| "The Love of a Priestess" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Title: o_o!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly a........chapter!! Believe me, I never knew you could write like that!! Surprises come and go!! Well, it was a very good chapter and probably the longest one aswell! I liked it even if it sounds a bit pervertic to most people!!! Keep on writing like that and you will have more visiters (I just like the thought of Seto and Yami being love rivals to a girl ^-^) UPDATE SOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AMK too busy to log in On: February 26, 2005 17:20 CST
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Sorry for the short review, but I'm in a hurry- sorry! Nee! I can't wait to see the memory! I'm so- um- excited and stuff! Update soon! Gotta run! Bye!
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Title: Short, but great!!
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fic is getting deeper in thoughts, and I wonder what kind of memory she will be having. This is the first fn fic where Kaiba and Yami do as them selves, like in the episodes! That is really rare in fan fics!! And I hope you continue the work you are doing now and Update a lot!!!! And remember to never give up on things, even if people give you flames, it is one of the most nicesest story I have ever read!!!
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Title: No worries
Reviewed By: Persian On: February 25, 2005 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry bout a thing, this story is really, really good! Very different from most stories I usually read. Just continue on this course your in right now.
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Title: Well????????
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I just like the entiry story really, the sad and thoughtful parts make me really think about the story propaly and the good times just make me feel happy. This story just makes me feel different as when I read other story's and that is what I like. The sad and the happy parts, I just live with the story when I read it, sounds funny doesn't it?? But still that is the way I feel about it and that is why I read it, it makes me feel different, so I hope you Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! And good luck with your Mikrosoft Word problem!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: AMK at 12:30 on a freaking Saturday morning (good Lord, I have no life) On: February 18, 2005 23:39 CST
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Um- what do I like? Well, I like the tension at this point in the story, and I think the plot is ver well thought-out. I also like the uncertainty- will she choose Kaiba, or will she choose Yami? Conflict is one of the things that makes all writing good, and you definitely have it in yours. So, what I'm basically trying to say is that what I like most about your writing are the strong feelings of the main character. The only criticism I have is that the chapters could be longer- but you update a lot, so they even each other out. Just keep doing things at your own pace, and you'll be fine. (Wow, I'm actually being descriptive in a review. *ducks as a flying pig zooms past at Mach 5*)
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Reviewed By: Eminette (aka AMK) On: February 11, 2005 15:53 CST
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S'up? Yo, I'm Eminette, that's the female Eminem, yo. ^^ I can explain- see, I'm white, and I go to a majority black school, and we had to write a rap last week in music class, and I actually managed to write a good one! So then this boy called me the female Eminem, which I found hilarious, especially since my initials actually are M.M. BUT enough about my random life. *cough* Awww! Joey and Mai really are one of, if not the very, cutest YGO couple. So sweet! ^^ Good to find another JxM shipper out there. Nee! Ohhhhh- rehearsal dinner coming up! I'm sooo nervous! You have to update soon so I can find out what happens!
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Reviewed By: Lady Nightshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 21:32 CST
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I absolutely love your fan fic. Its really interesting and amazing. I havent read a good one in a very long time. I can't wait to see more of your story. I will be sure to read it and sign your reviews again :)
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 17:38 CST
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Baaaaaa! This is getting goooood. Very emotional- and- emotional. Yah. *sweatdrop* Ignore my poor, cheese-deprived mind and update! Me needs more emotion! ^^
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 15:26 CST
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Mouuuuuuuu! Poor girl! T_T So saaad- bwa. *sniff* Update soon! *glares at Kaiba*
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 12:52 CST
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Bah! *sticks tongue out at evil non-reviewers* Ignore them! I know how it feels to have a bunch of people visit your fic and then you only get a few reviews... *sigh* Such as it is in the ways of fanfiction. -_- But don't let that stop you from writing! This is a great fic! And the triangle of luuuuurve continues to grow... ^^ Keep writing! I MUST read mooooore!
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Title: GETTING SUPER!!! (stupid title -_-)
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I have been Reviewing quite a bit here, but I find your work very inspiring for my fan fic, but unluckily I live in a boarding school from Sunday night until Friday night and that is very harsh, especially if you want to write a fan fic and I am in a writer block! So you have 25 chapters now, I must admitt I have never read something so sad, but then it is a great fic!! I hope it ends alright and please keep up with the work you are doing on it I really appreaciate the work you put in these fan fics!! (PS: dont mind the spelling mistakes please and Update soon again!!!)
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 21:01 CST
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It's okay- I understand the busyness. My teachers are trying to overwork me to death! Gah! (Seriously, I have six projects due in the next three months, one of which is due this Thursday and I still need to find a costume for it... *_* Get me out of this hellhole!) As for the funniness- psh! There are plenty of funny fics out there. Occasional humor is fine, but serious fanfiction is appreciated too- and, for those of us seriously aspiring to be writers (me) it's the more important kind of writing. So don't worry! Do things at your own pace! God knows I'm busy enough that I won't get mad at you. (Not that I would anyways. ^^)
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for the next chapters!! I think you made a great deal of Seto Kaiba showing some feelings towards you´re character!! I wish I could write like that, but mine end up more funny then I wanted it to be!! So keep up and I am already waiting for the end of it!! See how her destiny leeds!! Please Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*deeeeep breath* YAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY! Yay yay yay! Excellent story! Muy grando! Si! Muy bien! XD YUGI IS KAIBA'S BEST MAN! That is fricking HILARIOUS! Ahhahahahahahahaha! *snicker snicker* You musht continue! Pleash! Thish ish magnificat! I shtarted reading and I wash drawn in! (Thish ish my Sean Connery impreshion, jusht sho you know. Shorry for any difficultiesh in reading it.) But seriously- nee! Continue!
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