| "Why Not" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: chachachacha On: May 04, 2005 08:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Rather farfetched, and out of character. Nevertheless, a rather nice fic.
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Title: SO HOT!
Reviewed By: garfield08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 23:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey! your fanfic is so hot! haha i mean really hot! haha i love it mehn!!! better than mine! hahaha your fanfic is way better than mine! haha UPDATE SOON! i'm excited! what will happen next? oh yeah...!
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Reviewed By: undecided On: May 02, 2005 19:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
please! oh please update!!!! sooner?! later?! just please update!!!!!!! I really love your fic..
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Reviewed By: kanatasyaoran12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update plzzz!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ely On: April 30, 2005 22:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi kuya! mihihihi... this is "elizeimari"! I lub ur story... please update soon!! *u* i wonder why christine is with kanata... hmmmm...
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Reviewed By: Chiaki Nakamura On: April 29, 2005 06:25 CDT
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:) An overall enjoyable chapter, the 12th. Some unecessary capitalization here and there, but heck... it's fun to read. : ) I loved the first flashback. XD Was so funnnn~ MiyuKana~
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Title: update plzzzz
Reviewed By: 4689 On: April 25, 2005 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update plzzzz update plzzzzupdate plzzzz plzzzzzzzzz!!!!!
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Title: update please!
Reviewed By: kamisama On: April 22, 2005 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update plz!
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Reviewed By: kanatasyaoran12 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Hitsuji On: April 20, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON........plz.
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Reviewed By: Hitsuji On: April 18, 2005 04:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update plz,,,
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Reviewed By: kanatasyaoran12 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey plz update sooon!!!
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Title: confusing but sweet
Reviewed By: kristal3xy On: April 08, 2005 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its very very fun to read.... i understand the actions that they are making.....the reason that i said "confusing" is because i can't picture kanata older than miyu... but it ok (because mizuki is the one appearing in my mind)... hahahaha.. i would like to read more... plz. update soon... and i guess that they will end up in the same ROOM again and have their business (they didn't follow their deal because miyu says "with cheerleader clothes and naked" but this time she's not wearing a cheerleader outfit but a pajama, and kanata isn't naked, he's also wearing pajama)i hope that will happen in the next chapter.. can't wait plz. update soon (and also plz. make a scene that kanata will be jealous..)plz.. ja ne... i love the story.. (if i can print this.. i will print this...hiihi good luck!!!
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Title: update..^_^
Reviewed By: tel balits On: April 01, 2005 04:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sometimes offended with some of your words (no offense man! just a critic;) but still.. i like you're diction and what's important is the reader's enjoyment,, keep updating! it's cool to read your fic..^_^
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Title: update..^_^
Reviewed By: tel balits On: April 01, 2005 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sometimes offended with some of your words (no offense man! just a critic;) but still.. i like you're diction and what's important is the reader's enjoyment,, keep updating! it's cool to read your fic..^_^
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