| "Cats, Crutches and Babies? Oh My!" Reviews/Comments [ 134 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angela On: July 27, 2005 12:51 CDT
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I finished reading the FAKE mangas! (except the 7th one, of course) I LOVE the ending of the 4th one with Bikky and Carol! I squealed! It was SO cute! I LOVE BIKKY! They did have sex, right? Cause I read it and was like, "YES! They did it!" then the voice inside my head was like, "They might not of, you know...it sounds like they are going to...but you can't be 100 percent sure..."
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 *not signed in* On: July 06, 2005 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up your story is one of my all time favorites! I hope Ryu and Tatsuha relationship helps Ryu!!! And I thought it was so sweet that Yuki let Shu have him...that's love! Well update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next...and as for Hiro anybody can be his lover but Ayaka and Fujisaki because that's just nasty!!!
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Title: Sorry for now, but I'm only rating the first chapter right now. :3
Reviewed By: Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As said in the title, I only read the first chapter. I'll review what I've read so far. First off, congratulations on so many reviews! o_o I've only dreamt of having this many with all the stories I've written. (It's every writer's dream; trust me.) Now to the actual story: I was able to enjoy the first chapter for what it was worth. So far, I'm not seeing a solid plot, but the events were enough to fill a chapter and make it interesting throughout. I don't usually read blatant yaoi fics, and as with anything I read, I was skeptical; but you did a good job to successfully grab my attention with just the first two lines. They were written with style and a firm grasp of... hm... *thinks of the right word* ... finesse? Yeah, that'll work. xD Also, as a random side note, I was very into Gravitation a little over a year ago so this isn't exactly me just paying you back for reviewing my Panzer Dragoon fic. I did have some incentive to read it due to actual interest. (Btw, I haven't read enough Gravitation fics to rate it on originality, so I'll wait until I read more of your fic to do that.) Well, I've babbled on enough. In short, it's piqued my curiosity, so I'll check it out more when I have more time. It did enough to make me curious to see where it's going, but I wouldn't say it hit me in the face with how great it was. That's not an insult, btw. =D All in all, good job so far. ^^
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Reviewed By: Traumatic BunnyRabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 05:43 CDT
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OMG... You did that again. Now I'll be wearing that stupid smile whole day long.XD I love when Shuichi is suddenly on top, I really love it! And the lemon itself was as good as always. Now I'm waiting even more impatient for what you'll do with Ryu and Tatsuha. You really made my day!XD Now go to take another shower and write some more! Hungry Traumatic BunnyR =3
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Title: Helo again!
Reviewed By: Demonic KareBear On: June 29, 2005 14:07 CDT
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Hey I went to the A-Kon and people asked about the ring and I told them about this story. You might have some new fans! Whoa, I feel loved and A bit special, I got lots of attenchin didn't I? I have already read What If? It was really good I didnt know you wrote that one! I cant stop blushing from that whole thing... *Hides* Im have some pictures, but my scanner isn't working and I didnt bring my digital camera. Im really sorry about that... Anyway, I hope you update soon and another thing. GO RYU! Have a good day.
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Reviewed By: YAOIFANGUY06 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you ever considered writing for Maki Murakami. I know I am not an expert, but I could definately see Maki drawing that into her Manga. And you have such a gift. Not many people can make me visualize something that is going on, besides Dr. Seus, and that's because that man's a genious. Anyways, this fic was real good, and I can't wait to see what happens between Ryu and Tatsuha. Keep writing and update soon. :)
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Title: Chap8
Reviewed By: Yoshi Moshikoko On: June 27, 2005 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um hello again. Bakayasha you are so mean i want to read more and i would if i didn't have wedding photos to pic up. I love your story i'm so happy its finally happening. I piece of advice I miss the little action bits before the story with Inu, of ryu og mr. bear well g2g Loves yah Yoshi
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Title: chap7
Reviewed By: Yoshi Moshikoko On: June 25, 2005 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about not reviewing in a while. I got married the weding was insane we (Justin and I) live in Canada so we can legaly get married. We were looking for honeymoon spots, so who helps us Bakayasha we read you story and got good idears so we have to read the other chaps to find out what happens they are really getting good.The lemons are really turning hot. (I can window shop as long as i purchase at home) Well we are going on a date now g2g ttyl.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii (not signed in) On: June 25, 2005 23:00 CDT
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that was a hot chapter hehe. keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Lain_chan16 On: June 25, 2005 18:14 CDT
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*_* you updated! yay! aww that was cute, and definatly the best YukixShu lemon I've ever read :P keep up the awesome work! I love it so much!! (more RYU AND TATSUHA! ^.^) - ta ta
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Title: ch. ?
Reviewed By: Angela On: June 13, 2005 18:44 CDT
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Disney WORLD, dude...Disney land is an ant compared to it... noticed some wrong grammer but other than that it's all good... *yawn* I had a rough day...I got 3 1/2 hours of sleep last night, I'm fresh manga deprived, and my friends boyfriend tried to kill himself...stabbed himself in the stomach twice..
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Reviewed By: Lain-chan16 On: June 06, 2005 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD OOOOO HAPPINESS HAPPINESS!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!! ITS SO CUTE!!!!!! *_* i found a few minor spelling mistakes but when you have such a kawaii fic who cares!! I can't wait until you update! **sniff sniff poor Hiro, but I love him!** :P hee hee. once again EXCELLENT JOB! - ja!
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Reviewed By: Demonic KareBear On: June 03, 2005 22:30 CDT
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Hello! Wow that was great and you know I love this story so I might as well say it again. Do you know what you have done? I will tell you. Im going to A-Kon and im cosplaying as Shuichi. But not JUST Shuichi, the shuichi in this story. I got the ring and everything! Its going to be great. Anyway love it and of course I want you to update soon, like always and I would really like it if you get back to Ryu? Me loves the Ryu and Shu!((I wrote that on a shirt and wore it to school and people are now wondering about my sanity, if I have any left that is.)) LOVE YA!
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Reviewed By: Traumatic BunnyRabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 06:08 CDT
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Once again - thanks for dedication XD. I managed to read it - at last! And I liked it, even though it was without lemon, but I still want more! You're like an addiction and I never want to get sobber;) Just take some more showers, catch new ideas and type, type, type! Not-demanding-at-all Traumatic BunnyR:3
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Title: yur fic
Reviewed By: battlegoddess On: May 26, 2005 22:35 CDT
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wow! what a story! i have to say that was the BEST fic I've ever read i especially liked the box story i sure do hope that you update soon!
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