| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] |
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Title: P>S
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:11 PDT
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when i mean sugar i mean actual candy sugar not drugs...those are icky..well only to clarify....um..update soon hehehehehe super kool work by the way!!!!!!
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Title: QUILL PLZ HURRY!!!
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im so sad....(the puddle of tears has now formed into a lake...particullary a salty one) u havnt updated in a very long time...too long ..both sachi and waiting on a wish are super dee duper...AWSOME!!!! AWSOME!!!!!! and im so sad that there hasnt been a new update. are u going to update soon? pleaze do.. i need to read ur stories like ...A DRUG....... hehehe ..u no sugar? well once u try that stuff well u can never say no to candy again..(i hope i dont turn diabetic, when im 60 and pruny, while my butt is hanging down the floor} but neways thats not the point... ur stories are like sugar and i need MORE!! hope im not scraing u , but u gots talent and ur good at writing,,,its so funny and cute . i especially am super interested in SACHI , cant wait for what happens next. so pleasse Quill,plz update soon. because(future self:::: lying in the corner of the street, clothes all torn, long beard and over hairy legs, and hair that has more leaves and dirt than a garden,,,while holding up a sign(a brown, torn up one) saying will work for Quill's stories, please give sugar also.) heheh plz update soon im doing over here. sincerely babydragon213 that needs sugar right now!!!
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Reviewed By: SayannaTR On: May 08, 2006 23:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
was ecstatic to find your story!!!! ^_^...I don't suppose Shippou would mind sharing that recipe....lol Could come in handy ^_^
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Title: Teddy bear
Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 19:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an incredible story, and I am not exaggarating when I say that you are my all time favourite author of fanfiction. I love your creativity and the way that you do not detract too much from the characters' personalities. You captivated me from the first chapter, and might I say, that not many stories are able to do that. The only "problem" I have with you is that you do not update as regularly as I would hope you would, so I am begging you to please do that for your adoring fans, and keep up the amazing work.
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Title: student
Reviewed By: Lenkia On: April 08, 2006 12:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you story, can't wait to see what happens and one question in this story are sango and kagome related, it seems to me that they are later
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Title: Congratulations
Reviewed By: tootalltygerlily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best AU/AR Fiction" at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group! The official website for the group - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The yahoo group where nomination/voting takes place - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ If you have any questions, feel free to email Dark Avenger (the owner) at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: March 23, 2006 10:15 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. You had some really enjoyable interaction between IY and Kag as well as some insight into the grumpy one. Thanks for writing. Caitriona
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: kaori88 On: March 22, 2006 08:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story!! I actually like the longer chapters because they are full of detail. Wonderful job! I was wondering when Sango would be arriving.. will the monk behave? hah! Anyways, awesome job! I cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Dragonpink2002 On: March 20, 2006 21:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best fanfictions I ever read...I really can't wait for the updated... =^.^=
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan nsi On: March 20, 2006 19:11 PST
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Fun chapter I am going nuts trying to figure out just where this story is headed. I am coming to adore this story as much as I adore waiting on a wish. The scene with kagome and inuyasha in the goo was fabulous! Hehehehehehe poor yasha and kagome just didn't always get it and the teaseing from miroku was of course great. Love the way you write these characters I know I have said that sooo many times but it's true! And enter sango! Nice to see her show up can't wait to find out what the deal was with the card that so got that girls attention. I am really looking forward to the next chapter on this and on "Waiting" I hope you don't get sick of writting these what great story's they are!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 20, 2006 16:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a treat! What a present! It was such a fun and exciting chapter. I really, really enjoyed it. My family wondered what I was cackling on and on about. Here are some parts that I just loved or made me melt in some way: "a tiny start;" "stop moving;" "white...and...sticky;" "choking noises;" "frame cradling hers." Actually, I wanted to list and detail way more, but I can get out of hand with my selections. Thank you for gifting us with a second update so soon. Yea for that chapter that turned into three chapters. Keep going Quillwing717, do not stop now when things have become so incredibly interesting and exciting. Thank you for sharing as always, your work is fantastic. Cynbad146
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06- too lazy to sign in On: March 20, 2006 15:57 PST
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I really like your story, it has a good plot, and since my writer's block has come to me it hasn't left me with any initative to continue my story for some odd reason, oh well, I really do like your story I can't wait til you post your next few chapters. I am very anxious to read about what's going to happen next!!!! I'll be impatiently waiting ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 20, 2006 15:47 PST
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man how did u ever think of that situation? shippo and u of course are brilliant! thanks for providing a great break from studying
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Title: Great chapter
Reviewed By: chanda (not signed in) On: March 19, 2006 20:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved how they were stuck together that was great. I wonder when she will start to regain her memory...or if she doesn't? Oh my so many questions running through my head right now...lol Very good story, love it look forward until your next update, Chanda
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Title: Great chapter
Reviewed By: chanda (not signed in) On: March 19, 2006 18:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved how they were stuck together that was great. I wonder when she will start to regain her memory...or if she doesn't? Oh my so many questions running through my head right now...lol Very good story, love it look forward until your next update, Chanda
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