| "Why Not" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Title: PLS UPDATE
Reviewed By: forget it (julie) On: September 12, 2005 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLS UPDATE OR I'LL COME TO YOUR PLACE AND TWIST YOUR NIPPLES.
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Title: hay!sa wakas!
Reviewed By: abib On: September 11, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
galing naman! yehey! nagupdate ka na! yahooo!!! It's my birthday! hehehehehehe sobrang kilig naman talaga nang fic na ito pakiramdam ko nanonood ako ng soap...huhuhu..cute talaga ng story at the same time ang ganda pa! keep up the good work! your the best! luv your story! update kaagad ha! sobrang ganda kasi!!!!!! LUV UR FIC SUPER!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!! UPDATE SOONER!!! I'LL BE WAITING FOR YOUR FIC!!! KANATA AND MIYU FOREVAH!! KILIG DIN SI SEIYA!!!HAHAHAHAHA LUV U!!!!
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Reviewed By: greEntea~ On: September 10, 2005 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaaahhhhh!!!!.. YOU UPDATED!!!!.. and here i was, thinking that you would never touch your computer again and update the greatest D!3 fic that i have ever read.. thank you so much!!!.. everything has definiteLy improved.. from your way of writing to the whole story.. i know it's too much to ask for, but i hope you update soon.. nyaha!! thanx again.. ^-^;;
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Title: YEY!!! i almost thought you left us!!!!
Reviewed By: justinesokawaii08 On: September 09, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorelieved to see Chapter 15!!! I thought you would necver update again! Unfortunately, there were no Miyu and Kanata-sensei action at this fic but enyweyz all the same! I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU DID UPDATE!!! KEEP THEM COMING! ILOVEYOU
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Title: YES! AT LAAST! FINALLY!! *gawsh kilig too..!*
Reviewed By: Liang [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last! *OMG!* I finally saw an update!Ü I've been waiting for sooo loongg...^^ and finally!(WHEW!) I've seen that you revised the other chappies and corrected some typos... but there still are some errors that I saw... but then who cares?! I really love your story... it's improving every new chapter! *yeAh!!* Your skill in writing is also improving...[I'm lovin' it™] *teehee* and I saw a different side of Kanata in this new updated chap.. and I really like it, as well...XD I also see the semi-smooth flow of the story.. it seems to me that your feelings are also part of the story you write.. I kinda feel it y'know..^^ I see potential in you becoming a good writer someday...who knows? =D That may happen! ^^ Hehe..well anyway, God bless and wish ya good luck! Keep it up...^^ hope to see an update soon! >.< Godspeed...^_~
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Reviewed By: YEY! On: September 08, 2005 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
i just finished reading chap 15 and it made me kilig to the bones! sobra! i realized seiya and miyu looks good together pala! but still miyukanata!! ok tnks for the wonderful chapter! update soon! :P
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Reviewed By: YEY! On: September 08, 2005 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
AT LAST AN UPDATE!!! YEY!!!
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Reviewed By: =>Not kNowN=> On: September 08, 2005 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter..!!! kanata still shows that he cares for Miyu..!!! kawaii!!!!... cant wait to know what will happen next..!!! ur da best!!!
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Reviewed By: Chiaki Nakamura On: September 08, 2005 10:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter a lot. Indeed, if Kanata is Miyu's sword, can't Seiya be her shield? :) That was sweet... poor Seiya, I love the bloke. :D xD And woaaah, a Seiya wearing boxers...
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Reviewed By: bAGZ On: September 03, 2005 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY. But if you really care for your fans who worked so hard to make a review please update soon. Soon as in by the time i check your fanfic again there's a new chapter posted! (^_^) can't wait! and once again... I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY
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Reviewed By: san na chap 15? On: September 02, 2005 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update na!!! di na ako makahintay!!
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Reviewed By: sUppI [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Ang talented mo naman gumawa ng story. Sikat ka na nga sa mga anime lovers d2 sa skul ko, kasi haaay....KILIG! grabe...lahat kami nag-aabang para sa next mong chapter! Pero hindi naman kita hina-hassle noh! Keep up the good work! More kili-kili power..eheste... power to you! ^_^
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Title: .........
Reviewed By: tea~ On: August 21, 2005 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story.. it's weLL-written (though there are a few grammaticaL errors here and there.. but who cares?..right?^-^") and you've somehow managed to capture the characters' personaLity and put them in another dimension.. it's probabLy the best daa!x3 fanfic i've ever read.. it's been too Long so, i hope you can update.. thanx! ^-^;; ja!
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Title: >< *sniff*
Reviewed By: Liang [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is certainly nice...you've improved your style of writing enabling the reader to picture the scene more accurately..but of course...there are still some typos.. I really liked the "so soft" part about Kanata-Miyu..it was funny..*teehee* and the last part of the chappie, where Kanata confronted Miyu kinda reminded me of someone special...*blush* -///- Well...anyway, keep up the good work and progress!^^ God bless...^^ ps:oh yeah, 1 more thing...the part where Miss Mizuno had her long speech 'bout the teacher-student thingy, the topic and everything else was kinda "repeated" over and over again..something like that...Ü 0_o
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Title: comment
Reviewed By: natsumikun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great! i love you're fanfic but too bad because they broke up but pls. update another chapter and make them end up with each other thank you.
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