| "What Revenge Brings" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 07:30 CDT
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I commend you for going outside of the ordinary on your torture scene, honestly I don't see how someone could technically complain about it. There wasn't anything exceptionally graphic, just different. If someone complains ignore them, they have no sense of humor I swear. Perhaps the next person to be tortured could be Inuyasha? In some way, shape, or form?. Seriously, he's beginning to piss me off. Not that it's overly hard to do mind you but still, can he get anymore annoying without someone removing his head for him? It wouldn't be THAT great of a loss lol Good chapter, Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Tokyogurl1 On: September 03, 2005 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That is sooooo cool. And now that Keiko is there maybe Yusuke will be more nice and not that rough like Inuyasha and all. And does Yukina know that Hiei is her bro yet. In this one?? Oh well. Hmmm well I really like this story. I really do. I can't wait for the next chappie. I hope you update really soon and all. well Laters Tokyogurl1
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Reviewed By: Gothmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, update again. So far you've managed to keep all the characters in character. I love the way you managed to put so many characters in the story. Really good work. Update, ^_^
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Reviewed By: CM On: August 31, 2005 13:56 CDT
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YAYNESS! Updates rule! Woot. I think this story is so cute...thought I am having a hard time picking which guy I think Kagome should end up with...yeah. Too many choices XP
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 09:19 CDT
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Ahhh Kurama is always the intuitive one. Inu's always been an insensitive jerk, this was a good chapter, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mai-sama On: August 18, 2005 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya! i really like your story! I love it. I love all the anime/video games that you put in this story. Also i like how you put all of this togeher and all. well I hope you update really soon. Later Mai-sama
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 20:58 CDT
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I'm honestly not sure why there aren't more reviews for your story. Part of it I think may be because the emails when a story gets updated are no longer going out for this site. Everyone Ive spoken to is having the same issue. I only knew about it because of the email from FF.net. My own reviews have been suffering horribly. Anyhow onto the review. I'm not surprised that Kagome is barren, what was said is very true. She's likely to have suffered irrepairable damage from what Naraku did to her as a child. That might be why she views alot of her subordanates as "children" it seems in addition to the heirarchy that has been established. Seems like she told Yusuke exactly what she thinks of him not that I blame her. He is being a jerk. I'm curious as to what Hiei and Kurama were thinking during her little speech. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please PLEASE update soon i can berly wate for the next one
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Title: Maria a.k.a Shadow Queen
Reviewed By: kaibafan1 (not logged in) On: June 23, 2005 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great so far, but Kagome should have took her father out for what he had done. Judging her power she should be way stronger then him and able to defend her brothers at the same time.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 01:54 CDT
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Very good chapter, I wonder how many of the others ended up watching the two of them given the penchant for voyerism that runs rampant through the castle lol Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 08:31 CDT
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Oh her Daddy is just asking for a brutal demise lol Good chapter, update soon please.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 13:47 CDT
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i cant wate for the next one please up date asap oya i still love this fic
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 08:51 CDT
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Very good chapter, wonder which of the guys is going to go to her first now that they have heard what Miroku told them. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon please
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Reviewed By: tokyo mew mew On: May 11, 2005 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Kagome/Hiei!!!! please update.^_~
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Title: Love it! *^_^*
Reviewed By: Fire soul On: May 11, 2005 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so cool! nice story! *^_^* I love it!!! I vote for Hiei/Kagome! *^_^* they make a great mach in this story. don't you think? please update soon! *^_^*
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