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Reviewed By: Langus On: November 25, 2006 20:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wasn't too sure what to expect when I stumbled upon your fanfic on MediaMiner. I must say though, I've been pleasantly surprised by your incredible talent. You handle words like you were born to write and you make me forget that this is a fanfic. In many ways it could be just another book that I've picked up off the shelf at the bookstore. If you haven't considered publishing any original work I would strongly suggest you look into it. You have a gift so please don't let it go to waste. As far as your story, it is by far one of the best fanfics I have ever read. You know how to keep the reader involved with each storyline and you leave us wanting more. I especially enjoy the originality of the story. You've taken the characters and somehow made them your own but I don't mind at all. I love the way you've portrayed each of them, particularly Miroku and Shippo. My only complaint is that you take quite a while between updates. I understand that this is necessary for you and well worth the wait but it's absolutely killer to those of us who are dying to know what happens next. Please keep this story going and in the mean time I will look forward to reading your other works. Thanks and good luck! -Langus
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Reviewed By: brsm On: November 25, 2006 01:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, an amazing story. Keep up the good work, i can't wait until the next chapter comes out, and to find out what happens to kagome and inyasha. Is the mysterious woman in town sango? I wonder what she's doing in town. I'm intrested to see how this all plays out. Kepp the chapters coming!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 07:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh this is such a good story, please continue to write and update i eagerly look forward to the next chapter. You have a talent for bringing the best out of your characters. keep up the good work.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Chase65 On: November 13, 2006 20:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can words adequately describe just how awesome your writing is? NO, but I'll try. Vividly descriptive, edge-of-my-seat, I-can-picture-everything, I want MORE! The story plays out at just the right pace, and the POV's are great. No trouble following the story line. After reading all the chapters back to back, the story (so far) has been obsessively playing in my head. Until the next chapter, I will definitely check out your other stories. Thank you for sharing your immense talents! Oh yeah...bring on the citrus - I'm sure you'll do more than fine!
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 19:33 PST
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please continue this story, i've been reading it and re-reading it. I desperately want to finish this story, so I hope you continue this soon. I will always be patiently waiting for the next chapter. So please continue. Thank you for reading this comment. I hope you finish this story soon. Happy writings and a merry muse.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 02:05 PST
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Update soon please, I'm waiting to see how you'll get Inu to that Winter's Festival and I need to know what Sango is being all mysterious about. What is her reason for being in town and does it have anything to do with hurting Kagome?
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 02:26 PDT
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*sigh* I just read the whole story over again...so good!! can't wait for the next update! oh I think you did a good job with the POVs
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Reviewed By: Crystal2220222 On: October 21, 2006 14:42 PDT
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I really enjoy your stories, I've been reading all of them. I must say I am impressed with your skill. You have a great way of describing things in enough detail that the readers can form an image in their head without going so far into detail to drive the readers crazy. Your ideas are also very interesting. The story is written in such a way that you feel satisfied things are moving along, but its not so fast it feels fake. Example, "Oh hi my names Kagome. *2hours later* That was great sex!" Yeah its an exageration, but not much of one for a lot of the stories posted. Anyway I just wanted to say that I hope you find the time to write the chapters and finish your stories because I know I for one would be very disappointed if I never got to see the end of these very intriguing stories.
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 02:35 PDT
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I love your story so far. I think it is well written and can't wait to find out what happens next
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Reviewed By: Gryffin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 10:59 PDT
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I really enjoyed reading your story. I think you did a fantastic job abd should update soon. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 00:18 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh! I love the fic! I really hope that you didn't abandon it and that you will update soon)) It is amazing how you make such god impersonalisations of the characters! Please update!))
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 12:11 PDT
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Your artwork has won an award from the Feudal Association! Your award can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2006awards/Best-In-Character-1st. jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: ficfan7 (logged out) On: September 17, 2006 02:17 PDT
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this chapter was awsome, i started to think you had abandoned this fic, but man was it worth the wait! i have read alot of fics, most of them are have a good enjoyment factor but are usually lacking in flow and have the definite feel of a "novice" writer. even though they usaully are fun to read, they just leave you feeling incomplete, but i am very glad to say that your fic is a definite exception to this case. not only has this fic had an exceedingly good enjoyment factor but it has the feel of a real story as if written by a professional writer and even though every chapter leaves me with great anticipation of the next one, they also give a sense of completeness. anyway your fic is wonderfull and i cant wait for the next chap!!!
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 19:02 PDT
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I really love this fic. It is well paced and written and I'm really looking forward to seeing the characters continue to develop and grow. The relationships and the way you've writted them are fresh and intriguing. Can't wait to fing out more about everyone's past. You've kept things so mysterious. Thanks for the fic! ~fute
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 02:19 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story of yours, its very well written. But damn, Inuyasha is fustrating, he knows hes falling for her as is to him. But at least hes coming little by little. So I hope you update soon and keep up the good work.
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