| "Cats, Crutches and Babies? Oh My!" Reviews/Comments [ 134 ] |
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Reviewed By: GravityPull (too lazy to sign in) On: February 17, 2005 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh...my...GOD Chapter 7 was fuckin awesome!! i can't truly EVER say just how much i love your fic... i've laughed, i've cried (well i think i did), i've had tears of pure joy... damn this fic is just beond(sp?) amazing! and the damn overall rating only goes to 10 well i'm giving you a 30 anyway!! PLZ KEEP WRITING Q_Q
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Reviewed By: Carrot On: February 14, 2005 22:59 CST
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Now this is the part where you hit me and call me silly for attempting to review in the first place. In other words, I made a HUGE error in my previous review. You'll have to forgive me for that, at least I hope you do. Anyway! Instead of "Also the fact that the fic is jumping with random bursts ..." I meant to put "Also the fact that the fic is NOT jumping with random bursts ..." -sighs- I know I'm silly. I was just trying to express that your story wasn't filled with radom stuff that in no way relates to the outcome of the story, or how the characters devlope.
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Reviewed By: Carrot On: February 14, 2005 22:55 CST
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Hmmm, well I think it about time I stop by, just for fun you know. Plus this is the first time I've actually caught you on a day you updated so I'm quite pleased with myself. As a reward I choose to leave a review. I've got to say I love your story and the fact that you stayed nicely in character when it came to our pink haired friend. I can actually imagine everything you describe him doing. I mean a lot of people try to capture him and do a really poor job of it, they just go with the classic annoying thing. I mean of course he is annoying at times, it's one of his major characteristics. Yet people always use the wrong kind of annoying in my opinion. Of course my opinion isn't universal, but hey I'll blab it around as much as I can. XD Anyway! You have captured Shuichi perfectly. As for our cold hearted seme, you've got him down pretty darn good as well. I really like how the entire fic has a very cannon feel, at least I thought so. Also the fact that the fic is jumping with random bursts of explosion and wow factors where the author tries to make the fic more "interesting" yet only succeeds in creating a burst of unrelated events strung together only by the fact that the main characters somehow end up having sex ... ah the mysteries of fanfiction. In other words I thought you fic was an easy read not over-flowing with events which just aren't needed to enhance the story. Let's cut to the chase, nice fic, good characterization in my opinion, please continue.
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is too cute, and from the title I'm guessing that Shu-chan is either going to become pregnant, or they're going to adopt a kid! Well I hope you update soon, I love this fic so far, and good job at keeping Yuki in character, cause in most stories I've read authors have a hard time keeping Yuki in character!!! Well update soon, k!
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Title: yayness
Reviewed By: fairykayzee(Its really me, I just couldn't log on right) On: February 14, 2005 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol.. I was little hyper when I wrote my last review..lol.. thet was prolly obvious.. but I was sooo glad when I saw u updated.. I enjoy this story ALOT...lol.. but yeah..
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Title: ARGHHHH!!!!
Reviewed By: fairykayzee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! OMG!!!! lol This is seriously the most entertaining fanfic I have EVER read!!! I was laughing soooooooo much and I enjoyed it like crazy, no other fanfic thus far has givin me this much enjoyment! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!! LOL And you have such good writing skills too, there really amazing.., so WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!
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Reviewed By: fairykayzee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE ur story, I have only read capter1&2 and I am hooked! I love how Yuki treats Shuichi in these...YAYNESS! lol :-P
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Title: That was awesome
Reviewed By: Liorou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, very nice job. Will there be more PLEASE say there will be ^_^
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Title: omg!!
Reviewed By: GravityPull On: January 27, 2005 15:06 CST
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OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU STOPPED IT THERE!!! T_T it was just getting really good!!! i love this fic!!... Ski!? yuki? and shu??? XDDDD and yuki's gonna teach shu how to!! this is gonna be great! *lmao* UPDATE ASAP!!!!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 15:17 CST
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Hey Sorry u haven't heard from me in a while but hey great job on the updates! ^_~ I really like the way this is going. I hope you do too and ur other readers as well. *laughs* Now just one more thing for me to say. Nothing really important, well actually it is...well...um...how do I say this...well...okay...here it goes....HURRY HURRY WITH THE UPDATE!!!! I WON'T BE ABLE TO SURIVE WITHOUT UR UPDATE!!! *deep breath* wow that relased a lot of energy. I hope I didn't scar ya. *grins* Ja'ne I'll try to keep in touch.
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Reviewed By: Shizuo~Chan (love101) On: January 16, 2005 18:04 CST
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yuki is scary when he's under stress...so glad *I* don't live with him...poor shu...i hate traffic jams...you have to sit for loooong periods of time, and your butt gets sore...i'm feeling sorry for the guys right now^^. well, hurry up and update...yeah, you know...
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Reviewed By: krazykate On: January 15, 2005 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this fic was completely adorable!! I absolutely love it so far. I was sad because, for some reason, when I first looked at it, i thought it had like five chapters, so then....it didn't. I was all like, 'all right, on to the next!' and then...nope. You must update SOON, I order you!! lol.
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Reviewed By: Shizuo~Chan (love101) On: January 13, 2005 16:39 CST
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yay! you updated! shuichi cracks me up! so does how well yuki knows shu^^...i'm happy you're going to update soon...that's what you said, i keep your word for it....
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 01:13 CST
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Shu and Yuki are so cute together...i'm happy that you're going to update...quickly i hope? well, hurry and update! this is an awesome story!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 18:14 CST
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Yeah I'm the 1st reviewer. Hehehe I loved this story. I would like to see more. Yuki is sooo hot and Shuchi too when he's not whinning...I think I spelled that wrong. Oh well. I loved this story and I hope you do more I really really do. It was fantastic. Good job ja'ne
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