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Reviewed By: shanana-cantlogin On: March 02, 2005 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is an awsome chapter it REALLY explains alot about hidden feelings and the child too. i must say i am very impressed by this chapter!!! i cant wait until the next chapter.!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 19:28 CST
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I review, I want you to write more. I gotsa send the link to my friend now, so more comments for you.
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Reviewed By: shanana/cantlogin On: February 27, 2005 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awsome (heh i luv ur little poem on the bottom of the page. wow possessive much? i mean come on after today ppl have to notice sum VERY huge connection with hiei and the child, but ur doin a great job at writing! cant wait!!!
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Reviewed By: vanzvire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 22:54 CST
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i love the story, please continue!
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Reviewed By: rasmus On: February 21, 2005 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am speechless this is a superb story continue it please
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 02:03 CST
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ok id like to say i love this story!!!!!!!!!!! plz update soon
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Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lya[out logged] On: February 14, 2005 16:59 CST
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weoo i love this story, its so sad and so sweet!!! and yes i would like to read more so i reviewed, and i like the poem that made me! ^__^ whoop whoop
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Reviewed By: AnneMarieh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHAHA! I like that little 'poem' you added at the end for us poor readers. It was amusing. I truly like this story. It is very good. There's never been a story like this before, with Hiei being so possessive. But I guess it's just in his nature! ^_^;; I hope you don't mind if I leave long reviews. With all the hard work and effort you put into this story, I think you well deserve it. Is the child Niobi growing close to Hiei or something? It seems she can sense him, and it's obvious that she's just as attached to him as he is to her, if not more than Hiei. Anyways, I hope you update again soon!! I hate waiting forever!! Keep up the good work! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: psychogirly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 18:47 CST
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hi! this ficcie is sooo good and i especially like the little "review" poem at the end of CH 4! haha kute.
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Title: OMG!! ONCE AGAIN!
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 21:23 CST
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once again you have done such a wonderful job!!! jeeze louize....how do you do it!?? i love it! yay! update soon!! WEEEEE!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I think I need a hug. This is soooooooooooooooooooooo sweet! Update soon. Hiei loves the small girl so much. Did Erik commit sucicide? This has been Kuramas Gurl thank you, goodbye.
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Reviewed By: shanana-cant login On: February 01, 2005 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo very interesting!! possessive huh, that is such a hiei thing, i love this! the feelings seem so real! well keep writing!
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Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 04:05 CST
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An odd setup, but incredibly well written. I shall be holding my breath for your next update.
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Title: that is so good!
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 22:52 CST
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wow. poor child! omg...i can't believe that happened. good thing the guys saved her! everything is looking up now, right??? TELL ME ITS SO!!! PLEASE!! UPDATE SOON!
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