| "The Love of a Priestess" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Title: Wow, really amazing
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was unique, that really was, I liked it, but the fact that she gave herself the fault for everything, that she had failed so many times, it makes it harder too see threw the story plot, especially sincve she had all three dragons? Wow, confusing but great, thans for Updating anyway, I can wait. JUst never give up that is all I ask for, have a great time, be careful!!
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Title: Very Talented
Reviewed By: Darkness Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I recently came across your fanfic and i loved it. The way you write keeps the reader interested and wanting more. I love the way you have let your characters grow and let their true emotions slowly emerge. I waited until the last chapter available to review, for that i apologize since i know it would have been better to comment on every chapter. Again very well done and cant wait til you get another chapter up. ^_^
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 10:04 CDT
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Awwwww- TT_TT That was SO SAD! Poor Mai! She's so confused and scared! I wish I could help her! I really understand how the girl is feeling right now... *sigh... desu* Erk. Valon. I'm not sure what to think of him... he's all cocky and mean and stuff, but I think he really wants to help Mai and this is the only way he knows how- but it's still selfish of him to think that he's the only one who can protect her- erlack. Love makes people do crazy things. (I should know. ^///^) So maybe he's being mean. Oh well... he's still hot, anyway. At least he's got that going for him. XD *cough* So! Very sad chapter. I applaud your writing skills. *applause* Please, feel free to take AS MUCH time as you need to update. I am in no position to tell ANYONE to update faster. -_-0 I really need to start working harder on my fics... geh. Finding inspiration is so hard.
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Title: Hey! Another good Udate!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the new chapter, though sad that Mai HAD to go to the other side. The Doom Saga is quite harsh in such case....poor Mai. I hope though that you continue the story I really enjoied the last chapter even if my INternet is nearly recked (English version, really slow -_-') Enjoy writing further on and thanks for the Update!!!
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Title: I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Reviewed By: Demonic Dragon Mutt On: June 22, 2005 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I'm sorry if for not reveiwing before because my computer starts acting strange and it won't let me review. Great story!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 18:51 CDT
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KYAAAAAAAAAAA! *explodes* I am so sorry for not reviewing sooner! I've been sickeningly busy with all this end-of-the-school-year crap that I've had to deal with over the past three or so weeks... gah. @_@ *collapses* Oh wow... this is just great. I think you're portraying Kaiba perfectly. His home life and all, tee hee. ^^ Admittedly yes, Dark Magician Girl was sort of OOC, but I don't care. I'm not a pro at getting people in character myself, and you're doing a wonderful job with everything else, so it really doesn't matter. Yae! *huggles* And these visions just keep getting darker- and yet, more interesting! And Kaiba's sexual side emerges! AHHHHH! XD I felt so sorry for him when he got back from the tournament... he was stressed and tired, and he had a crapload of- well, crap- to do at the office- and he had knots in his back and circles under his eyes- POOR KAIBA-KUN! T_T *sigh... desu* So you did a good job on that scene to make me feel so sorry for him. And Dartz is a SCAWY MAN! *twitch twitch twitch* Ooooooh- and I want to find out what happens with Mai! But it's okay, take your time updating. After all, you can't rush genius, ne? ^^ Again, I'm sooooo sorry for not being able to review and you are a fantastic writer. This fic is ROXOR! *falls over* Itaiiii...
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Title: ^-^!!!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting more intruging as I thought! You are really good at that adn that with Seto Kaiba! Didn't imagine he would ever say that *smiles*. A wonderful new chapter, I nerally missed it because of school! I hope you update your wonderful story, it has something very addicting to it and the plot is unbelievingly clear now thank you ^.^!! Please Update!!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Phersule On: June 16, 2005 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter ;P
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Title: Yeehaa!
Reviewed By: Phersule On: May 31, 2005 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Finally a new chapter... Jippie i'm so happy... :D Ahum.. "Awesome Chapter".
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Title: Thanks for Updating ^.^!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really more intruging as I thought it would be! Every chapter collides with another and everytime new questiones are brought up, which I personaly, would love to know and am willing to find out! Just kep the stuff up you are doing and good luck, the story is turning out more then fine in more then one ways ^-^!!!UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE AND THANKS!!
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Title: Wonderful job!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie (not logged in) On: May 27, 2005 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never really told you how well you do in Updating the other story's you have already written, the story is getting more and more mysterious and nobody really had a conclusion on what will happen in the future chapters. GOOD WORK! Keep the writing up and thanks for doing this!!!
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Reviewed By: Erin-Chan (2lazy2login) On: May 26, 2005 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This fic gives me the goosebumps! It's so sad, and so mysyterious. It's so cool!
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Reviewed By: WitchhunterRnotogedin On: May 18, 2005 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! pls keep it up! i cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: AMK from Zinzibar 12 On: May 17, 2005 16:05 CDT
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Uwaaaaaaaaah! *mad glompings* This fic keeps getting better and better! It's so- so- I don't know! *attempts to calm self down enough to communicate opinions* It's so- intricate, I guess would be the word. The way more and more stuff keeps happening. I'm trying to keep up with it all! It's so exciting! *frenzied circles accompanied by twirlies* There's so much detail I could explode! But I can't explode until the fic is over, or I'll never find out if she becomes a better duelist than Yami, Kaiba, and Joey! Or if she learns how to control the seal of Orichalcose! (sp?) Or all the other stuff that might happen! YAE! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON! *falls over*
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Title: Fantastic!!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie (not logged in) On: May 17, 2005 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am understanding now a bit of her destiny and fate. You are doing a great job in writing this and am glad when you Update! I could never see it like youn write it, so it astounishes me. I like the way you write about the High Priestess ant the other characters, it just gives me a great feeling in my heart, who knows why. Thanks for writing and please continue.
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