| "The Love of a Priestess" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Phersule On: May 17, 2005 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awesome Chapter , I really liked this chapter. PLz Update ASAP
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Title: Absolutly great ^-^!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie (not logged in......again) On: April 29, 2005 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The more you write, the more interesting it gets. I can learn a lot from you! Your style of writing and combining the story with the rest is just fantastic! Now the series with Dartz is coming or have I not understood something? But I am very interested at the Duel things she will lear on her way to reach her destiny. So please continue your fic and keep up and I wish you luck at your current position!!!
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Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story pls update soon.
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 21:39 CDT
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Of course I read a wedding chapter! I'm a sucker for fluff! (Provided it's not TOO sappy. ^^0) O_O Oh. My. Freaking. Gawd. Woman, I MUST know where youget your inspiration from, because I am in DESPERATE need of whatever inspired you to write this brilliant chapter. OH MY GOD I loved it! The beginning was so realistic- I could actually imagine all this happening in my mind (especially Duke's comment about his 'beautiful face'), and the ending was soooooo goddang SCARY! It was- it was- it was- I don't know! Ack! Scary! I would dearly love to be able to write scenes like that and be so descriptive! YOU ROCK! *mad glomping ensues* You must must must must must must must must MUST update! Or I will freaking DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Phersule On: April 12, 2005 08:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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hmmm that was scary.... I don't understand the whole story, because English isn't my language. I love youre story plz update ASAP
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Title: Great job and good chapter!!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie (not logged in) On: April 12, 2005 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think that was much like Kaiba, leaving her all on her own! Typical in my opinion, but the memory was kind of strange and even to me frightening!! The pain was perfectly explained, even the feeling she had when all the others came down to have breakfast. But I do wonder who all these people are who helped her from the floor?? Well, if you continue, I will see. ^-^ Please keep it up and dont worry, the next chapter will peobably come flying at you in the exact perfect way you write and express feelings. SEE YA and please UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 03:57 CDT
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Yaaaaaaaay! ^^ That was soooooo wunderfol! All the- the- the- stuffy stuff! U_U0 Well, I mean, how you got all the elements and stuff just right- like Mai, Tea, and Serenity dressing her up (very fun scene to imagine), and the fact that Kaiba's not a morning person (goody for him, me neither), and Yami at the wedding... and all the other stuff that I'm not mentioning! ^^0 Loved the whole atmosphere. Fluffiness is good for the heart. Leaves you all warm and cuddly inside! Squee! ^^ (Please excuse me for not making my review longer, but it's 5 in the morning- or maybe 6 in the morning, DST is confuzzling me- but anyways, it's fecking early and I was straining my brain to write this much. I wanted to write more, but my eyes hurt, and... yah. Fecking early. ^^0 I'm such a dumbass for being up this late anyways. ^^0)
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Reviewed By: Phersule On: April 02, 2005 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay an update... Great Chapter.
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Title: WONDERFUL!!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 06:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It must be a hard thing to write a wedding thing story. I could have never done that! You have a great writing style especially towards feelings, I could not help but feel happy for her as she got married to Kaiba, even he was soft in the end (for me hard to imagen) and Yami did not seem overly happy for her. I still like it though, the seen in bed, the dressing style and the happiness all of them feel, is just like in real life. I hope you can continue with this story, it has more to it then meets the eyes and mind itself, at least that is what I think. Thanks for such great work and insperation. Good luck with your school!! and I hope you Update very soon ^-^!!!!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 08:40 CST
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Oh- meh- SQUEEEEEE! ^^ I luuuuuuuurved this chapter! It was soooooo sweet! All the emotions, and the sadness, and Mokuba is so kawaii! Nee! Adorable little Mokybu! ^^ (Pet name for him... ignore it... or don't. Whatever.) *cough* But that was so well-written! All the drama and stuff! And I hate tight shoes, too. XP Bleh. (I'm trying to be descriptive here, which is hard when you consider that I haven't slept in the past 26 and a half hours. @_@ Oro...) This chapter rocked! You SERIOUSLY have to update REALLY SOON! I'm HOOKED, goddammit!
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Reviewed By: Phersule On: March 25, 2005 07:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Great chapter plz. update a little sooner, i also read this story on fanfiction.net :D i think this is a really great story.! (oh yea , my english is terrible :D)
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Title: WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie (not looged in and with time!) On: March 25, 2005 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am just ........baff. I never imagened something like three words could be so hard to say, at least I awaited from Kaiba, but seems like even he has a weakness!! This story is really representing feelings, that is what amazed me in the first place! Some fan fics might be funny, but some people just dont put their heart into like you do, that is what draws me to this fic, the feelings!! I hope you UPDATE soon and go on with it, it means a great deal to me,...........thank you ~_~!!
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Title: Woo..xD
Reviewed By: YamiAtemu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 05:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fairly interesting story. Confused me a bit but I think I understand it now. As for your next chapter, it better be coming up soon ;]
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 18:52 CST
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Yay! You rock! I can keep reading it! Thanks bunchies! ^^ Wow- this girl is going through some surr-ious stuff. Poor thing. I think she'll make it through! Yesh! ^^ Once again, you rock, and please continue to update! (Btw- it's all right that you haven't read my fic, I know it's long... ^^0)
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Title: ^-^very good!!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie (not logged in) On: March 15, 2005 06:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is unbelieveblely good!!!! Your storys touch souls and plus that give motivation for other writers too (in some way, well at least to me)The more you write the more earge I get to write something, strange huh??? But anyway, the memory you hid now was really good written (I know sounds pervertic) so Update soon and have fun writing, that is all that matters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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