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Reviewed By: evilsmiley On: February 09, 2005 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was definatly different but i like the extra twists...its confusing as all h*ll but still good..i hope you add some more onto it soon bubye.....=-]
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 16:44 CST
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awesome job.. and what a way to leave everyone hanging! lmao.. udpate soon please.. can't wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't even tell that this is your first lemon. You're doing very good so far. I'm glad Kagome agreed to be Sesshomaru's mate. However, is she even aware yet of his feelings for her?
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Reviewed By: twiddledee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 20:40 CST
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u r pure evil. update!
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Reviewed By: cute_kirara On: February 04, 2005 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! what a great job your doing i can't wait for the next chapter please update soon.
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 13:18 CST
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Awesome, just sooooo awesome.. I can't wait for the next chapter... update as soon as you can. good luck.
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Reviewed By: victoria18181 On: February 03, 2005 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good fanfic, but it gets a bit too violent sometimes. But please, keep up the good work:)
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 16:01 CST
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awesome, update soon please.. I can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 15:47 CST
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This is a great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one. I am wondering what will happen between Inu and Kags now.... and I can't wait for Sess and Kags to get more friendly lmao... great job... update soon k?
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness *not logged in* On: January 27, 2005 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I really like your story. Your writing style is great and you keep me pulled into the story. However, I don't really understand Sesshoumaru...One second, he beats the shit out of her, the next, he's acting all sweet. Then, he resumes beating her to a pile of crap and acting cruel towards her, and then acts all romantic and sweet half a minute later...It kinda confuses me so I just thought I'd let you know that. ^________^ Ok, well, keep up the great work! Ja!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really wanting to know what Midoriko said to Sesshomaru to finally get him to start showing how he feels about Kagome. I'm also wondering if he's going to make his courtship of her more obvious to her.
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel1 On: January 26, 2005 21:23 CST
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That was soo good! Keep it coming. I love that someone has finally stepped in to direct their relationship. It seemed as if they were never going to get it together. There is hope!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. You've managed to come so far in such a short amount of time. It's obvious that Sesshomaru loves Kagome, but his cruelty to her is pushing her away. No wonder she's ready to kill herself. I'm guessing he's realized that she'd rather die then be with him any more. I'm glad he stopped her though. Hopefully he'll change his ways, and actually start to show Kagome that he does love her. I think your story is very well written. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel1 On: January 25, 2005 21:02 CST
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Dang! That was an eventful chapter! I really enjoyed it. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You writing is getting better. I also like the fact that you decided to make your chapters longer. I can also appreciate that you are trying to make fluffy not like a ningen right away but now you are making him sound kind of like a psycho. Your story is pretty good. Update soon please:)
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