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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww, thank you!! Hey, if I think a story is good enough then I'll stick by it until the end, and every other story written afterward. So you're gonna be stuck with me for a long time!! Don't worry about keeping us waiting too long; you haven't done that yet. In fact, you're one of the few authors that constantly updates. That's a good thing because it means that you're very creative and have a good sense of where this story is going to go. I hope it lasts too. Now to actually talk about the chapter, hehe. I thought we were going to lose Kagome again when the reality of losing her friends hit her. I'm glad Sesshomaru is there for her now, and is loving towards her. I thought he was a sadistic bastard earlier in the story, but I'm very happy to see he's changed, but still has that edge to him. It also seems that Kagome still somewhat fears him. Case in point, when he went all red-eyed during Round One. The other times he's done that was when he was hurting her. That's going to be something Sesshomaru has to help Kagome get over. Shame about her friends, but I can see that this will allow Kagome to concentrate solely on Sess.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 08:30 CST
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Poor Kagome!! But I wish I could trade places with her^_~!!
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl(not signed in) On: February 14, 2005 08:22 CST
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awesome... I can't believe that happened though.. wowie.. this is awesome.. good luck and have fun hehe...
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may have went off on a tangent, but said tangent worked. I really enjoyed this chapter. Sesshomaru, it seems, is finally going to show Kagome all the love he has for her. I'm glad he's passed the whole cruelty stage. I can't wait until you post the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Black_widow(notsignedin) On: February 11, 2005 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been a very good fic. I love the lemons. First time? if so awsome. was ch. thirteent he last chapter? if so, can you write another fic? 'CAUSE YOU ARE HELLA AWSOME!! anyways...*ahem* you are a very good writter aside from the fact that it was like, sess all violent.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO SESSHOUMARU!!!! How could you do that!!!!!!!!!! Bad author, bad!!^_^ love it please update soon!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I don't have anything deep and insightful to say except... GO KAGOME!!!!!! I can't wait to see the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 20:10 CST
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Oh dear me. What has happened to the gang? Is Kagome all alone now? Or did she revive her friends? Hope you update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 17:21 CST
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whoa, gave me chills man.. lmao I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter... I wish you luck for your next chapter and please update as soon as you can.. thanks
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Reviewed By: evilsmiley On: February 09, 2005 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was definatly different but i like the extra twists...its confusing as all h*ll but still good..i hope you add some more onto it soon bubye.....=-]
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 16:44 CST
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awesome job.. and what a way to leave everyone hanging! lmao.. udpate soon please.. can't wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't even tell that this is your first lemon. You're doing very good so far. I'm glad Kagome agreed to be Sesshomaru's mate. However, is she even aware yet of his feelings for her?
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Reviewed By: twiddledee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 20:40 CST
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u r pure evil. update!
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Reviewed By: cute_kirara On: February 04, 2005 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! what a great job your doing i can't wait for the next chapter please update soon.
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 13:18 CST
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Awesome, just sooooo awesome.. I can't wait for the next chapter... update as soon as you can. good luck.
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