| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelickagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 19:48 PDT
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i love this story! don't worry so much about the POV's not working out, because they're great. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: September 09, 2006 20:35 PDT
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Gah! it cut out my whole review ; ; here's what i was supposed to say in a nutshell: I can't wait for the action to start, and keep up the good work XD!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: September 09, 2006 20:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just started reading your story, love it! =) but still, theyre moving irritatingly slow
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Reviewed By: InuyashaChic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 12:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on! Speed it up fast! I'm dieing here! This story is awesome! I know I sound like a retard but I'm a strong believer of Inu/Kag relationships :D They make such a cute couple (Inuyasha supplys the cute part love the ears!) anyway uddate soon I want to read on!
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is REALLY good so far! ^_^ I'm enjoying the plot immensly! Oh, and you said something about some one else looking over it? Would you like a beta? Unless you already have one that is. If so, please feel free to email me. :D
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Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 03:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was recommended to me by a friend, and I'm so glad I listened! I'm hooked, when I should really be writing on my own stuff. But oh well, right? It's awesome, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 00:30 PDT
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yay an update! i thought this chapter was pretty good and inuyasha's pov was good and detailed. He's also showing more of his male side haha viewing kagome and I loved the part where she's checking him out and he's all smug. goood job! looking fwd to the next one. heeehee it's all so cute
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 19:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was fine, stop worrying yourself. It was a really good chapter; not a bad way to spend your day playing hooky ^_^ And you shouldn't be worried about the citrus at all; you're did a great job with it in "Waiting on a Wish". Maybe you should play hooky more often; you know Monday is Labor day ~grins mischievously~
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 13:07 PDT
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really great chapter... point of views are fine so no more worrying : )
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Reviewed By: berlynn On: September 07, 2006 06:31 PDT
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love this story im actually in gemany right now as an exchange student but its definitely not going to stop me from reading cant wait for the next chapter!
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Title: WOOHOOO
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 23:40 PDT
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So very glad you updated,finally :) I love this story and don't worry about the citrus, we'll accept whatever you got. Yessss, I'm glad you'll speed things up cause they need to up it up a level. Hey, are you going to get them to get Inu to go to the Winter Festival, I think that'll be a great place for a lime. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Happy Writing
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Reviewed By: angelgabe On: September 06, 2006 23:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story so far. I think the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome is coming along nicely but the one between Sango and Miroku should pick up the pace a little. Plus Kagome's memories are coming back a little too slow and in snatches that don't really seem relevent or at least lead to more relevent things. For instance doing something that triggers a memory and opens the flood gates for more memories. Even a momentary trickle would be nice. 10 chapters and it looks more like a really good romance between Inuyasha and Kagome with a side of Miroku and Sango instead of a the mystery/romance that it seemed to start out as. I don't really see any of what you've already written as useless or ok to cut out but maybe you could shorter a few things? or make them more condensed? Other that that, I think that the writing style is great and the content is smooth and easy to read. Keep up the good work and I hope you update more quickly next time. I can't wait!
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Title: alatero (nsi)
Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 22:27 PDT
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I'm sooo happy you updated! I love this story so much! And everything flowed beautifully! I hope you update soon, but good luck with school!
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Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: September 06, 2006 22:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made my day with the new chapter. I was so glad to see it. Your skills at describing the effects on their senses and surroundings, during strong emotional scenes, is amazing. I almost feel like I am in the room with them. This is a good step past the usual "really enjoyed the story." It is almost sensory overload. To go along with this point, my favorite line was "sensory chaos." (Correct?) I am also enjoying hearing more of InuYasha's sensory and feelings. Most stories do not explain his thoughts and reactions as well as this story. You suprised me with the direction you took in the 'save her from the hot bath' scene. No outguessing you. Thank you ever so much! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 21:35 PDT
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Yippee!!! I'm so glad you updated - what fun! Looking forward to next time!
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