| "A Whole New World for Shinji and Asuka" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: That was... interesting.
Reviewed By: K.T.S. On: February 14, 2008 02:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Right, well I'm not going to grade this one. But I am going to leave my comments. First of all, this could have been something great. All of the ingredients are there for a good fic, but you don't use them! Formatting could have been better, the first chapter could have used a plot, you need either a spell checker or a beta... There are just too many things that are wrong with this that could have gone so right. I know you're trying, and that's commendable. But try harder.
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Reviewed By: insipidDRONE On: May 08, 2007 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
to those who like this badass-fic here's the site for ANWFSA 7-8-9.. http://www.fanfic.net/pub/Anime/FanFictions/Evangelion/Lemon/?M=A and there are other eva lemons in there...
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Title: huh?
Reviewed By: scarsofhate On: May 07, 2007 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
why is ANWFSA 7-8-9 arent here yet? i already read it!
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Reviewed By: Asiansn4k3 On: July 29, 2006 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanific btw =D
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Title: _YamiYaiba_ u also sux
Reviewed By: Asiansn4k3 On: July 29, 2006 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
_YamiYaiba_ ur grammar is so great yourself so u should shut the fuck up
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Title: IT's better then it looks
Reviewed By: Tempesta2nd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT's a good fan fic but I'de like more chapters. I've read this many time an is still good.
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Reviewed By: adfae On: May 02, 2005 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
A terribly written fanfic that shouldnt be allowed on this site.
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Reviewed By: VendettaTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wall of text/10. Literally an unreadable story. I'm not going to try to read it all if you haven't even bothered to use paragraphs. My head was hurting after the first chapter. Infamous is definatly not a good thing in this case dude! Reformat it and I'll give it another look.
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Reviewed By: EvaSkiman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 20:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
sorry im slow and left something out my other review, but just remember that a story should end when all you have to say is said. Other wise it ruins the expierience.
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Reviewed By: EvaSkiman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have much to say so im going to say it quick. I really thought it was good. I didn't keep with the story at all but It was still good.
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Reviewed By: Ravenz2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why the hell did you get some bad reviews!? Yes, there were some gramatical errors, but the story was still the same and still enjoyable. I'd like to see more. -Raven-
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Reviewed By: DarkFeenix On: March 31, 2004 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
got to say, you overrated yourself completely... not great at any part but luckily for you, some ppl seem to give greater value to amount than teh quality :P
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Reviewed By: Endless Nights On: December 31, 2003 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you are infamous as you boisterously say, why do you have no more than ten reviews? i'm no famous person but i get at least ten per chap. tsk.
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Reviewed By: Cl4yivi0r3 On: November 17, 2003 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Use....a....freaking....spellchecker. Overall, a very normal, so-so lemon. Not BAD, mind you, but not exactly a landmark piece. Anyone can write about sex; not everyone can write with a sexy style.
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Title: and one more thing..
Reviewed By: Mr Foo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a horrible writer
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