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| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 › » ] | Title: Thank God!!!!
Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 20:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Jumps up and down madly and sings a giddy song* Thank you quillwing. You finally updated. I'm so happy. You have no idea how you made my day. Even though school just started down here in Jamaica, I'm getting stressed already, but I'm determined to do my best. Anyways, loved the chapter and the sexual tension (as usual). I could do with a kiss though *hint hint*, but I dont want to rush genius. Take your time, but not too much time. I loved the way you wrote it and yes, everything flowed and the POVs were perfect. Kinda hoping you can make the chapters a little longer though. Im a fast reader so they kinda, you know, end fast. LOL. I dont want to be a burden, but I've forgotten what citrus is. Would you mind writing the meaning of it at the end of your next chapter??? That would help me a lot. It's the only one I'm unsure of. Anyways, thank you for updating and I hope you do it again soon. A little R and R with your stories, once in a while, will be great at this stressful time. That includes Waiting On A Wish. I love that one too. Again, I hope you update soon and never lose your inspiration and your confidence. I hope everything goes well for you in school and that you do great. Hope to write another review soon. Bye.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 19:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know its hard being able to update on a regular basis, but I was so excited to see that you were finally able to update...Oh, you have no idea lol. And a most excellent chapter. The POV's were great. To me anyways. Loved all the interaction between the two. Kagome's not as blind as Inu wants her to be, and he isnt very good at hiding things as he used to be, lol. This is great. Just love all the sexual tension and the mischievousness of a small kitsune, lol. Poor Shippo just keeps it up, lol. And when/how/will Miroku ever find out the name of the mysterious female hes so infatuated with? Should be an interesting trip to town for 'pipes', lol. Great chapter to an equally awesome story. I very much look forward to your next update, but you can only do some much in a day, so update when you can. :D
| Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 18:14 PDT
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A new chapter! I'm more thrilled than you'll ever know, because today at work I swear I was about to go through fanfiction withdrawal, LOL...I haven't been able to find anything new to ready lately that's actually good. So when I got home and saw that you'd updated, I was so rediculously happy! And boy, did I get what I'd been missing in nearly every other story I've tried to read lately...probably more than I needed! If you load this story with anymore sexual tension, my computer is going to explode. Or I am! But hopefully you won't make me wait much longer for the next chapter, right? I thought your POVs were very good, and I enjoyed getting to see the whole awkward situation from both of their points of view. And the scene at the end with them playing a game together (after his determination NOT to - but you know when they are that determined not to do something, they are always foiled in the end) was too cute! I can't wait for more, especially after your notes at the end of the chapter! So write more as soon as you can, please! Who needs sleep? ^_~
| Title: Ch 10
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 16:30 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i couldn't recall what happened last chap, so i reread the relevant part of ch 9 (a summary would be helpful for future readers should you have the time/inclination). anyway, very well done, I read everything except one paragraph which was a little boring. but it's not often that i pretty much read every word in a fanfiction. also, something u may have left out, is kagome noticing her wet, almost transparent shirt. tonikaku, look forward to the next chap as always, ja ne!
| Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 15:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so much easier to review after they changed things here. I glad to see this again, I was wondering what happened after the incident with the mens bath. I liked the way things panned out though. Nicely done. I'm curious to see why Sango came to the area, was she sent by the people that had Kagome shot and dumped. I hope some of the mystery around our favorite characters will start to unravel soon. Until next time
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a while since you updated, it's nice to see your story is has the fire it started with! Good job, keep it up!~ B reading U!
| Title: trin
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 14:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome! want more!
| Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 13:33 PDT
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love the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
| Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 08:08 PDT
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loves the story...u have to update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 21:38 PDT
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Congratulations, this story has been nominated for Best "In Character" Fiction at the Feudal Association for your characterization of InuYasha. Voting continues until the 22nd of September and membership to the group is open! Feel Free to join us! http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com ~Dark Avenger (aka The Daimyo)
| Reviewed By: lemon-lover On: August 10, 2006 18:48 PDT
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really enjoying this fic
| Title: Just love it!
Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen - not signed in On: August 09, 2006 03:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for next update, you are amazing Quill, I just love your work. So tell me (whispers) is Sango an assasin??? she's not *really* on vacation, is she? ok ok I'll try to be good and be patient ^-^
| Reviewed By: HTrisha On: August 03, 2006 01:20 PDT
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Keep writing!!! I love your stories. They're so refreshing and original. I hope you update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 31, 2006 22:30 PDT
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Man!!! I got so excited thinking there was a new update that I about gave myself a cramp in the arm while trying to click the mouse fast enough to check the last listed chapter. (LOL!) Guess you should never rush an Arrr-tistt'. I am definitely a big fan of this story. Anyway, I decided to reread said chapter in case you made big changes. Your work is the best ever. Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: AnonymousInu On: July 31, 2006 18:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading fics here for the past few years, and decided it was time to start leaving reviews...finally. >.>'' Well, anyway, as obvious as this may be, this is my first review ever, and I'd just like to tell you, that I fell in love with your story! It's one of my absolute favorites! Your writing is superb and I always look forward to a new chapter (although, somewhat impatiently...). You really do give the characters life and draw your readers into the story. Well, me anyway! But I'm more than sure its the same for many others. :) Really, really really, thank you for writing!
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