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Title: amen
Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 19:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi quiilwing.I don't know if my review helped any (or if it was just on of my many coincidences)but I am so happy that you updated. As usual you did not disappoint but instead you gave an incredible chapter with an order of events that I was not expecting. The feeling of the characters is ever present and the whole attitude of the story and the way it's headed is phenomenal. Thank you again for making my day and I hope that additional chapters are up and coming.
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 16:10 PDT
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Happy Dance! I was so happy to see that you updated on this fic. I love it! The way you write everyones personalities. I really like Kagomes knowlegde without knowing where or how she learned the things. Also very hapy to see the introduction of Sango.
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Reviewed By: Anju On: June 15, 2006 15:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far the best fanfiction I've ever read. It's one I look forward to every time it's updated! You have such a great style of writing and the pace is great. I rarely see any grammatical/spelling errors, which is very refreshing. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the brilliant work!
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Reviewed By: Noie On: June 14, 2006 22:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, I LOVE YOUR WORK. This story is so entertaining and I can't believe you left Kagome blacked out in the bathtub!!!! Part 2 please!
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Title: Well Done
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 19:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Probably one of the best modern era Canon InuYasha fic's I've seen. Canon being that the characters are themselves and the relationships are traditional. I really enjoy this story. Thank you. -TK
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Reviewed By: Different Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 18:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing great! I just enjoyed everything in this chapter and each time there is more suspense on what will occur next. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: June 14, 2006 18:32 PDT
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sweaty-hot-half-dressed hanyous are fun to look at!!
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Reviewed By: berlynn On: June 14, 2006 17:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful as always. Please dont make us wait so long for the next chapter. :( it makes me sad
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness (not signed in) On: June 06, 2006 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That took longer than expected, but really I didn't want the story to end. I love your writing, you're able to turn phrases with such ease. I also love how you portray Inuyasha. His grumpy side is dominate but he's still in character. You give my insomnia purpose.
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Reviewed By: Different Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 11:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story! I have not been able to find such a wonderful story in awhile. Please update soon. I gotta know what is gonna happen next. Again, please update soon. I will go crazy...not really but you could never really know about these things can you. Now I am just blabbering. So,um...update soon.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 18:13 PDT
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I'm not done reading yet but I had to comment on the nabemono. I'm putting it in this one-shot I'm writing and it's just weird how stews show up in almost every Inuyasha fanfiction. Oh well I'm going back to reading now.
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 12:55 PDT
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I LOVE this story! I'm so glad that I finally gave in and read it, though now I'm going to have ANOTHER story to wait for new chapters for, lol...and this one will be especially hard, because I'm so curious to know what happened to Kagome, what her past is, what will happen between she and Inuyasha, what is going on with Sango, what Miroku, Kaede, Shippo and Inuyasha's history is...could you have possibly come up with more ways to drive your readers crazy with curiosity? Oh well, hopefully you'll take pity on us sooner or later! But until then, I must say that I really enjoyed the especially evil parts of that last chapter. GLUE! Such cruelty...I loved it! ^_~ I can't wait to see what other situations you can come up with. Please post again as soon as you can!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 17:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a bit. Most of the time it just wont go through, so I thought Id try again to put one in. Very interesting chapter. Somehow I don't think Inu was all THAT mad now, lol. Wonder what hes gonna do to the 'very inventive' Shippo. Cant wait to see what all happens next. Update when you can, soon hopefully.
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Reviewed By: ochamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahahaha. I found the situation that Kagome and Inu Yasha got themselves into very humorous. >w< I can't wait to read the next chapter, so please update whenever you get the chance and whatnot. This story seems very original so far - like nothing I've read yet. (And believe me, I've read quite a lot of fanfiction. >.>;;) I also really like your writing style. It's refreshing to see someone with a large vocabulary and good style after shifting through the first page of chatspeak fiction. In any case... I've rambled far too long...^^; I can't wait to read the next chapter, and keep writing!
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Title: Next Chapter
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 22:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,I am soooo waiting for a new chapter. Please don't tell me you've given up on this story, it's just way tooo intresting to let go. Faithfully waiting
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