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Reviewed By: Hitsuji On: March 07, 2005 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More!... update soon(^_-) Request: More ROMANCE SCENES
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Reviewed By: Hitsji On: March 07, 2005 04:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Want more lovey-dovey scenes! Still... SUPA NaYZ! Watz next??!! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: mar25n_rlc On: February 24, 2005 05:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sO... cOoL!!! upDate soOn!
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Was cute XD hope you update soon, cant wait for the next chapter ^^
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Title: Great..
Reviewed By: Darkhood (Kyuubi9) On: February 21, 2005 02:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry that I used another name (I'm too lazy to log in) well... the story is good but... what about... Santa ?
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Reviewed By: Chiaki Nakamura (hehe) On: February 19, 2005 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oniisan...Just wanted to er, comment. XD; I liked the chapter as much as the other chapters, pero may nahalata akong problema sa iyong writing...sana di ka ma-offend... Minsan, ang gamit mo ay present tense, tapos minsan, past tense. Medyo nakakalito - pero er, I don't really mind. Hehe ^_^ Then out came none other than a blond haired male. He brushed his hair with his hand, and then sets his eyes on Miyu. He smiles then walks over. "Awww, Kouzuki gets all the hot teachers!" "Man, that stupid whore." "Hello, ladies, Who is your friend?" the guy asked cheerfully. Parang ganyan. Past tense yung last statement ni Hikarigaoka, pero diba nauna ung he smiled? So paano nangyari yun...present tense yung "He smiles..." tapos after about a few chatter, magsasalita sya, na naka past tense. Di mo gets review ko, noh? XDDDDD. Wag ka na nga lang makealam sa writing style mo, ok lng naman eh. >D
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!! keep it up its super good ^_^ Its super cuuute hope you update your next chapter soon XD!
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Reviewed By: hitsuji On: February 15, 2005 04:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super NICE! Want to know what happens next... I Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Hitsuji On: February 15, 2005 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue the story... really awsome!
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Reviewed By: mar25n_rlc On: February 11, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
harlowS!!! i just love you fanfic!!! its sooooo kawaii!!!! continue writing & update soon!...
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Reviewed By: Mitsuki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 12:37 CST
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nice story (in short..god mm is so screwed up..)
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Reviewed By: Mitsuki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 10:05 CST
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err i meant to say "I
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Reviewed By: Mitsuki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 10:01 CST
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I
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: ragnarok_totg [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 08:24 CST
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just checking if this review got through
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Title: cute!
Reviewed By: AoiFurin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 11:04 CST
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Another daa3 story! we're really growing!!! Hmm...is the fic AU? I'm quite confused at the first part. ut I still love it! Kanata's so cool!!! erhm...about what happened to the teacher...I'm quite afraid...I'll become a teacher two years from now and I don't want it to happen to me...-_-; Eneweiz, great fic! I hope you'll update soon (don't take after me...I'm a bad influence.)
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