of spelling/grammar mistakes. I dunno overall I think it was rather dull and lacked substance.
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