| "Gohan's Unfortunate First Time." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im kind've with BIG_DADDY with this one. That particular part around the middle of the story almost made me vomit. I really would've thought that Piccolo should've come, seeing as you were following the storyline of the Saiyan Saga. I think your a good writer but please dont do anything like this again.
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Reviewed By: Darkspinesonic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you are good but this story is creepy.
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Reviewed By: Stalinist13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read this again, and it's just as good as before. You have the personalities of the characters down PERFECTLY... it's crazy. Very great job, very unique!!! Everything is perfect!! Thanks for writing it!!
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Title: Die...now...sicko...>0
Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
O...M...G... ...no...just...no...please, delete this fic. I had to physically refrain myself from vomiting when THAT part came along...*shudders*. Because of this fic, I now HATE lemons. Good job, idiot. The world would be better off without this catastrophic abomination of a lemon. Die...now...
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Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 17:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
well. i must say that was very different. deifnatly not something that is much on here. it's not my type of sexual tastes - but the initial idea behind it is intresting (chi-chi forceing herself upon Gohan). i would had done it differently and not in the disgusting-porn style(i did kinda skim over a couple parts of it to be truthful). but to each his own. definatly felt for the child.
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Title: Nicely written fic!
Reviewed By: Stalinist13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 02:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, this fic was excellent! It's good to see someone write a fic that's definitely different then the usual fics written. I've always pictured these two in this kind of situation but could never find any kind of fic involving it. You got the way I'd see Chi Chi in her situation perfectly, and I enjoyed this fic! I'd love to see a continuation!! Nicely written and congrats on this one!
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