| "A New Dream, A New Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama! (too lazy to log in...) On: June 08, 2005 14:54 EDT
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Yay! I was so glad when I saw that this was upadated! Another great chapter, please continue!
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Reviewed By: Roses_Petal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it yet again....and you still have me hooked like a fish to bait. O.o That was odd...but congrats on the chap! One more thing...Darn it I forgot. XP O! I remember, I want to see her meet Yuusuke and they somewhat form a trust bond...but this is before she finds out he's working for Koemna, and that she's the person that the group is all looking for. Must keep that part a secret! SHHH! ^-^ Also, update soon, I love the fanfic already! *eats smores* I must comment on the yummy treats given out to us readers. Now I have to leave, I have some homework to finish and a final to study for. *hugs her and leaves review*
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this please update realy soon.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiko-san [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I really do! Anyway I'm a big Kurama/Kagome fan and that is the reason why I am estatic (Okay at the moment I dunno how to spell and I think I spelt this wrong) that you decided to continue this story. So please update soon!! Please!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 13:53 EDT
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You are doing an excellent job with Youko, it's refreshing to see. I'm curious as to how Kagome knew him as Kurama. I reread the first chapter and unless I missed it somewhere he never spoke the name Kurama in the dream. It speaks of some sort of connection between them that hasn't been revealed yet. Your response to chinstrap was right on in my opinion, unless they have some mythical mind reading ability they cannot begin to say that they know what it is that you are doing. You're doing a terrific job with this fic and I look forward to reading more. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: puritygoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 09:53 EDT
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Anothe excellent chapter written, update soon
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Reviewed By: SilverShadowKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 23:33 EDT
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Interseting. I hope you update soon. This seems interesting. Tbe prologue was good as well. *yawns* Well, I have to go to bed now. Update ASAP!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: puritygoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update as soon as you can please please please I love kag/kur pairings...see now I'm reverting to begging *pout*
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 13:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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..... *cries* ..... There's no more! *crawls into corner* I'm gonna hide until you update, so you'd better do it soon. This s a great fic and I can't wait for more! *smiles sadly*
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: puritygoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 05:41 EDT
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Damn you *shaky fist* why must authors posess the power of cliff hangers UPDATE REALLLLLLYYYYY SOON!!!
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Title: WHEE!
Reviewed By: Roses_Petal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it...ignore Chinstraps words. He or She always is like that...well from what mean reviews I've read that he or she wrote. I enjoyed reading these few chapters, I'm going to keep an eye on this fanfic, update soon will you? You got me hooked on the fanfic already...oh, the horror... --Roses_Petal
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Title: tester
Reviewed By: Houseki On: May 14, 2005 14:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so awesome! I dunno where you came up with the idea, but it's a good start so far ^__^ And to think, you pulled out this story by that one-shot! You rock my sox babe! Keep up the good work! Matane!
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Reviewed By: PerpetualBlueSky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very interesting. I'm captivated! -P. Blue
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Title: A New Dream, A New Destiny
Reviewed By: Kaggy-chan2202 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 17:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was amazing!!! Hey don't listen to that Chinstrap person ok?! She is wrong!!!! Your story is plenty orignal!!! He/She needs to keep that shit personal!!! So please do continue ok??!! That is an order soldier!!! Lol just kiddin!!! Hey next time someone talks shit like that use the flames to make something worthwhile like oden!!! Ja ne and please update cause I really ejoyed this fic!!!
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Title: Review, continued
Reviewed By: Chinstrap [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 15:06 EDT
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As for the overall story... ::sighs:: Look, it's obvious that you're an adult, and you're better than 90% of the fanauthors in this fandom. You can spell. You know what a full-stop is. You can format dialogue correctly. Regardless of that, however, this story is lacking the one thing that truly makes reading worthwhile: originality. I can't count the number of Synchronized Sex Dream plots I've seen (and Kagome waking up with a hickey is eerily reminiscent of Volpa's TMWI, wherein Kagome awakens with a bite mark after a dream about Sesshoumaru.) I can't count the number of Kagome Gets Transferred to the Same School as [Insert Bishounen's Name Here] plots. And the sheer amount of Shuichi's Fanclub Hates Kagome and Makes Her Life Hell fics is overwhelming. If you're going to all the effort to write the story, you might as well come up with something original (and believable. Originality doesn't automatically make a story good, as many an insane crossover story has proven.) It would be nice to see an author who follows the rules of grammar come up with an original, interesting plot for once. Oh, and one last thing: you've gotten the avatar aspect backwards. Shuichi is the avatar; Youko is the kitsune. I'd hate to see that mixup catch on and start showing up in dozens of other authors' stories.
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