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Reviewed By: Sorcha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Both Inuyasha and Kagome are very well represented. I enjoy that Kagome is not weak as she is often portrayed. Please update soon,I've only read the first two chapter about twenty times and am dying for new material.
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Title: Washuu Ogami
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely enjoyable; love the characterizations, and with Kagome coping w/a transformed Inu without the knowledge our series miko does,and she does it so courageously.Thanks for keeping her strong...hey, melting round Inu doesn't count;who wouldn't? And I love them together.Hope you decide to update *sooooon*. While not normally an AU fan, this setting you both devised is reminiscent of Laurell K. Hamilton, a famous vamp author, who's universe also conferred reluctant "citizen status" upon its supernatural constituents; this read similarly comfortably-thanks! :)
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 07, 2005 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely enjoyable! Hope you decide to update *sooooon*. While not normally an AU fan, this setting you both devised is reminiscent of Laurell K. Hamilton, a famous vamp author, who's universe also conferred reluctant "citizen status" upon its supernatural constituents; this read similarly comfortably-thanks! :)
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Title: Love the jacket!
Reviewed By: The Lady Pantera [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 11:39 CST
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I'm so happy that you two decided to keep with this story! I'm really impressed with how you've been able to keep the flow of the story going. I know that background information will come as you continue to write, and I can't wait to see how everything unfolds. But I definitely have a better feel for the characters and their situation. You did an excellent job in letting us peek inside their heads. Kudos on the motorcycle part! yummm!! =) And I've to say that I **LOVE** the jacket bit!! Oh man, I laughed at that one pretty good, because as much as we don't want to admit it, we've all been there!! Nicely done ladies!! Keep at it! Lady P. :o)
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Reviewed By: ka On: February 10, 2005 23:12 CST
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it is really good and intense
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooh man!! That was really good!! I just love Inu. He's so cool!(and gorgeous!) I like the part in the bathroom with Kags. It was just funny to see go insanely mad at a jacket.:D Please update soon. I love you girls. Bye.
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Reviewed By: InuKaglover815 On: February 07, 2005 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off, let me say I LOVE Inu's nickname for Kagome. when I wrote mine the only thing I came up with was Kage. And just incase I got the #'s switched, I was giving you the highest rating. Your fic is definatly the best I've read in a while. I can't wait to read the next chapter. But PLEAZE tell me that Kinky-ho lives a long love-deprived lonely life. If she lived happily ever after I just might have ta kill something. Hehe, ok, gotta go. So much ta read so little time ta do it.
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Title: "Jackets do not scowl and they do not look lonely!"
Reviewed By: Trusuprise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 14:05 CST
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Thank you for finally updating! Ah yes, Inuyasha riding a motorcycle. This would definitely be his vehicle (if not the R32 that I wrote him in) in the modern age. So dangerous and wild, just like him. I'd have chosen more a crotch rocket look personally, but its still awesome. Anyway, I really like the way you two impersonated Kagome, not only in this chapter, but in the whole fic so far. You make her seem so very human and believable, so very real. Although Inuyasha is a little out of character for the canon universe with his compliments (albeit rude!) and his physical need to be with and touch Kagome, the way you've writen him is in fact pretty in-character and believable. I love his pushiness, his confidence with her: "We're taking this slow, agreed? But let's get one thing straight. Nobody, but nobody, will have the right to look at you…touch you…other than me. If you're going to be my bitch, you have to know that I don't share!" As for background information, take your time. Right now we are learning about Inuyasha and Kagome, watching them grow close. Whatever happened between Inuyasha and Kikyou is obviously in the past, and can stay there for the moment until it is right to be unveiled. I'm anxious for the next chapter and can't wait to watch Inuyasha and Kikyou grow close. Great job you two!
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! I absolutely LOVE your story! and this after only two chapters!!! I love inuyashas behaviour, although i think that kagome thinks too much... but well, thats probably just how she is!! gods! can't wait for the next chapter!!!! please update soon!!!
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Title: Very pleasing
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 08:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do good work. I am glad that I took the time to read your one shot from the guild contest. It has introduced me to a fine author with a great deal of potential. It is obvious that you write for the joy of writing, which is as it should be. I have one story of yours left to read and then I will have to wait on chapters. And I shall have to read any work that there is by your collaborater. If you are working together, then she must be of similar talent. Take care, Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: Tinka On: February 07, 2005 06:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good, can't wait to read more!! I like the way everything seems so mysterious since we still don't know much about what's going on or what happened between Inuyasha and Kagome in the past. It's just really exciting and a fun read when you only get bits of information from time to time and start speculating and putting all the pieces of the puzzle together. Really, really cool, I hope you'll update soon! Greetings, Tinka
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: February 07, 2005 00:40 CST
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I am definately in love with this story. the emotions and stuff are just so great! plz update soon!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Kuroi Koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! As much as I loved the first chapter, I love this one just as much! Very cute, and I totally love the scene towards the end when Kagome was talking to the jacket... that was just so funny! And when she wrapped herself in the jacket instead of the towel... Okay, you SO need to update soon again! This just gets better and better.
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 18:18 CST
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im so glad you updated! i really love this story, i like that you dont muddle it up with backward details and focus more on the now. well anyways please keep it up! :)
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 17:01 CST
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Great chapter, you're right no background info in this chappie, but nevertheless well secondary introduced. I loved that this was mainly focusing on their tryst, as it finished the first chapter off nicely and now allows us to think ahead and past the very steamy prologue. Very much looking forward to reading more!
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