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Title: WHHERE ARRRE YOUUU
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 09:43 PDT
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Hey, what's up? I'm awaiting the next chapter of one of my favorite stories. I'm feening for it so please give it up soon like Kagome and Inuyasha should (smile).
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Reviewed By: Cheezwhiz-sensei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 08:57 PDT
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I've just nominated your story to be a featured fanfic over at the MMorg Forums. The way you construct Inuyasha's and Kagome mental worlds is very effective. I also like the way you deal with that Hentai monk! Is usually very hard in an AU to keep in character, but I think you do that very well. Inuyasha is still the same Inuyasha everyone knows with just a touch of darkness... Very nice! Arigato for your hard work!
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Title: updates
Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: July 14, 2006 16:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o I guess miroku's plan is working well then, ne? Did miroku just lose again? Man his luck is going down the drain! I was begining to wonder when Sango was gonna show up. I thpught she was one of miro's EX's at first, then she could have seen kagome and blown up at him...wouldda been funny..PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: July 11, 2006 19:55 PDT
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Awesome. It's 50 degrees in here with the a/c blasting and you had me sweating. God, you write InuYasha as such a sexy bastard. Kagome falling into the boiling water...oh, that hanyou is gonna suck her up like klutzy ramen, and I can't wait to read all about it. I also liked the cautious approach in the Mir/San relationship. Good Sango is actually difficult to write and I think you're doing a fine job. Okay. I have to mention one thing. I apologize. I'm not here to nitpick grammar, just to enjoy your wonderful story, but you use "loose" when you should have used "lose" in one of the last paragraphs. I WILL rid the world of the "loose/lose" scourge one fanfic writer at a time! Ha ha! ::Swashbuckling leap from the chair:: (Thanks for writing!)
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Title: Incredible
Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 17:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again quillwing. This is one of your most adoring and dedicated fans. How are you doing? I hope you have been good. I can't begin to stress how incredible your stories are. Maybe one day you will consider to wirte more *hint hint*. I love the way you capture the mannerisms and characteristics of the inu gang perfectly. Your writing style and the way you word your fics are fantastic. I hope you will continue to write and that you shall always receive positive reviews from your fans. Please try to update your current fanfics as I am missing them especially Sachi. Always look on the bright side of things, and NEVER lose your inspiration. Yours truly, teddy bear.
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon (not signed in) On: June 24, 2006 19:58 PDT
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Cliffhangers seem to be my lot in life today...*sighs pathetically* I'm finally getting around to reading all the updates from stories on my favorites list, and so far all three of them leave off at a horrible spot! Is this 'be cruel to readers' month or something and I just missed hearing about it? LOL Ah well, at least the next update will be worth waiting for, I'm sure. And out of all thes stories I'm following right now, this is certainly a top contender for my favorite. ^_^ Keep up the wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 21:55 PDT
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i am so excited that you updated! wonderful chapter!! i love your story.. it's so unique! i haven't read one like it. at least kagome and inuyasha shared another moment alone. go miroku!! :o) i can't wait for them to actually admit they love each other!!! anyways, thank you for the update!! i hope you update soon! :o)
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 22:26 PDT
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lovely story! i am addicted. please please please update soon. i've fallen out of touch with inuyasha fanfics because i found them all too similar and cheesy. but this one is different. this one is creative and interesting, with just the right amount of sexual tension....which will hopefully lead to a steamy sex scene...tasteful of course....but hot none the less! i love the way you've brought in sango and i love that shippo is trying to get yasha and kagome together, it's so adorable and heartbreaking. i hope to see a father son scene sometime with inu and shippo, the little guy deserves some love. anyways, sorry for going on and on. love the story, please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 20:23 PDT
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I love this story YOU ROCK I can't wait till you update again I can't wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: Selenide88 On: June 16, 2006 14:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story, truly unique! I started reading 'Sachi' on AFF and I was quite taken with it back then! I'm so glad that I've found it once more on MM. You have a lot of talent, I really enjoy your style of writing! You depict your characters very well, they all still seem to be in character most of the time. Great work, I can't wait for your next update!! 'Til then, take it easy!!! -Selenide
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 12:55 PDT
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It's always so thrilling to me when I see you have updated one of your story's. Your very very good at building intrigue and mystery surrounding all your characters. As to my guess what exactly is going on in this story... I'm not certain I should probably go back and re-read the chapters you have already posted to make everything fresh in my mind. But the story is fascinating I am thrilled to see sango and equally thrilled to see her kick miroku's butt in shogi LOL! Kagome falling into the bath is kinda scary I am assume the water is near scalding because of someone turning up the boiler. But why? and why were the drying rags missing? ::ponders:: I'm not certain. Although it killed me to see kagome fall... what a little cliffy! there is so much going on in this story and we know so little as always can't wait for the next chapter hope your head is feeling better!
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Title: It's so good!
Reviewed By: whoknoez [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 02:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! I couldn't help but be amazed by your writing in BOTH your fics! They're both so good!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness (not signed in) On: June 15, 2006 21:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the sense you're giving the characters really helps to carry the story. You're doing an amazing job of keeping us from figuring out Kagome's past, I'm so in the dark. I love the interaction between Miroku and Sango and can't wait to see more of that. So I hope you update soon!
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Title: cynbad146 again
Reviewed By: ch 9 additional review On: June 15, 2006 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do want to add that all the characters seem to be in a state of mind to escape something from the past, denial, or just plain hiding. I get the feeling that Sango is searching for Kagome possibly, or as assasin for something evil this way comes. Something evil is definitely coming our way. Love the K/I relationship development. It carries a LOT of feeling... Guess I've said enough. I will quit typing now. Thanks for listening/reading. Cynbad146
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Title: ch 9
Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: June 15, 2006 20:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmmmm. You want to know my "impression" of the characters or what I "sense" about them all. Let me leap way out on this limb. I am wondering (or sensing) if they all have been involved in some past castastrophe, of which some may not remember all, or possibly separately involved; and things are coming to a head again, regardless. Throw in some unavoidable but familiar sexual attraction, angst, and hilariouty (word? oh well, it's a word now)and you have one fabulous story. They all seem in character to me, though the setting is OC; you may clarify otherwise later. Actually, your characters (or story) conveys what they feel, very, very well. I liked Shippo and Miroku plotting. I noticed that Kagome realized she knew about Kanji and Youkai healing from her past. The steamy bath/fix the pipe scene was . . . steamy! It was so well written that it seemed like freeze frames of instant sexual attractions and reactions, with the following dominoe effects between K and (shirtless)I. Evil, evil cliffhanger. I will not survive a month wondering about that. Nice scene with M and S. Fantastic job Quillwing717. Keep going!!!! Cynbad146
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