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Title: confusing but sweet
Reviewed By: kristal3xy On: April 08, 2005 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its very very fun to read.... i understand the actions that they are making.....the reason that i said "confusing" is because i can't picture kanata older than miyu... but it ok (because mizuki is the one appearing in my mind)... hahahaha.. i would like to read more... plz. update soon... and i guess that they will end up in the same ROOM again and have their business (they didn't follow their deal because miyu says "with cheerleader clothes and naked" but this time she's not wearing a cheerleader outfit but a pajama, and kanata isn't naked, he's also wearing pajama)i hope that will happen in the next chapter.. can't wait plz. update soon (and also plz. make a scene that kanata will be jealous..)plz.. ja ne... i love the story.. (if i can print this.. i will print this...hiihi good luck!!!
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Title: update..^_^
Reviewed By: tel balits On: April 01, 2005 04:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sometimes offended with some of your words (no offense man! just a critic;) but still.. i like you're diction and what's important is the reader's enjoyment,, keep updating! it's cool to read your fic..^_^
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Title: update..^_^
Reviewed By: tel balits On: April 01, 2005 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sometimes offended with some of your words (no offense man! just a critic;) but still.. i like you're diction and what's important is the reader's enjoyment,, keep updating! it's cool to read your fic..^_^
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Title: hate to login.
Reviewed By: Kryuzei (kyuubi9) On: April 01, 2005 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. Anyway, is there any other plot ?
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Reviewed By: Hitsuji On: March 30, 2005 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I just can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Mitsuki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 19:35 CST
Comment/Review:
another great fluff-filled chapter! ^.^ btw, in japanese, "to be continued" is actually "tsuzuku" in romaji...just letting ya know~ ^.~
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Reviewed By: kanatasyaoran12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is cool man I really like it I hope you update soon.. this is the first fic I've ever read and I started only reading it this month (march, before you posted chapter 10) so I had a great time reading it all in one day ^_^ and PS: anyone interested in daa! daa! daa! music's and video's just e-mail me at jamikomendoza@yahoo.com ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hitsuji On: March 25, 2005 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Hituji On: March 19, 2005 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE! uPdAtE! uPdAtE! uPdAtE! uPdAtE! uPdAtE!
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Reviewed By: Hitsuji On: March 19, 2005 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too good for wordS! when's the next update?
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Title: Sugoi!
Reviewed By: Jeggers On: March 19, 2005 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yur fanfic is soooo fab! I love reading and reading it all over and over again...and it's such an entertaining read! please continue and update the fanfic, I can't wait to finish reading such damn rocking story! ü
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Title: Way...
Reviewed By: Williams Clan On: March 19, 2005 04:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, great story you got there! hope you update soon.. im guessing pinoy ka rin.. ur story's original and i know na mas marami ka pang makukuhang review.. keep up.. oh yan nag-comment na ako.. update ka na! hehehe..
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Title: i dont know???
Reviewed By: mar25n_rlc On: March 18, 2005 06:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hArlows!!! the truth is, i haven't read it yet, bUt i kNow itS going tO be a niCe cHapTer AGAIN!!!! Just teLLinG yOu in aDvaNce tO upDate SoOn....!
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Title: Woo~
Reviewed By: Chiaki Nakamura On: March 18, 2005 03:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay yay yay! Update update update! Nice chapter. XDDDDDD;;;; I
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Reviewed By: Mitsuki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 20:30 CST
Comment/Review:
hi! i love your story so much! I was just wondering...why does the names sometime switch from kanata and miyu to syaoran and sakura? well, anyway, i hope you continue it soon! ganbaru zo!!!
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