| "Sachi" Reviews/Comments [ 535 ] |
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 12:34 PST
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All I can say is FINALLY hahaha I've read this entire story three times over hoping for another update. That being said, it was WELL worth the wait. This chapters was just great. You have the characterization so well down it's to the point where I can actually picture the characters speaking your words. I guess that's the whole point but you do it well. And finally, a kiss! I was really hoping he'd give in and kiss her again before he left but he's a stubborn bugger eh? Anyhoo....thank you for this amazing chapter and I really sincerely hope it won't be another three long and agonizing months before you update again :) I just don't think I can wait that long!
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Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 12:04 PST
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OOoo!! Qwill!! What delight to get notification for this chappie, and OCD or not, it was fabulous. Was moving closer and closer to the screen thinking 'he's going to give in?? he's going to go... there?' Very potent first kiss, I must say. Now, do we need to buy a casket for Shippou? I just KNOW he's going to be kitsune flambe`, once Inu's head clears.
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 11:50 PST
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Well I think thta my parents thought that I broke my leg or something, because it was one damn loud scream that I gave when I received the notification of the update. I'm so happy that you managed to finally finish this chapter! I really like how you described the kiss scene, it was very good, you could've cut the tension there with a knife. It actually astouns my the way your characters interact. They look so real. I tend to forget that it's a fanfic I'm reading. Very well done! And I hope that the next update won't take you so long)) Cheers!
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 13:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hooray! I found this story again! So so loved it when I first read it, and now I shall Fav it so I don't forget it again. Your writting style is wonderful, you write the characters IN character which is rather astounding considering this is an AU . I too miss updates, but will stick by this in hopes you update it. Again, Thank You for this original and enjoyable fic!
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: sashangelwings On: January 16, 2007 17:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love reading this story. It is truly one of my favorites and i stand on pins and kneedles waiting for you to finish this story. It makes me sad when you don't update in a while but i understand being a writer myself how life and the creative processes can slow things down quite a bit. Anyway i hope to read the next chapter. your fan sashangelwings
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Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 07:11 PST
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I've been checking your story a lot to see if you had updated at least one chapter. But nothing yet. I really love this story. Especially the way Kagome is changing Inuyasha and bringing love into his life. Can you please update?
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 01:50 PST
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I've been checking periodically to see if you updated and still nothing yet :( I absolutely love this story and where it's going. You do have a gem here, maybe you start with how Kagome is going to convince Inu on going to that Winter thingy or maybe have a Sango interlude so we can learn more about why everything about her is a mystery. Hope to read something from ya soon
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Reviewed By: amhor56 On: December 27, 2006 21:53 PST
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Hope you had a Merry Christmas! I know I did. But you know what would make my Christmas spirit soar higher than the moon? If you could update. I am simply in love with your story. One of my favorites. I love the tone. I love the words you used to descibe events. I love the length. I love the characters. I love the emotions. I love the mysteriousness. I love the suspence. I love the passion. And most of all I love the author. I just hope you update soon. Your story has more than potential, it has greatness.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: December 26, 2006 18:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just checking in to see if you have updated lately. I miss this story. I am sooo spoiled. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Chiyome On: December 25, 2006 07:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love this fanfic. please continue it!
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Title: plz!!
Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 13:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay..i know the last time u updated wuz in september and its december now....but PLZZZ!! try 2 write the next chapter...i cant wait 2 see how their relationship developes *cries* plz plzp lzplzplz u said u were working on it and the anticipation of waiting is driving me up the wall!!!!!
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Title: Waiting
Reviewed By: Sophus On: December 18, 2006 11:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, and I am waiting for next chapter! I can not wait pretty much longer! What is your reason for not for not writing it finish? Shame on you ;) !! I love the story very very much!
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 18:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 18:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good. +]
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 11:47 PST
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i like this story, its well written, flows nicely and has a good feel..one problem though...WHY HAS IT BEEN SO LONG SINCE U HAVE UPDATED IT? lol, i can't wait to read more
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