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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness *not logged in* On: January 27, 2005 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I really like your story. Your writing style is great and you keep me pulled into the story. However, I don't really understand Sesshoumaru...One second, he beats the shit out of her, the next, he's acting all sweet. Then, he resumes beating her to a pile of crap and acting cruel towards her, and then acts all romantic and sweet half a minute later...It kinda confuses me so I just thought I'd let you know that. ^________^ Ok, well, keep up the great work! Ja!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really wanting to know what Midoriko said to Sesshomaru to finally get him to start showing how he feels about Kagome. I'm also wondering if he's going to make his courtship of her more obvious to her.
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel1 On: January 26, 2005 21:23 CST
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That was soo good! Keep it coming. I love that someone has finally stepped in to direct their relationship. It seemed as if they were never going to get it together. There is hope!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. You've managed to come so far in such a short amount of time. It's obvious that Sesshomaru loves Kagome, but his cruelty to her is pushing her away. No wonder she's ready to kill herself. I'm guessing he's realized that she'd rather die then be with him any more. I'm glad he stopped her though. Hopefully he'll change his ways, and actually start to show Kagome that he does love her. I think your story is very well written. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel1 On: January 25, 2005 21:02 CST
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Dang! That was an eventful chapter! I really enjoyed it. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You writing is getting better. I also like the fact that you decided to make your chapters longer. I can also appreciate that you are trying to make fluffy not like a ningen right away but now you are making him sound kind of like a psycho. Your story is pretty good. Update soon please:)
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Reviewed By: Golden_Eyed_Girl On: January 25, 2005 09:11 CST
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Wow, that was really good. This is a great story and your doing a wonderful job, update as soon as you can please... good luck.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 20:17 CST
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Well, maybe now Sesshoumaru's two half will come to terms. Poor Kagome, having to endure his wrath and then love. He had better repay her a hundred fold for all the hurt his caused her. Course preventing her from taking her own life is one step in the right direction. Hope you update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy of the West On: January 24, 2005 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful!!
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Reviewed By: Sessho's Hime On: January 24, 2005 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! This fic has a lot of potential. First of all, I'm loving Sesshomaru's conflicting emotions, it adds a lot of drama that wasn't seen before. Second of all, you portray Kagome in a whole new light, she realizes that she has never been accepted and that is her new goal. Everything isn't centered around the Shikon jewel any more! Loving the fic...update soon, but take your time! Good job! -SH
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Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv*notloggedin* On: January 24, 2005 08:50 CST
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Loving the fic so far. I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl*not logged in* On: January 24, 2005 08:24 CST
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Well there getting there haha. UPdate soon! More Fluff ??
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 04:44 CST
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Okay, I am so confused!! I can't tell if I love your story or hate it! That probably sounds bad, but I don't mean it that way. Just when I think I begin to understand the story, I get lost and confused, and then start wondering why I'm reading it. Then of course, I get to another part and realize, oh, yeah, I LIKE this story...AACCHHH!! I'm so confused, but anxiously waiting for a continuation!!!
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Reviewed By: youkai n me [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 04:38 CST
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Great 2 chappies!! I love it..great job!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 20:18 CST
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I wish Sesshoumaru would just get with his feelings. I mean his going to loose Kagome in one way or another. I don't think he will like it much if Kagome was just a puppet that answered his every whim. Just a thought for you. Any ways, your story is moving along really good. Hope for more soon, later.
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