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Title: hello
Reviewed By: Kyou_kun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic!!! I've read all the chapters on fanfiction.net and when i found out you were only going to be posting on this site i joined it becasue i love this story so much! I must find out what happens!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Prinsess_serenity59 (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 13:10 CST
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AAH! CLIFFIE YOUR KILLING ME! Im sorry I havent been reviewing but ya know my yahoo isnt installed right now gaah! Keep it up and I hope your family is doing well! Your fic is great and does not suck! Don't critisize (sp?) your self like that it cant be healthy and I think it causes wrinkles (lol) Well as always your doing beter than me at this whole writing thing so ya know don't rush and don't think anything on any flames you might get! Luv Ran-Chan
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 04:33 CST
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Great story! Update again soon please! Thanks!
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Title: Great Chapter
Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter Jillian your story is so creative. funny and sad at times poor kagome split between her first love (that she still loves) Her protector (that loves her and she likes) And her Fiance (that shes having doubts bout) I only hope she makes the right decision. Keep going! ~Randi~ (almost your last name ne?)
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Title: Demons and Tetsusaiga
Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 15:02 CST
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When Sesshomaru wielded Tetsusaiga, he had temporarily attached a human arm to his stump. It is kind of strange that he keeps trying to take Tetsusaiga from Inuyasha, since he can't hold it, but I guess he thinks he can somehow overcome that protection once he owns it. Or something. We've also seen at least one other demon (Gatenmaru) try to hold Tetsusaiga and fail.
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Title: Prinsess_serenity59 (nsi)
Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 17:53 CST
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I really like this story its so creative but hitomi has got a point bout the shippo thing your good with spelling mistakes and its cool how you thought of making the micheal thing the inuyasha thing and the paul thing work I love your story keep on writing and dont feel to rushed dont let anything get you thinking your story sucks or anything your story is great dont think other wise luv ya hun Randi~
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Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 15:14 CST
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Great! I love Kagome's new reaction to Miroku's groping--much better than just screaming and jumping away. I see that Shippo wants to be useful, but shouldn't it be impossible for him to hold Tetsusaiga, since he's a demon? Those protein bars are usually terrible tasting--I completely understand Shippo's reaction, and I almost wonder if Michael's put something in them to help him control Kagome, since it's entirely possible to be a vegetarian without eating anything like that. And I think drugs are the only explanation for someone liking those things. :)
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 13:38 CST
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Well, I just thought Michael the \"angel\" was sorta creepy before, but now I officially hate him for doing that to Kagome and for hurting Shippou with that charm. You know, Satan was once an angel too... Please update soon. Thanks! ----wj
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 13:37 CST
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Well, I just thought Michael the \"angel\" was sorta creepy before, but now I officially hate him for doing that to Kagome and for hurting Shippou with that charm. You know, Satan was once an angel too... Please update soon. Thanks! ----wj
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 16:29 CST
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"If Kagome feels threatened, angered, or frightened in the least by any demon, this charm creates a barrier around her no demon can penetrate." --quote from Micheal ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I went back and read that again and I suddenly realized that Kagome can't hold Shippou during a battle or save him if they are being threatened by another demon. And Inuyasha and Kirara will not be able to pick her up and carry out of harm's way like they always do. This necklace Micheal gave Kagome will endanger all her friends because "no demon can penetrate" the barrier when she feels threatened, and that means Shippou, Inuyasha, and Kirara won't be able to get near her to help her or receive help from her during a battle since she would natually feel threatened by the demon that is attacking them. What will happen? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 15:56 CST
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I am still liking your story and I really like the fact that you update so often. Please keep going! Thanks!
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Title: Again, wow!
Reviewed By: other_hitomi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 15:19 CST
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Well, I really hope that you want me to hate Michael, because I sure do. I'd been thinking that he was a manipulative, overcontrolling, creepy jerk, and his actions in the last couple of chapters have proved that. If that's not what you were aiming for, you might want to rethink how you're writing this story.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 01:41 CST
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You have a very good story. You write well and you are keeping Kagome and Inuyasha believable and as in-character as possible given the circumstances. Post another chapter soon, please. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 17:23 CST
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I'm glad you update so often. I'm still really liking your story and I can't wait to read more. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 00:29 CST
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Thank you for updating! You've written a really good story so far and hope you update again soon.
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