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Reviewed By: Aki_Iida [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 07:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...your story has really managed to catch my interest. I really hope you plan on continuing this story. Both characters are just so...intriguing especially Inuyasha. I can't wait to see how your story develops^-^
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You caught my interest when you started chapter one so provocatively and then kept it with the few glimpses of character we were given. You have managed to arouse my curiosity as to where this story is going and how all the characters are going to interact. Please flesh out the story more though. It is one thing to tease your readers for a little while but if you do it too long they get irritated. I am looking forward to updates.
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Reviewed By: feywitch17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I sincerely hope that you plan to keep going with this!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 04:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my fifth time reading this story and I still stick by my original assessment that it is nearly perfect and that nothing needs to be changed. In fact, the only way to improve it at this point would be to post new chapters, wink, wink, hint, hint. Well I hope you are doing well and that the wind is with you. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: mischievous angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this story so far! I really hope u update soon! I'm dying 2 know what happens. The begining of the first chapter was so hot! I luv how Inuyasha calls Kagome kitten. I can't wait 2 find out about Inuyasha and Kikyo's past. I have some questions though. How old r they? Where were they in the first chapter. Were they already going out when the story started or did they just decide 2? If they were already going out, how long have they been going out? Were they on a date or were they cleaning up for a teacher or something? If I've offended u, I'm sorry. I really don't mean 2. I ask these questions becuz I'm confused and I would enjoy ur story so much more if I were not confused!
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Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!
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Title: *begging* Update
Reviewed By: PrincessMelissa83 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please, please, please, please, please update?
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Reviewed By: Sorcha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Both Inuyasha and Kagome are very well represented. I enjoy that Kagome is not weak as she is often portrayed. Please update soon,I've only read the first two chapter about twenty times and am dying for new material.
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Title: Washuu Ogami
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely enjoyable; love the characterizations, and with Kagome coping w/a transformed Inu without the knowledge our series miko does,and she does it so courageously.Thanks for keeping her strong...hey, melting round Inu doesn't count;who wouldn't? And I love them together.Hope you decide to update *sooooon*. While not normally an AU fan, this setting you both devised is reminiscent of Laurell K. Hamilton, a famous vamp author, who's universe also conferred reluctant "citizen status" upon its supernatural constituents; this read similarly comfortably-thanks! :)
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 07, 2005 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely enjoyable! Hope you decide to update *sooooon*. While not normally an AU fan, this setting you both devised is reminiscent of Laurell K. Hamilton, a famous vamp author, who's universe also conferred reluctant "citizen status" upon its supernatural constituents; this read similarly comfortably-thanks! :)
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Title: Love the jacket!
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 11:39 CST
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I'm so happy that you two decided to keep with this story! I'm really impressed with how you've been able to keep the flow of the story going. I know that background information will come as you continue to write, and I can't wait to see how everything unfolds. But I definitely have a better feel for the characters and their situation. You did an excellent job in letting us peek inside their heads. Kudos on the motorcycle part! yummm!! =) And I've to say that I **LOVE** the jacket bit!! Oh man, I laughed at that one pretty good, because as much as we don't want to admit it, we've all been there!! Nicely done ladies!! Keep at it! Lady P. :o)
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Reviewed By: ka On: February 10, 2005 23:12 CST
Comment/Review:
it is really good and intense
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooh man!! That was really good!! I just love Inu. He's so cool!(and gorgeous!) I like the part in the bathroom with Kags. It was just funny to see go insanely mad at a jacket.:D Please update soon. I love you girls. Bye.
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Reviewed By: InuKaglover815 On: February 07, 2005 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off, let me say I LOVE Inu's nickname for Kagome. when I wrote mine the only thing I came up with was Kage. And just incase I got the #'s switched, I was giving you the highest rating. Your fic is definatly the best I've read in a while. I can't wait to read the next chapter. But PLEAZE tell me that Kinky-ho lives a long love-deprived lonely life. If she lived happily ever after I just might have ta kill something. Hehe, ok, gotta go. So much ta read so little time ta do it.
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Title: "Jackets do not scowl and they do not look lonely!"
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 14:05 CST
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Thank you for finally updating! Ah yes, Inuyasha riding a motorcycle. This would definitely be his vehicle (if not the R32 that I wrote him in) in the modern age. So dangerous and wild, just like him. I'd have chosen more a crotch rocket look personally, but its still awesome. Anyway, I really like the way you two impersonated Kagome, not only in this chapter, but in the whole fic so far. You make her seem so very human and believable, so very real. Although Inuyasha is a little out of character for the canon universe with his compliments (albeit rude!) and his physical need to be with and touch Kagome, the way you've writen him is in fact pretty in-character and believable. I love his pushiness, his confidence with her: "We're taking this slow, agreed? But let's get one thing straight. Nobody, but nobody, will have the right to look at you…touch you…other than me. If you're going to be my bitch, you have to know that I don't share!" As for background information, take your time. Right now we are learning about Inuyasha and Kagome, watching them grow close. Whatever happened between Inuyasha and Kikyou is obviously in the past, and can stay there for the moment until it is right to be unveiled. I'm anxious for the next chapter and can't wait to watch Inuyasha and Kikyou grow close. Great job you two!
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