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Title: .........
Reviewed By: tea~ On: August 21, 2005 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story.. it's weLL-written (though there are a few grammaticaL errors here and there.. but who cares?..right?^-^") and you've somehow managed to capture the characters' personaLity and put them in another dimension.. it's probabLy the best daa!x3 fanfic i've ever read.. it's been too Long so, i hope you can update.. thanx! ^-^;; ja!
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Title: >< *sniff*
Reviewed By: Liang [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is certainly nice...you've improved your style of writing enabling the reader to picture the scene more accurately..but of course...there are still some typos.. I really liked the "so soft" part about Kanata-Miyu..it was funny..*teehee* and the last part of the chappie, where Kanata confronted Miyu kinda reminded me of someone special...*blush* -///- Well...anyway, keep up the good work and progress!^^ God bless...^^ ps:oh yeah, 1 more thing...the part where Miss Mizuno had her long speech 'bout the teacher-student thingy, the topic and everything else was kinda "repeated" over and over again..something like that...Ü 0_o
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Title: comment
Reviewed By: natsumikun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great! i love you're fanfic but too bad because they broke up but pls. update another chapter and make them end up with each other thank you.
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Title: pls. update
Reviewed By: justine On: July 22, 2005 04:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it because it reminds me of something and i love kanata to be a math teacher becuse math is my favorite subject.kanata so kawai!!
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Title: update plzz!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 1412 On: July 12, 2005 06:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
update plzz!!!!!!!!!!!!update plzz!!!!!!!!!!!!update plzz!!!!!!!!!!!!update plzz!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz On: July 12, 2005 05:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
may kamuka siyang fanfic hehehe... :D update soon!
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Title: it is so great that it made me cry!!!!
Reviewed By: Justinesokawaii08 On: July 06, 2005 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so great! It made me cry
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Reviewed By: huhu On: July 06, 2005 05:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
i can't wait any longer! please update na! huhu!!! i really can't wait! sorry for being so impatient pero bitin na talaga ako... :D peace! :)
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Reviewed By: abib On: July 05, 2005 06:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ei tpos n b i2? kc btin gus2 ko c Miyu at c Kanata p rin! update sooner K? congratulation sa board ha!
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Title: so perfect!! (i think....)
Reviewed By: mio_amakura_ On: July 05, 2005 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
konichiwa! i really liked your fanfic! ive never read anything like it before! i really like the flow of their relationship even though it's kinda...... this is the very first fanfic ive been thingking of printing... so i can read anywhere.... you see the others were boring.. well.. that's all i wanted to say! more powers! ope ur creativity keeps going! JA!!
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Reviewed By: huhu On: July 04, 2005 08:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
sad but still very nice! i hope they get together soon! can't wait for your next update! don't keep us waiting! ;)
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Title: Nice...
Reviewed By: CR (Not the bathroom type) On: July 04, 2005 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. Question: I wonder why the story caqn be funny and gross att the same time... Anyway, I hope my dad doesn't notice any of this... Oh well! I wonder when UFO Baby will show again... Whatever! Nice story! Not really creative because my sis always watches movies like that... Oh well! This is my first comment tooo write here so congrats! You get an imaginary cookie! XD Enjoy while I go skipping around like a paranoid girl! (PS Please don'tt make fun of my name!!! It can be funny but it's nof for me!!!) Heh...
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Reviewed By: Hitsuji On: July 03, 2005 09:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY!!!??? i just finished reading chap 14... it's so sad.... but i still love it!! (^_^)
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Title: hehehe
Reviewed By: Mitsuki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 17:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter :) You finally updated! yahoo!! *jumps around like a madman...er woman* Anyways, I noticed that there were quite a few grammar mistakes that were kinda hampering the flow of the story a bit...so if you want, i can help proofread your stuff or help in some other way. :) P.S. DON'T FORGET TO UPDATE SOON!! Much loves
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Reviewed By: garfield08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 09:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAHOO!!! UPDATE!!! thanks for updating! you make me feel so happy! *tears of joy!*
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