| "The Depth Of Demon Bonds" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: martianbunny On: July 07, 2008 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. I will do some editing for you. I really enjoy editing other peoples stories but do not give me more than 2 at a time please. My e-mail address is martianbunny@gmail.com. I will not respond for a week because I am about to go on vacation but when I get back I can do some beta reading. Hope you have a good day.
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Reviewed By: StormAz(not signed in) On: September 03, 2006 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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An update :) glad to see you're back. Had to go through and re-read the whole story. It's still cute. And what you did to Kurama ... evil! I look forward to your next update!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: June 18, 2005 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is really awesome so far! I love it! I'll be reading the rest later and will probably review every few chapters. Sorry!
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Title: loved it!
Reviewed By: liko On: June 11, 2005 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was rather great!, im flattered and jealous! you did a great job! your grammer was good and so was everything else!...i especially liked the thing you did to announce the lemons(the lemonade stands and stampeding people)....that was great!....your a writer to be reckened with!
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Title: Depth of Demon Bonds
Reviewed By: bec-wan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the first one I read and then I just had to go back and read the others...(Then again all in order)Now I can not wait to get the updates....Keep it up..(PS can not seem to write a review for Heights of Demon Love, but its a winner, too.)
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 20:31 CDT
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Okay, Hiei JUST marked him again as his mate and Kurama is having a panic attack? Silly kitsune! At LEAST he should wait out the couple of days before he lets his imagination work on overdrive. Although I can see why he'd think the firebaby wasn't coming back, he should still have a little more faith in his mate than that. Especially with all they went through to be together =\
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Title: GASP!!!
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: April 10, 2005 19:49 CDT
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KURAMA IS SAD!!! we can't have that...the two lovers torn apart...*sobs* oh foresaken theee!!! I'll be sure to look out for your next fanfic!
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Reviewed By: adglho On: April 08, 2005 19:21 CDT
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That last part was very sweet......Cinnamon rolls, cinnamon rolls......*keeps chanting cinnamon rolls* Alternate Personality: Now you've gone and done it..........Why doesn't anyone think about the people that have to deal with this crazy girl?!
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Title: Another good chapter
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei_Not_Logged_In On: April 08, 2005 11:17 CDT
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Heh another cute/good chapter great job! and I'm still here reading!!! woot ^__^-Jin
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Title: Well damn...
Reviewed By: Jin_Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh love the story..so rich..so..good..so..JUST SO! heh I do believe you did a worth while bang up job..at first I was reading and I was like "..well this person isn't a lemon person but hey lets see.." turns out your very talented...I salut you and can't wait for your next chapter! oh and btw...*gives you 50 cents* for the lemonaid I..uh..read ^__^ happy writing and keep up the good work! - Jin
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 12:46 CST
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Glad the boys are awake, and Yusuke doesn't seem to be having ten fits and a bad spell about them being together which is good ... Can't wait to see what you come up with for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 11:49 CST
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Excellent story. I cannot wait for more!
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Reviewed By: StormAz (not signed in) On: March 23, 2005 20:09 CST
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Love the story (and the song) ... from the looks of it, Yomi will no longer be a threat to the boys (maybe). I'll wait and see what you come up with ^_~
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Title: Please don't stop!
Reviewed By: german_spaz On: March 19, 2005 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still love your work but if you have them already written then please just type them. I really want to find out if Kuwabara will have a cow;if Yomi gives up; and if Kurama gets to mount Hiei. so Please hurry up! I will heart shape you for forever. (p.s. I do reliaze that you must have a job or go to college so it might not fit in to your alotted time frame of necarrieness (not a real word) but please finish.) I am begging you!
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Reviewed By: German_spaz On: March 14, 2005 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to be the only person I have ever written a review for so this is a big deal. You totally ROCK!!! I love your story and can't wait to see how it unfolds in the next chapters. Keep the good times rolling. (p.s. I have never really liked this couple together before you wrote this. I was a firm non-gay coupling in this show. But now if this happened in the show that wouldn't be so bad.^-~. I heart shape you!)
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