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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! I absolutely LOVE your story! and this after only two chapters!!! I love inuyashas behaviour, although i think that kagome thinks too much... but well, thats probably just how she is!! gods! can't wait for the next chapter!!!! please update soon!!!
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Title: Very pleasing
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 08:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do good work. I am glad that I took the time to read your one shot from the guild contest. It has introduced me to a fine author with a great deal of potential. It is obvious that you write for the joy of writing, which is as it should be. I have one story of yours left to read and then I will have to wait on chapters. And I shall have to read any work that there is by your collaborater. If you are working together, then she must be of similar talent. Take care, Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: Tinka On: February 07, 2005 06:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good, can't wait to read more!! I like the way everything seems so mysterious since we still don't know much about what's going on or what happened between Inuyasha and Kagome in the past. It's just really exciting and a fun read when you only get bits of information from time to time and start speculating and putting all the pieces of the puzzle together. Really, really cool, I hope you'll update soon! Greetings, Tinka
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: February 07, 2005 00:40 CST
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I am definately in love with this story. the emotions and stuff are just so great! plz update soon!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! As much as I loved the first chapter, I love this one just as much! Very cute, and I totally love the scene towards the end when Kagome was talking to the jacket... that was just so funny! And when she wrapped herself in the jacket instead of the towel... Okay, you SO need to update soon again! This just gets better and better.
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 18:18 CST
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im so glad you updated! i really love this story, i like that you dont muddle it up with backward details and focus more on the now. well anyways please keep it up! :)
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 17:01 CST
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Great chapter, you're right no background info in this chappie, but nevertheless well secondary introduced. I loved that this was mainly focusing on their tryst, as it finished the first chapter off nicely and now allows us to think ahead and past the very steamy prologue. Very much looking forward to reading more!
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Title: WHOO HOO!!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi (not signed in) On: February 06, 2005 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*does her happy dance* Yatta! You updated!!!! *squeals* Aww, poor Inuyasha. *mimicks his mind* Inu: Can't fucking touch, must look Y. Inu: *snorts in amused annoyance* Pansy, I'll do more than touch! Inu: Which is why you ain't gettin out! Y. Inu: 'fraidy cat Inu: Shut up!! *laughs* Anyhoo, GREAT chapter, absolute BRILLIANCE once again! I cheered when I noticed your update alert in mah mailbox. Yes, you made the fave authoress and story list for me ( a hard thing to do, being as I'm a picky little hanyou at times. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks again for updating, and double thanks for the review! I love making him go full youkai and tweaking the relationship with Kagome. I mean, just look, he'd kill or at least try and kill anyone else but, he always runs away from Kagome or tells her to not come near him. Five bucks he wouldn't do that with Kikyou! *stabs afore mentioned undead miko* As for the conversations in his head; XD I couldn't help it, I mean, no one really thinks about some of the things that could go on inside that head of his, especially where the youkai is concerned. Hell, he'd have to have more of a mental battle of control than a physical one at first, that's in my opinion. Ja matta ne, before I make this thing go on forever, Hanyou-chan AKA Yoake
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Title: Maxx WaFFage
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 13:53 CST
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I feel like I'm floating amid all the pink clouds...just like Kagome! Ah...young love... *sigh* Keep up the good work! I await the promised information coming.
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Title: YOU DID IT AGAIN!!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How the hell do you manage to make me wanna just sit and read your fics all damn day?! PLEASE update, I'll give ya a cookie if you do. *begging eyes* GREAT start for a first chapter, I'm jealous. *pouts*
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Reviewed By: Mafia Girl On: January 24, 2005 21:47 CST
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CONTINUE! I demand you continue! (sneaks $50 under the table) *whispers* How bout $50 and you update? No? $100. No? $1,000 my last offer!
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 00:21 CST
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holy bejeebus! i realllllllly reallllllly like this story. no fuus no muss no agonizingly long back story, just right in there. i love it. i am very very impressed. please update soon . :)
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 23:06 CST
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Amazing so far!!!! And its only the first chapter!! Ahh the sexual tension, I love it!! Well, anyway, update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Superstarz007 On: January 20, 2005 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it very much! I was wondering were you going to go into how they got to that situation in the first place! Great fic and I hope that you will continue writing it!
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Title: Delicious!
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 22:13 CST
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Hey girls! Way to go!! Scherez, I am so happy that you guys were able to get this story going! The heat, the fire, the twists of emotions, it was so wonderfully put together! And egads, do I love it when he calls her "kitten"!! I noticed that the chapter said it was "completed", so is this a one shot, or will you have more chapters? I hope that you will continue to write more, as I think you have both got yourselves off to an amazing start. I know that there are a lot of questions about 'who, what, where, when' and all that good stuff, but hey, all in time right? =) Talk about hooking us in and not giving us a choice! Well done! The flow between you two is wonderfuly delicious! Can't wait to read more!! Lady P.
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